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I was missing out on this masterpiece🤩😍 Such an interesting and amazing book that it just made my boring day👌🏻 It’s really well written and very interesting to read!! Great job done by the author 👍🏻👏🏻
Woha, I did not read a horror type for a long time and this was good. So good...I highly recommend this one if you like to be frightened :) Thanks to the author for sharing such a good one with us.
Good story. the synopsis is intriguing and making me curious about the content. I just confuse with the character's dialogue, however, overall it is a good read.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
As a horror fan, I was blown away by this story. It's engrossing and beautifully written. So far, I'm in love with the characters and their development. This is an excellent book, and the author has done an excellent job.
I'm a huge fan of horror/thriller. II'm loving the book so far. The way the scenes are put into words, you can imagine every single bit of it. Author has a unique set of skills to make you feel like you're a part of the fiction. Fantabulous job!
I am a huge fan of horror and thriller, and reading your work, it gave me chills. You have a good book author. Keep writing and keep working harder.
This book is amazing... waiting for the next chapter is so so so hard... I seriously get so curious to know the later part... I surely recommend this book to everyone... this book really deserves a Rank... Big fan of yours Miss. Y. R. Novella.
Fascinating story, everything is good, the plot, the characters, everything ! It feels like you're actually in the story, good book, keep it up author ~
The story had a very similar plot and the turns were pretty expected from the first chapter itself. Being a horror lover, this story did not have anything gory of sought but talking about paranormal as well did not do well. Everything was pretty expected. What I really wished was for creativity and newness. The characters could have also been built deeper. You could have given point of view for each and every character because being only 5 we need to deeply connect With the character to feel and empathize for the character. There was no backstory or background of the characters which made it dull. You could have described the house stronger. Sorry for this rating but take it in a positive way. Best fo luck!!!
Wow!!! The cover page is stunning! Very mysterious and eye-catching. The climate reminds me of Roswell series... The plot of your story is intriguing, and the characters are interesting. You also nicely created the background of the action. Well done!
Best Novel for thriller lovers very unique piece of work.I thought novels were boring but after reading this my opinion is completely changed.Read it its worth it. Amazing,excellent,brilliant,fantastic mind blowing.
The story seems to start on a good note and actually seems to follow the route set by Arthur. I don't really like horror but it's a fun read overall
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
This book is kicking in excitement and thrill. The storyline and how words are crafted to each scenes boost my curiosity and I hooked me up! Reminded me of my fave Scooby-doo. Job well done! Highly recommended. ❤️
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email :Rebecca_661@outlook.com
The storyline is very interesting and synopsis very pull you to read the story. However I had a little problem reading it as quotation marks were missing in someplace. All the best and good luck.
The writing is ok, but I can't separate the dialogs from the narrative, i can't identify the change between characters and I cant understand what's happening. the story is good once you pay attention, but it's hard to tell. keep up, don't give up!
Will pull you in from Chapter 1! It's a beautifully written story that makes you feel like it's sucking you into the plot. Amazing writing and story line!
Interesting work. It takes courage to write a scary story and thumbs up. Please pay attention to some of the dialogues that are missing quotations other than that you doing good!
I can really feel the suspense building in this story as a I read! There are some problems with basic conventions that make this story a little tricky to read (especially in regard to quotations because us readers don't know who's speaking) but it's not like irredeemably horrible. On a brighter note, the plot is pretty interesting!! Keep up the good work author ^u^
A beautifully written novel which excites readers and pulls you along with the journey of its characters. There's no room for boredom, each chapter is a journey for the mind. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Wow!!!! Look at that cover. it screams spooky. loved the way the author describes each scene. Such an interesting read so far. im still at starting chapters But liking it so far
I really liked the character interactions, and I like the idea for the plot. I get the vibe that maybe the house is driving them insane and making them experience things that aren’t really there. I do wish there was a bit more detail but overall it’s solid.
Quite graphic. This is my first time reading this genre but i liked it. I felt like i knew the characters. The characters felt real too, especially in the dialogue. Nice👍🏻
Great story ! A very well written story so far and the plot line is very interesting! I’m intrigued to see what to happen next , a very good read
Wow! The synopsis had me hooked in. The paranormal stories are just my kind of thing. Live the initial chapters and is eagerly waiting for more.[img=update]
I’ve only just started reading this book and it made me chuckle a bit at the start but as i kept reading it made me attached to it I can’t stop its got the Scene thats painting a picture in my head. The book has great potential,Keep going 👍👍
Wow. This novel is awesome. I love the content, idea of the story, theme and the background of the story. A master piece. Keep it up author 💪💪💪💪👍👍👍
It's great how you put all the thrilling contents in every Chapter of your book, the writing skills are still lack of explaining I say but it's good, well done Author!!!
Hi! This is Molly, an editor from other platform. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in our platform. if you are interested in, Please reply to me. so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I was missing out on this masterpiece🤩😍 Such an interesting and amazing book that it just made my boring day👌🏻 It’s really well written and very interesting to read!! Great job done by the author 👍🏻👏🏻
Woha, I did not read a horror type for a long time and this was good. So good...I highly recommend this one if you like to be frightened :) Thanks to the author for sharing such a good one with us.
Good story. the synopsis is intriguing and making me curious about the content. I just confuse with the character's dialogue, however, overall it is a good read.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
As a horror fan, I was blown away by this story. It's engrossing and beautifully written. So far, I'm in love with the characters and their development. This is an excellent book, and the author has done an excellent job.
I'm a huge fan of horror/thriller. II'm loving the book so far. The way the scenes are put into words, you can imagine every single bit of it. Author has a unique set of skills to make you feel like you're a part of the fiction. Fantabulous job!
I am a huge fan of horror and thriller, and reading your work, it gave me chills. You have a good book author. Keep writing and keep working harder.
This book is amazing... waiting for the next chapter is so so so hard... I seriously get so curious to know the later part... I surely recommend this book to everyone... this book really deserves a Rank... Big fan of yours Miss. Y. R. Novella.
Fascinating story, everything is good, the plot, the characters, everything ! It feels like you're actually in the story, good book, keep it up author ~
The story had a very similar plot and the turns were pretty expected from the first chapter itself. Being a horror lover, this story did not have anything gory of sought but talking about paranormal as well did not do well. Everything was pretty expected. What I really wished was for creativity and newness. The characters could have also been built deeper. You could have given point of view for each and every character because being only 5 we need to deeply connect With the character to feel and empathize for the character. There was no backstory or background of the characters which made it dull. You could have described the house stronger. Sorry for this rating but take it in a positive way. Best fo luck!!!
Wow!!! The cover page is stunning! Very mysterious and eye-catching. The climate reminds me of Roswell series... The plot of your story is intriguing, and the characters are interesting. You also nicely created the background of the action. Well done!
Best Novel for thriller lovers very unique piece of work.I thought novels were boring but after reading this my opinion is completely changed.Read it its worth it. Amazing,excellent,brilliant,fantastic mind blowing.
The story seems to start on a good note and actually seems to follow the route set by Arthur. I don't really like horror but it's a fun read overall
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
This book is kicking in excitement and thrill. The storyline and how words are crafted to each scenes boost my curiosity and I hooked me up! Reminded me of my fave Scooby-doo. Job well done! Highly recommended. ❤️
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email :Rebecca_661@outlook.com
The storyline is very interesting and synopsis very pull you to read the story. However I had a little problem reading it as quotation marks were missing in someplace. All the best and good luck.
The writing is ok, but I can't separate the dialogs from the narrative, i can't identify the change between characters and I cant understand what's happening. the story is good once you pay attention, but it's hard to tell. keep up, don't give up!
Will pull you in from Chapter 1! It's a beautifully written story that makes you feel like it's sucking you into the plot. Amazing writing and story line!
Interesting work. It takes courage to write a scary story and thumbs up. Please pay attention to some of the dialogues that are missing quotations other than that you doing good!
I can really feel the suspense building in this story as a I read! There are some problems with basic conventions that make this story a little tricky to read (especially in regard to quotations because us readers don't know who's speaking) but it's not like irredeemably horrible. On a brighter note, the plot is pretty interesting!! Keep up the good work author ^u^
A beautifully written novel which excites readers and pulls you along with the journey of its characters. There's no room for boredom, each chapter is a journey for the mind. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Wow!!!! Look at that cover. it screams spooky. loved the way the author describes each scene. Such an interesting read so far. im still at starting chapters But liking it so far
I really liked the character interactions, and I like the idea for the plot. I get the vibe that maybe the house is driving them insane and making them experience things that aren’t really there. I do wish there was a bit more detail but overall it’s solid.
Quite graphic. This is my first time reading this genre but i liked it. I felt like i knew the characters. The characters felt real too, especially in the dialogue. Nice👍🏻
Great story ! A very well written story so far and the plot line is very interesting! I’m intrigued to see what to happen next , a very good read
Wow! The synopsis had me hooked in. The paranormal stories are just my kind of thing. Live the initial chapters and is eagerly waiting for more.[img=update]
I’ve only just started reading this book and it made me chuckle a bit at the start but as i kept reading it made me attached to it I can’t stop its got the Scene thats painting a picture in my head. The book has great potential,Keep going 👍👍
Wow. This novel is awesome. I love the content, idea of the story, theme and the background of the story. A master piece. Keep it up author 💪💪💪💪👍👍👍
It's great how you put all the thrilling contents in every Chapter of your book, the writing skills are still lack of explaining I say but it's good, well done Author!!!
Hi! This is Molly, an editor from other platform. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in our platform. if you are interested in, Please reply to me. so I can discuss this with you in detail.