My Guardian System: The Trader

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TheNormalMan

This a really good novel Have a lot of potential ___________________________________________________________________________________________________

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The_Jack_Of_All

I really like the story so far i think it has a really good background good plot and has alot of potential to become a really good story i just need more chapters man lol

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Ronald_Ray

hey author do you mind actually writing on your old books because I'm sure people are getting tired of buying advanced chapters ( for such a large price) only for you to stop updating your novels thanks

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Rooky_AL

Its really good.

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Demosura

I will say the moment that the main protagonist started to reject equality was the moment I got interested in this story. Also if it helps, try to read your work to someone or say it outloud to yourself because there a few grammar mistakes. The mistakes do not effect the overall rating of the book for me. Thus I hope you update this novel and The mysterious black magician novel too because thos will be great to read more often. Thank you for writing these novels.

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haremphobic

I am the exp of my sword… Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood… I have created thousands of useless reviews… Unknown to authors, nor known to readers… Have withstood pain to create thousand of reviews… Yet these hands never type anything… SO I PRAY UNLIMITED EXP WORKS!

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Udit_Purohit

Very small chapters a d uploading is very very slow. Book is very nice story development and quality of writing is also great. +====+==++=+==+=+=+=+==+=++=++=+===

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IWillNotWriteAlot

This is so good, why is it so underrated!!! M It is way too good!!!!!!! You must read!!!!!!!!!!! Support author!!!!!!! Reject humanity, return to Monke!!!??

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Maryam_Fatima_9352

plzz author more chaps 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------_--__--_--__-__-_--__

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Maryam_Fatima_9352

one of the best novels but please author even 1 chapter a week you don't provide 😭 i feal this has potential to be a great novel just please upload more often and plz send mc back to school i relly wanna see everyones reactions 😇 author u best not have mc forgive the girl 😡

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Hermit_The_Frog

Do not be confused by this 3* I would have no problem recommending someone this book. Is this a "must read"? no I wouldnt say so. There are some key moments that the author kinda seems to skip over which leads to a kind of confusing plot and character development. However I wouldnt be surprised at all if this author was writing 4 or 5 star material by his next novel or even this one. He/she gets a lot of things right in my opinion. Heres more specific feedback 1. I wish I could see the character changing, instead of the end results. I kind of missed the specific moments where he evolves emotionally, then I get told later that it did. 2. The perspectives of the different characters do a lot here. Its completely underutilized in other novels and I cannot express how much I appreciate it. It helps me understand how the character is influencing the world around him. Thanm you author. 3. emotional extremes. kick him while hes down, hype him when hes supposed to win. While I think its been going fine so far, imo it could be taken a step farther. That one could totally be personal preference though.

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WolfVonLucifer

Its a good story, but very similar to “From common place to worlds strongest”. its fallows the same premice and plot to a t.

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Damned_liar

good story so far! hope this continues. It's not too cliche, and the starting plot is cool. The side characters are realistic. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

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Darkly_Plays

Hmm, I will add it to my library, and check it out when more chapters.

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Rooky_AL

amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing

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Joe_3031

can we agree that if a novel hasnt been updated in 7 months it shouldnt be suggested to you?

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Xtremecreep63

I would have preferred to see him actually get stronger to the point where he could have taken over the monsters himself. It's still a good read and really makes you want to see the MC get stronger

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Jawad_Bensalem

Dońt get fooled by the food rating I would avoid the story at all costs it is a diluted version of arifureta The writer is moving from arc to arc and keeping the reunion of the main protagonist without real reason

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itsBELLION

Great novel. Binged all 90 chap in one go. Please author update new chapter. Many are waiting for them. Story has great potential [img=recommend][img=update]

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BigNerdNasty

Slow paced and very insular. As with all novels, great potential but development is paced. Free chapters don't do it justice so don't be afraid to use a few coins.