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I love any story where Izuku is OP especially when he has a seven deadly sins power.
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Romance is having progress the carachter interaction is nice aswell, grammar is definetely better than 99% stories in this app. I had a good time reading it and definetely recommend it.
............................................................................................................................................ the story of the good but too many point of view changes and they're not even from the main character it's like everybody else's point of view besides him
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The story started pretty well, even the romance with momo as izuku savior, but after that the author handle the romance as a massive, unecessay, and illogical cringe, even adding hormones to make izuku more appealing which was 100% unecessary and it has nothing to do with escanor, he could instead just attributed this to his new appearance (izuku looks changed after getting the sun power), and overall super cliche, a cliche done bad on top, cringe at minimum.
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Le cringe. Story development 1 star Character design 1 star World background 2 stars Writing quality 4 stars Updating stability 4 stars The idea is good but execution is lackluster, some sentences sound weird and the actions of some characters don't make sense.
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The story mostly revolves around everyone and character development. It is fresh to the eyes. I hope readers do give this a try. I created this account just to make a review of this.
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Pretty good and must read if fan of BNHA. One thing is for sure Midoriya is not a carbon copy of Escanor and has his own problems to tackle. The harem doesn't grow too quickly and takes it's time. The POV of different characters is excellent too. Keep it up, author-sama.
Shameless self promoting editor here!! As I have already said before this is not my work but a friend of mine who is lazy to make an account here to post his work so I volunteered to post it basically I do 70% of work. Anyway there are probably small to zero mistake about spelling or grammar since I am using Grammarly Premium when I edit and proofread it and the story shouldn't be a problem since the author have made stories before, the only problem is as I have said earlier the author is soooo LAZY so he needs motivation to do work so please guys give him some motivation do continue this work if you like it. For those who don't like it, don't care, you're not welcome so go away shoo! lastly, constructive criticism is welcome, haters begone! Read our work because Escanor said so!!
I love any story where Izuku is OP especially when he has a seven deadly sins power.
Give it a shot. Get pass to the cheesy part and you will be fine. Give it a shot. Get pass to the cheesy part and you will be fine. Give it a shot. Get pass to the cheesy part and you will be fine. Give it a shot. Get pass to the cheesy part and you will be fine. Give it a shot. Get pass to the cheesy part and you will be fine Give it a shot. Get pass to the cheesy part and you will be fine.
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Romance is having progress the carachter interaction is nice aswell, grammar is definetely better than 99% stories in this app. I had a good time reading it and definetely recommend it.
............................................................................................................................................ the story of the good but too many point of view changes and they're not even from the main character it's like everybody else's point of view besides him
Membuka SPOILER The story started pretty well, even the romance with momo as izuku savior, but after that the author handle the romance as a massive, unecessay, and illogical cringe, even adding hormones to make izuku more appealing which was 100% unecessary and it has nothing to do with escanor, he could instead just attributed this to his new appearance (izuku looks changed after getting the sun power), and overall super cliche, a cliche done bad on top, cringe at minimum.
Membuka SPOILER Le cringe. Story development 1 star Character design 1 star World background 2 stars Writing quality 4 stars Updating stability 4 stars The idea is good but execution is lackluster, some sentences sound weird and the actions of some characters don't make sense.
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The story mostly revolves around everyone and character development. It is fresh to the eyes. I hope readers do give this a try. I created this account just to make a review of this.
Nice nice nice nice Nice nice nice nice Nice nice nice nice Nice nice nice niceNice nice nice nice Nice nice nice nice Nice nice nice nice Nice nice nice nice Nice nice nice nice Nice nice nice nice Nice nice nice nice Nice nice nice nice.
Pretty good and must read if fan of BNHA. One thing is for sure Midoriya is not a carbon copy of Escanor and has his own problems to tackle. The harem doesn't grow too quickly and takes it's time. The POV of different characters is excellent too. Keep it up, author-sama.
Shameless self promoting editor here!! As I have already said before this is not my work but a friend of mine who is lazy to make an account here to post his work so I volunteered to post it basically I do 70% of work. Anyway there are probably small to zero mistake about spelling or grammar since I am using Grammarly Premium when I edit and proofread it and the story shouldn't be a problem since the author have made stories before, the only problem is as I have said earlier the author is soooo LAZY so he needs motivation to do work so please guys give him some motivation do continue this work if you like it. For those who don't like it, don't care, you're not welcome so go away shoo! lastly, constructive criticism is welcome, haters begone! Read our work because Escanor said so!!