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After reading this naruto novel you look at other Naruto novels differently. They will all look like garbage. The character description in this novel hits different. The emotions come across as real. Really Good novel thanks author.
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A bit heavy at times but really well thought and writen...............................................................................................
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Very good character development, and detailed plot progression. There are some forced emotional BS stuff that I wish the MC will just get over now, but we will see how it goes. Ino being a possible romance target is also nice since she is best girl.
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Unbelievable gem this novel is I have read tons of naruto fanfic and this THIS GEM of novel is best of the best No stupid system no god no wish ALELUYA This novel show how smart characters are How they think like real people For the love of all that is holly DONT DROP IT
I recommend This fic for everyone. It has good plot and u feel like charecters of this fic are alive. Conversations and motivations - great!
This is, by far, the best fanfiction I have ever read. Just sox chapters in a d I'm completely invested. The way emotions are convated is incredibly crafted. This is so great that it's worths watching the while naruto series just too understand what's going on.
very long and detailed story with a lot of different elements that work well together. Story is very interesting so far and defently worth the read, keep it up author!
One of the best Naruto fanfiction. ............................................................................................................................................
I've been reading novels for over 10 years and I can say from all my experience this is the best naruto fanfic. Like other books, the main character does not strengthen in a ridiculous way, the story progresses so well that if it continues in this way, it may be even more successful in my mind than the main story. the most beautiful part is that the chapters are very long, the most beautiful benefit of this is the perspective of different characters and the ability to tell very well the childhood that is not rushed and the events that cause it to get stronger. Also, this is the first time I've come across a writer who understands such a beautiful character like Hiruzen so well. Other fanfictions always see hiruzen as evil and selfish, but I don't think these fictions have studied the manga and anime in detail. I especially recommend them to watch the filler episodes. There are many positive aspects to write more, but it would be nicer for you to read them further than my writing. I congratulate the author from here, I hope he never loses his inspiration and I want him to spare some space for the sakura character. he's always been an outcast character in all the stories but then i'm waiting for a book about one piece from you and please nami and robin pass as romantic interest
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Let's start how great this fic is... I mean I do not know how to tell, this is great! A most well written Naruto Fanfiction I've pleasure to read thus far! The reason you may ask? Well: Conversations: 10/10 there is no awkwardness, if not talking about the madness of Naruto. Writing Quality: 10/10 It is great! Stability of Updates: 10/10 For a fic who had such long chapters, update stability surprisingly fast. Story Dev: 10/10 I will say, just read it, you'll understand. Char Design: 11/10 I'll say, the author got me with this. This character development is awesome! World Background: 9/10 I'll give you 10 stars nonetheless; I dunno why, I just feel like something a little missing about that. Yet, it does not bother me. I just realized while thinking about this. PLEASE CONTINUE! I KNOW IT IS HARD TO WRITE, BUT I REALLY LOVED THIS FIC!
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Loveee itttt. Is it going to be naruto x rin? If so, then good. If not, then please do so......................................................
HOW IS THIS NOT NUMBER ONE RANKING , This is just too good , i opened it by chance but got hooked so hard! More chapters and don't drop please ❤️❤️
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Read this book on fanfiction.net and loved it. Just one thing. Is this really going to be a harem story? I thought you of all wouldn't follow that trope? Considering your other harry potter fanfic has a single love interest.
This, to be honest is the best Naruto fan fiction I have ever read. It is simply stunning, it is also a comedic masterpiece. The depth of emotion and the interactions between the characters are beautifully written. Quite often when you read the typical fanfic it glosses over the formative years of Naruto’s life and skips straight to academy graduation with very little to no actual detail about what he does. Or the other most common trope of a 5 ish chapter long training montage that starts when he is two and just spams shadow clones. As of chapter 18 my honest opinion on this fanfic has no rival of similar length on this platform. Thank you author for this beautiful story and good luck with all future chapters
I really appreciate your writing style, you flesh out the story very well. You give the whole Story a nice, but also realistic rendition around the Reincarnation theme, with all that entails. I also like the details around beeing a Ninja and real life consequences around the killing and the after effects. I hope you keep writing this Novel =)
Loved it on Ao3, been waiting for updates You can literally feel the increase in quality of writing if you compare the first and the latest chapter. Hope for more updates [img=recommend]
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I want to truly thank you for writing this story it is an amazing novel. it's not one of the. best fan fics I have read it is The Best naruto fanfiction I have read you think through how the people would think you go around doing everything great I wish I could write like you
After reading this naruto novel you look at other Naruto novels differently. They will all look like garbage. The character description in this novel hits different. The emotions come across as real. Really Good novel thanks author.
Firs tought after reading the summary:........................................................................................................................
A bit heavy at times but really well thought and writen...............................................................................................
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Very good character development, and detailed plot progression. There are some forced emotional BS stuff that I wish the MC will just get over now, but we will see how it goes. Ino being a possible romance target is also nice since she is best girl.
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Unbelievable gem this novel is I have read tons of naruto fanfic and this THIS GEM of novel is best of the best No stupid system no god no wish ALELUYA This novel show how smart characters are How they think like real people For the love of all that is holly DONT DROP IT
I recommend This fic for everyone. It has good plot and u feel like charecters of this fic are alive. Conversations and motivations - great!
This is, by far, the best fanfiction I have ever read. Just sox chapters in a d I'm completely invested. The way emotions are convated is incredibly crafted. This is so great that it's worths watching the while naruto series just too understand what's going on.
very long and detailed story with a lot of different elements that work well together. Story is very interesting so far and defently worth the read, keep it up author!
One of the best Naruto fanfiction. ............................................................................................................................................
I've been reading novels for over 10 years and I can say from all my experience this is the best naruto fanfic. Like other books, the main character does not strengthen in a ridiculous way, the story progresses so well that if it continues in this way, it may be even more successful in my mind than the main story. the most beautiful part is that the chapters are very long, the most beautiful benefit of this is the perspective of different characters and the ability to tell very well the childhood that is not rushed and the events that cause it to get stronger. Also, this is the first time I've come across a writer who understands such a beautiful character like Hiruzen so well. Other fanfictions always see hiruzen as evil and selfish, but I don't think these fictions have studied the manga and anime in detail. I especially recommend them to watch the filler episodes. There are many positive aspects to write more, but it would be nicer for you to read them further than my writing. I congratulate the author from here, I hope he never loses his inspiration and I want him to spare some space for the sakura character. he's always been an outcast character in all the stories but then i'm waiting for a book about one piece from you and please nami and robin pass as romantic interest
best naruto fanfiction I've ever read ........................................................................................................
Let's start how great this fic is... I mean I do not know how to tell, this is great! A most well written Naruto Fanfiction I've pleasure to read thus far! The reason you may ask? Well: Conversations: 10/10 there is no awkwardness, if not talking about the madness of Naruto. Writing Quality: 10/10 It is great! Stability of Updates: 10/10 For a fic who had such long chapters, update stability surprisingly fast. Story Dev: 10/10 I will say, just read it, you'll understand. Char Design: 11/10 I'll say, the author got me with this. This character development is awesome! World Background: 9/10 I'll give you 10 stars nonetheless; I dunno why, I just feel like something a little missing about that. Yet, it does not bother me. I just realized while thinking about this. PLEASE CONTINUE! I KNOW IT IS HARD TO WRITE, BUT I REALLY LOVED THIS FIC!
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Loveee itttt. Is it going to be naruto x rin? If so, then good. If not, then please do so......................................................
HOW IS THIS NOT NUMBER ONE RANKING , This is just too good , i opened it by chance but got hooked so hard! More chapters and don't drop please ❤️❤️
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Read this book on fanfiction.net and loved it. Just one thing. Is this really going to be a harem story? I thought you of all wouldn't follow that trope? Considering your other harry potter fanfic has a single love interest.
This, to be honest is the best Naruto fan fiction I have ever read. It is simply stunning, it is also a comedic masterpiece. The depth of emotion and the interactions between the characters are beautifully written. Quite often when you read the typical fanfic it glosses over the formative years of Naruto’s life and skips straight to academy graduation with very little to no actual detail about what he does. Or the other most common trope of a 5 ish chapter long training montage that starts when he is two and just spams shadow clones. As of chapter 18 my honest opinion on this fanfic has no rival of similar length on this platform. Thank you author for this beautiful story and good luck with all future chapters
I really appreciate your writing style, you flesh out the story very well. You give the whole Story a nice, but also realistic rendition around the Reincarnation theme, with all that entails. I also like the details around beeing a Ninja and real life consequences around the killing and the after effects. I hope you keep writing this Novel =)
Loved it on Ao3, been waiting for updates You can literally feel the increase in quality of writing if you compare the first and the latest chapter. Hope for more updates [img=recommend]
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I want to truly thank you for writing this story it is an amazing novel. it's not one of the. best fan fics I have read it is The Best naruto fanfiction I have read you think through how the people would think you go around doing everything great I wish I could write like you