MHA : The New Spider

LV 2

Infamous_Fitz

Sorry to say but I'm dropping this fanfic cause you unnecessarily buffed all of class 1 -A and , probably in the future you're gonna buff all the villains.And you gave deku a quirk for no reason if you just wanted to give him ofa

LV 2

SAGE

I like what you did for BNHA world your development of characters is more than good and more reasonable and how you clarification about UA work you make the world more real and open to anything new not from the story

LV 2

Giga_Weeb

breaks the one quirk rule and gives mc 3. Nevermind the spiderman .has 2 dozen sub-powers because thats not enough. one of them is armament haki (which sure enough is literally never used because it's a terrible power for creative writing! Literally have you ever read a non one piece fanfic where armament haki made sense or was ever used interestingly). One reasonable wish ROB's make the best stories.

LV 13

Paulo_D_Manoel

very good story, the spin that you did in the plot is amazing, pls continue! . . . .. . . .................jdhdhdhdhd

LV 5

Hassan_Hadi

Have poTential and is an intristing Idea

LV 4

Chirag_Mangla

u said uploading 2-4times week but it's been a month same with ultimate player. ....... .. . ...... ........... ........... ....,.........

LV 6

Henrique_Paiao

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LV 11

Huoyuhao

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LV 2

Endless_Suffering

Ima drop this for now and maybe change my review once you smooth out the chapters, cuz as of now there are so many unnecessary descriptions and repeating of the same things

LV 4

Bat09125

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LV 5

Clay_Champion

😭 Abandoned Novel........................................😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 It was fun while it lasted. Thanks for the novel tho.