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This is an amazing story it really shows a lot of detail to all the character involved and it doesn't just revolve around Naruto and Sasuke.I don't know how to explain but this is a amazing story
This is top 2 if not the best and well written fan-fic i have read on webnovel. I love how in depth the author goes with the fights, and the characters.
I simply love this work and I have nothing else to say to express how amazing this is and I hope that you would complete this work even it takes years I love it and I hope you can complete it In my heart the status of this novel in naruto is of same status of hp method of rationality in harry potter
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Amazing work but is it dropped? I'm waiting for a new chapter like crazy and I just saw the zero chapter... What's up with that? Thank you your work, keep it up
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Great story read it. Highly recommend. ❤️❤️❤️❤️🤌❤️❤️🤌❤️❤️🤌🤌❤️❤️❤️🌚🌚❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😁❤️❤️🤌🌚🤔❤️❤️🌚🌚❤️❤️❤️❤️🌚🌚❤️❤️🤌👍👍😁😆😅😆😁❤️❤️❤️🌚
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Hi while I get that preventing the resurrection of Kaguya is a priority. it also prepares our hero for the next level of power which is the Ōtsutsuki level. now by off chance she isn't getting resurrected what will happen when Kinshiki Ōtsutsuki, Momoshiki Ōtsutsuki & toneri Ōtsutsuki visit the elemental nation. they will not be ready for them as Ōtsutsuki members are beyond Kage level. there will be a lot of casualties.
the entire Uchiha clan was wasted. how weak your imagination is. in your fik, all adults are just complete idiots. this only makes it sadder to read this cal. instead of stretching your psychological monologue, you would write something really interesting, and at least a little logical.
mc is a reincarnated person that Acts like a child ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Incredibly good, solid on all fronts, would recommend to anyone, don't be deceived by the chapter amounts, they are VERY long so you've got a lot to read.
good story, the only bad thing is the power levels and some fights. Google translator........................................................................
Je vais écrire en français. L'intention est bonne mais sincèrement je n'arrive pas à accompagner. Il ya trop d'informations. Après 3 chapitres je ne sais encore pas qui est le personnage principal. Il semble que c'est Naruto et sa sœur jumelle est un Oc. Mais c'est un peut confu. Il ya vraiment trop d'informations. Je lirai peut être après quand j'aurai un peu de temps à perdre. En fait je. Crois pas que soit m'a taxe de thé les fan_fic qui son trop sombre. Bem on verás bien. Sde toute manière félicitations à l'auteur vue qu'il n'est pas facile d'être écrivain.
This is the best Naruto fanfiction I have ever read. It's different from the other fanfictions with perfect mc that can do anything and have seemingly no challenges along the way.Also additional points for not following the cannot and making your story unique.
I can't see the potential of this novel……okay……I can't see anything in this novel...................................................,.....................
Simply bad, there's no point reading this story, the MC is useless, his sister is an useless OC who brings nothing to the story. The author can't stick to one Perspective to save his life, seriously when the author change between 1st and 3rd perspective every two sentences it's a clear sign to drop the story...
1 year time skip for nothing? He's doing nothing for what he intended to do to prevent Uchiha Massacres. By reaching out to Itachi. 😅😅😅😅 Poor Itachi. What a pity. I know because you were so lazy so there is no major change for the entire plot. But, instead of that, you were ruining everything for that forced drama.
a lot of great stuff about this story. character development, emotionally and physically. unique perspective, positive changes to the storyline. deviating from the plot. long chapters and good updating speed. but I still can't say this is a favorite fanfic of mine yet. I feel there is a balance needed and this story is on the opposite end of what normal fanfics seem to be. this is driven by character development and drama and not action and plot. which I like but I think there is a balance and this story seems to focus more on development than pushing the plot forward. it overshadows everything. lessons learned, relearned, and evolved seems to be the main focus. The action scenes seem to only be there to learn a lesson. and the author likes throwing sticks in front of the MC to trip him up a bit too often, it can become stale and a bit forced. But even so this story is worth the read. its emotionally stimulating and its nice having such long chapters to read.
What's the uploading schedule for this? ..................................................................................................................................................
i really like the story thats why im giving it 5 stars, but its better to tell others thats its not "reincarnation" as he is back to being just naruto without any thing else. But still a good story.
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Honestly I'm impressed with how well the author has managed to convey emotion. Let alone being one of if not the best Naruto FF, it's one of the better written pieces of literature I've read on this app. A lot of authors of the fan fics I've read haven't really managed to flesh out already written characters this well. Giving us a somewhat realistic view into the minds and emotions of what people in a society is super powered assassin's constantly at war would look like. Taking these well known and beloved characters and seeing what it would be like behind the rose tinted shonen anime glasses. Really love the snark and the comedy as well, and a huge kudos from a fellow LOTR fan, love all the little references you pepper in throughout. 10/10 would recommend
At first I thought it was too depressing... Which it was, but the more I read the better it got. It had a comedy tag which I didn't find in the first 10 chapters... But after that it became funnier and funnier. And the length of chapters is nothing to scoff at... The character build up is also very good and realistic.. Infact, so realistic that it was like reading a real life story of someone broken into something strong... So, overall it is one of, if not the best Naruto FF I've ever read... Goodluck to the author for the good work and keep it up till you finish it... 🤟🤟🤟
Simplemente dejaré mi reseña y me iré, no es mi taza de te está historia simplemente me deja un mal sabor de boca el echo de que al mc lo traten como un muñeco de práctica en cada pelea
Best Naruto fanfic out there lots of character development, realistic changes from cannon and his actions affect the world as well and enemies adapt
man your writing is that good maybe so this is best naruto fanfiction I ever read. Thanks for it .............................................................
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This is an amazing story it really shows a lot of detail to all the character involved and it doesn't just revolve around Naruto and Sasuke.I don't know how to explain but this is a amazing story
This is top 2 if not the best and well written fan-fic i have read on webnovel. I love how in depth the author goes with the fights, and the characters.
I simply love this work and I have nothing else to say to express how amazing this is and I hope that you would complete this work even it takes years I love it and I hope you can complete it In my heart the status of this novel in naruto is of same status of hp method of rationality in harry potter
me encanta, no se porque esta tan desvalorada [img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
Amazing work but is it dropped? I'm waiting for a new chapter like crazy and I just saw the zero chapter... What's up with that? Thank you your work, keep it up
Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update!
Great story read it. Highly recommend. ❤️❤️❤️❤️🤌❤️❤️🤌❤️❤️🤌🤌❤️❤️❤️🌚🌚❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😁❤️❤️🤌🌚🤔❤️❤️🌚🌚❤️❤️❤️❤️🌚🌚❤️❤️🤌👍👍😁😆😅😆😁❤️❤️❤️🌚
wow....just wow wow....just wow wow....just wow wow....just wow wow....just wow wow....just wow wow....just wow wow....just wow wow....just wow
Hi while I get that preventing the resurrection of Kaguya is a priority. it also prepares our hero for the next level of power which is the Ōtsutsuki level. now by off chance she isn't getting resurrected what will happen when Kinshiki Ōtsutsuki, Momoshiki Ōtsutsuki & toneri Ōtsutsuki visit the elemental nation. they will not be ready for them as Ōtsutsuki members are beyond Kage level. there will be a lot of casualties.
the entire Uchiha clan was wasted. how weak your imagination is. in your fik, all adults are just complete idiots. this only makes it sadder to read this cal. instead of stretching your psychological monologue, you would write something really interesting, and at least a little logical.
mc is a reincarnated person that Acts like a child ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Membuka SPOILER Incredibly good, solid on all fronts, would recommend to anyone, don't be deceived by the chapter amounts, they are VERY long so you've got a lot to read.
good story, the only bad thing is the power levels and some fights. Google translator........................................................................
Je vais écrire en français. L'intention est bonne mais sincèrement je n'arrive pas à accompagner. Il ya trop d'informations. Après 3 chapitres je ne sais encore pas qui est le personnage principal. Il semble que c'est Naruto et sa sœur jumelle est un Oc. Mais c'est un peut confu. Il ya vraiment trop d'informations. Je lirai peut être après quand j'aurai un peu de temps à perdre. En fait je. Crois pas que soit m'a taxe de thé les fan_fic qui son trop sombre. Bem on verás bien. Sde toute manière félicitations à l'auteur vue qu'il n'est pas facile d'être écrivain.
This is the best Naruto fanfiction I have ever read. It's different from the other fanfictions with perfect mc that can do anything and have seemingly no challenges along the way.Also additional points for not following the cannot and making your story unique.
I can't see the potential of this novel……okay……I can't see anything in this novel...................................................,.....................
Simply bad, there's no point reading this story, the MC is useless, his sister is an useless OC who brings nothing to the story. The author can't stick to one Perspective to save his life, seriously when the author change between 1st and 3rd perspective every two sentences it's a clear sign to drop the story...
1 year time skip for nothing? He's doing nothing for what he intended to do to prevent Uchiha Massacres. By reaching out to Itachi. 😅😅😅😅 Poor Itachi. What a pity. I know because you were so lazy so there is no major change for the entire plot. But, instead of that, you were ruining everything for that forced drama.
a lot of great stuff about this story. character development, emotionally and physically. unique perspective, positive changes to the storyline. deviating from the plot. long chapters and good updating speed. but I still can't say this is a favorite fanfic of mine yet. I feel there is a balance needed and this story is on the opposite end of what normal fanfics seem to be. this is driven by character development and drama and not action and plot. which I like but I think there is a balance and this story seems to focus more on development than pushing the plot forward. it overshadows everything. lessons learned, relearned, and evolved seems to be the main focus. The action scenes seem to only be there to learn a lesson. and the author likes throwing sticks in front of the MC to trip him up a bit too often, it can become stale and a bit forced. But even so this story is worth the read. its emotionally stimulating and its nice having such long chapters to read.
What's the uploading schedule for this? ..................................................................................................................................................
i really like the story thats why im giving it 5 stars, but its better to tell others thats its not "reincarnation" as he is back to being just naruto without any thing else. But still a good story.
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Honestly I'm impressed with how well the author has managed to convey emotion. Let alone being one of if not the best Naruto FF, it's one of the better written pieces of literature I've read on this app. A lot of authors of the fan fics I've read haven't really managed to flesh out already written characters this well. Giving us a somewhat realistic view into the minds and emotions of what people in a society is super powered assassin's constantly at war would look like. Taking these well known and beloved characters and seeing what it would be like behind the rose tinted shonen anime glasses. Really love the snark and the comedy as well, and a huge kudos from a fellow LOTR fan, love all the little references you pepper in throughout. 10/10 would recommend
At first I thought it was too depressing... Which it was, but the more I read the better it got. It had a comedy tag which I didn't find in the first 10 chapters... But after that it became funnier and funnier. And the length of chapters is nothing to scoff at... The character build up is also very good and realistic.. Infact, so realistic that it was like reading a real life story of someone broken into something strong... So, overall it is one of, if not the best Naruto FF I've ever read... Goodluck to the author for the good work and keep it up till you finish it... 🤟🤟🤟
Simplemente dejaré mi reseña y me iré, no es mi taza de te está historia simplemente me deja un mal sabor de boca el echo de que al mc lo traten como un muñeco de práctica en cada pelea
Best Naruto fanfic out there lots of character development, realistic changes from cannon and his actions affect the world as well and enemies adapt
man your writing is that good maybe so this is best naruto fanfiction I ever read. Thanks for it .............................................................
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In my opinion this is the best written Naruto fanfic period.