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A very interesting read indeed, I found it to be a new concept in a System Genre, haven't read a novel like this still now. well-written characters and excellent story development. Way to go author. And one more thing. *Blooop!!!!* This is good.
(Read to chapter 42) It’s alright , the “synopsis’ is true but the ‘story’ isn’t. It’s basically a monsters on earth apocalypse novel. MC is op , time skips happen frequently. Lots of action, powers and other details are glossed over. The mist idea is interesting, I wish we got more ‘multiple transmigration’
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good story. i enjoyed it alot however i got lost. like there was some time skips and important personal information and relationships were just skipped. maybe make some fillers to add those in later but in general good. just dont forget to explain how he got there and not just assume it happened and everyone will understand.[img=recommend]
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hey, did you notice that? what? ah, little thing you see - when i read this novel i didnt see any plot. maybe it was lost between that timeskips? who knows.
This wasn't something I enjoyed and there are some insane levels of cringe. The novel focuses around skills etc, but within the first 15 chapters there is almost 4 months worth of time skips. During this period, many new skills were gained, but there is no introduction of them or any kind of description on what they do, just him suddenly activating a number of skills a few chapters later while mentioning he picked up a bunch of other skills that he might describe later, but probably doesn't. It just seemed like the story had no direction and was more like a diary/slice of life where nothing interesting happens. The world building was lacklustre. The characters introduced were all one dimensional placeholders. This novel was all over the place, which is a shame, because it looked like it had some potential.
This novel does not deliver what it promises. I was really excited at the prospect of multiple world line transmigration. But instead we got the regular old system that gives rewards for every unique monster killed. What was the point of meeting mage mc when all he get’s from him is 2 moves that in less then 10 chapters become mediocre. I was expecting his powers to develop through interacting with his other selves but now it’s just another system novel. I reas 75 chapters in total and there was no change to this so Im dropping it here.
So... like, the story basically fails it's starting premise. Ht idea of drawing upon different selves is a cool one, but that basically only happens once, with a single other self. After that, all his abilities come from doing the megaman, and they just feel... flavorless. Like, It could be spells, or chi, or psychic powers, or whatever... it wouldn't make a difference, because the powers don't feel like anything. They don't have any character. He could have a generic system, and it wouldn't make a bit of difference. World build is... something? The world doesn't actually make a lot of sense, it basically exists enough to make the main character look cool. The mist monsters occasionally talk about being chosen to replace man, but that element hasn't gone anywhere and has no payout. In the end, there was the beginning of an interesting idea here, but nothing was done with it, and it's left the story now really feeling like anything in particular.
grammar is awful, punctuations are lacking, spelling errors are as abundant as a field of flowers. some cringy moments .
Writting grammar is good. Easy to read Story starts out with presenting a plot for a fight for survival story with lots of power leveling arcs, and is instead a "im stronk tkme for slice of life" story. So do note its not what is advertised, it is pretty good though as slice of life in a not really poat apocalypse. The characters have honeatly gained access to amenities and other rhings far too easily. The big time skips honestly dont do the story any favors. Plenty of content to be had during those time points. Its honestly a shame the author didnt take the time to craft it out. Characters are noraml. Nothing really aticks out positively or negatively. World background is a slightly different take on an apocalypse wifh magic and monsters but doesnt really delve into it at all. Overall Id rate it a 6/10. Very average. Really needs a more thorough story board. As well, it also needs more fleshed out content. Time skips are not replacements to good plot.
Read up to chapter 16. The story is allright, nothing really stands out to me compared to similar stories. Would be a decent read for me to pass some time if it wasn't for the censoring of swear words. The near constant "*Bleep*" "*Bloop*" is jarring to read and immersion breaking. Have swearing in your story or don't, I don't care either way. If you choose to do so however, then just go all the way without the ridiculous censoring.
Absolutely amazing, one of the best books I have ever read. I am willing to spend money on this and continue doing so. Thank you to the author for creating this masterpiece.
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well the premise of being active in different dimensions at the same time should be confusing af if the story wasn't bland, so my fellow readers be the sacrifice wich ventures into the unknown and let us know, is it confusing? bland story beside multiple dimensions? just righ?
Lackluster. The chapters are monotonous, there are more dialogues and system prompts than actual storytelling. The worldbuilding is confusing. The author does not have a satisfying vocabulary, he keeps saying "the fog makes the world gloomy" every two chapters or so. Not worthy a read.
It wasnt bad but after around chapter 45ish some flaws popped up. The MC willingly accepts being used by the sanctuary to clean up THEIR problems even after they hid critical information from him. He even said himself he didn't expect to get anything after dealing with a threat no one else can deal with. The fact the mc is okay with being used like this is beyond me.
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The plot is really interesting and the characters are easy to understand. The author is careful to unveil this new world to the readers and I recommend this book to everyone. You will get hooked instantly.
This story has a bit of a rough start but after a couple chaps this story turned out to be really good. Looking forward to more chapters.
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Woah! This book has huge potential! This is a totally new trope! Very few grammar mistakes. An enjoyable read. I definitely recommend this book! You are a very good writer! keep making more chapter! looking forward to it!
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Writing quality: good grammar. Easy to read. Story development: A lot of action so far. Fast paced. Unlike the other stories, this story has an episodic feel to it Character design: lacks some depth to characters so far. It's like stock characters almost. Updating Stability: daily update of 1 chapter World background: can't tell so far
Your writing is good and I like the way you describe scenarios. Good job there. And I think if you work hard on it, it's going to be a great piece of work! Keep it up!
Transmigrating in many different worlds at the same time? its first time for me. Thats why its a must have in my Reading List😍 Btw, i like your Cover 😊
This feels like the classic Webnovel and I’m all for it! Although I do love a bit of switching it up, your work falls into the commercial type that is great for mass consumption. There isn’t much I can fault about your work. Keep writing!
I really like your story, however, if there is one thing I would like to say, it is that the story resembles many others. If you add something that might make it a unique story, then I am sure it will be a banger. Please take time to drop a review in my story as well, I started this week!
EXPEXPEXPEXPpp... Oh. Hey. It's Fries here. As the author, I am required by the law (of shamelessness) to leave a self-review. 4.6 / 5. Won't be perfect. But it will be completed. So yeah. Don't take this story too seriously. As the writer, I only have 2 goals: 1. Finish this book (5 volumes, 350 - 450 chapters total) 2. Enjoy the writing process. Have fun! Hope you like this story as well! Have a good time!
A very interesting read indeed, I found it to be a new concept in a System Genre, haven't read a novel like this still now. well-written characters and excellent story development. Way to go author. And one more thing. *Blooop!!!!* This is good.
(Read to chapter 42) It’s alright , the “synopsis’ is true but the ‘story’ isn’t. It’s basically a monsters on earth apocalypse novel. MC is op , time skips happen frequently. Lots of action, powers and other details are glossed over. The mist idea is interesting, I wish we got more ‘multiple transmigration’
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good story. i enjoyed it alot however i got lost. like there was some time skips and important personal information and relationships were just skipped. maybe make some fillers to add those in later but in general good. just dont forget to explain how he got there and not just assume it happened and everyone will understand.[img=recommend]
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hey, did you notice that? what? ah, little thing you see - when i read this novel i didnt see any plot. maybe it was lost between that timeskips? who knows.
This wasn't something I enjoyed and there are some insane levels of cringe. The novel focuses around skills etc, but within the first 15 chapters there is almost 4 months worth of time skips. During this period, many new skills were gained, but there is no introduction of them or any kind of description on what they do, just him suddenly activating a number of skills a few chapters later while mentioning he picked up a bunch of other skills that he might describe later, but probably doesn't. It just seemed like the story had no direction and was more like a diary/slice of life where nothing interesting happens. The world building was lacklustre. The characters introduced were all one dimensional placeholders. This novel was all over the place, which is a shame, because it looked like it had some potential.
This novel does not deliver what it promises. I was really excited at the prospect of multiple world line transmigration. But instead we got the regular old system that gives rewards for every unique monster killed. What was the point of meeting mage mc when all he get’s from him is 2 moves that in less then 10 chapters become mediocre. I was expecting his powers to develop through interacting with his other selves but now it’s just another system novel. I reas 75 chapters in total and there was no change to this so Im dropping it here.
So... like, the story basically fails it's starting premise. Ht idea of drawing upon different selves is a cool one, but that basically only happens once, with a single other self. After that, all his abilities come from doing the megaman, and they just feel... flavorless. Like, It could be spells, or chi, or psychic powers, or whatever... it wouldn't make a difference, because the powers don't feel like anything. They don't have any character. He could have a generic system, and it wouldn't make a bit of difference. World build is... something? The world doesn't actually make a lot of sense, it basically exists enough to make the main character look cool. The mist monsters occasionally talk about being chosen to replace man, but that element hasn't gone anywhere and has no payout. In the end, there was the beginning of an interesting idea here, but nothing was done with it, and it's left the story now really feeling like anything in particular.
grammar is awful, punctuations are lacking, spelling errors are as abundant as a field of flowers. some cringy moments .
Writting grammar is good. Easy to read Story starts out with presenting a plot for a fight for survival story with lots of power leveling arcs, and is instead a "im stronk tkme for slice of life" story. So do note its not what is advertised, it is pretty good though as slice of life in a not really poat apocalypse. The characters have honeatly gained access to amenities and other rhings far too easily. The big time skips honestly dont do the story any favors. Plenty of content to be had during those time points. Its honestly a shame the author didnt take the time to craft it out. Characters are noraml. Nothing really aticks out positively or negatively. World background is a slightly different take on an apocalypse wifh magic and monsters but doesnt really delve into it at all. Overall Id rate it a 6/10. Very average. Really needs a more thorough story board. As well, it also needs more fleshed out content. Time skips are not replacements to good plot.
Read up to chapter 16. The story is allright, nothing really stands out to me compared to similar stories. Would be a decent read for me to pass some time if it wasn't for the censoring of swear words. The near constant "*Bleep*" "*Bloop*" is jarring to read and immersion breaking. Have swearing in your story or don't, I don't care either way. If you choose to do so however, then just go all the way without the ridiculous censoring.
Absolutely amazing, one of the best books I have ever read. I am willing to spend money on this and continue doing so. Thank you to the author for creating this masterpiece.
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well the premise of being active in different dimensions at the same time should be confusing af if the story wasn't bland, so my fellow readers be the sacrifice wich ventures into the unknown and let us know, is it confusing? bland story beside multiple dimensions? just righ?
Lackluster. The chapters are monotonous, there are more dialogues and system prompts than actual storytelling. The worldbuilding is confusing. The author does not have a satisfying vocabulary, he keeps saying "the fog makes the world gloomy" every two chapters or so. Not worthy a read.
It wasnt bad but after around chapter 45ish some flaws popped up. The MC willingly accepts being used by the sanctuary to clean up THEIR problems even after they hid critical information from him. He even said himself he didn't expect to get anything after dealing with a threat no one else can deal with. The fact the mc is okay with being used like this is beyond me.
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Membuka SPOILER The plot is really interesting and the characters are easy to understand. The author is careful to unveil this new world to the readers and I recommend this book to everyone. You will get hooked instantly.
This story has a bit of a rough start but after a couple chaps this story turned out to be really good. Looking forward to more chapters.
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Woah! This book has huge potential! This is a totally new trope! Very few grammar mistakes. An enjoyable read. I definitely recommend this book! You are a very good writer! keep making more chapter! looking forward to it!
Well author, since ytou started. EEEXpexpexepepxpepzxppxpxexepxppxepxpexpexpEEXpexpexepepxpepzxppxpxexepxppxepxpexpexp EXP[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Writing quality: good grammar. Easy to read. Story development: A lot of action so far. Fast paced. Unlike the other stories, this story has an episodic feel to it Character design: lacks some depth to characters so far. It's like stock characters almost. Updating Stability: daily update of 1 chapter World background: can't tell so far
Your writing is good and I like the way you describe scenarios. Good job there. And I think if you work hard on it, it's going to be a great piece of work! Keep it up!
Transmigrating in many different worlds at the same time? its first time for me. Thats why its a must have in my Reading List😍 Btw, i like your Cover 😊
This feels like the classic Webnovel and I’m all for it! Although I do love a bit of switching it up, your work falls into the commercial type that is great for mass consumption. There isn’t much I can fault about your work. Keep writing!
I really like your story, however, if there is one thing I would like to say, it is that the story resembles many others. If you add something that might make it a unique story, then I am sure it will be a banger. Please take time to drop a review in my story as well, I started this week!
EXPEXPEXPEXPpp... Oh. Hey. It's Fries here. As the author, I am required by the law (of shamelessness) to leave a self-review. 4.6 / 5. Won't be perfect. But it will be completed. So yeah. Don't take this story too seriously. As the writer, I only have 2 goals: 1. Finish this book (5 volumes, 350 - 450 chapters total) 2. Enjoy the writing process. Have fun! Hope you like this story as well! Have a good time!