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The author was very good at her writing skills, vocabulary and content were nicely scripted. Waiting for more chapters to come up! keep it up!
Delightfully creepy and full of exhilarating chills.A wild ride of an adventure with jaunty,believable characters.Definitely a must read ♥️♥️♥️♥️
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Blood Burning Blood. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/blood-burning-blood_19157009606618805
I liked how the author describes her scenes which makes you feel that you're actually the person in the story. The plot is also very interesting and I would continue reading this all the way. Hope to read more from you author!
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Great plot you have there author, the story is a chill even though I never get scared by fiction or horror movies, I got the depiction of the haunted house quite well, can't wait for the next chapter, the idea of the haunted house is a classic and I'd definitely love to read more, good job
Wow I love how how the plot is refined to my taste as a reader and how authentic the thrill is... The characters are in arguably typical which is great to us as readers..
This novel has an engaging plot and the execution has fluidity that propels to the next scene quite easily. In other words, it's easy to get hooked and go on reading. Keep on writing, author. All the best.
Great start! Although the dialogues kind of confuses mew where I don't know whether they are speaking or having an internal monologue, but I love where the story is going!! Good job author!!
Nice plot! Since the arrival at the mansion, it started giving me the creeps. It reminds me of The Haunting of Hill House. I was anticipating the next chapter. Keep it up!
One thing about the book is the mystery of the synopsis. It's an enticing and going by the message of the writer, I tell you, it's a must read. Get a seat and enjoy the author's fantasy.
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Interesting story! Quite intriguing and would appeal to readers looking for a scary adventure. Author needs to check for punctuation though. Give it a read guys and show some love!
Characters are amazing. I got hooked in this from the beginning. And u will experience some scary events here.😅..I am paranormal fan btw. And this one "it ROCKS!"❤ keep it up.
An amazing start to this new novel. Characters are a delight to read from the beginning, and they help draw you into the plot almost immediately. You can experience the fear and apprehension along with them as you travel through the chapters. I will be keeping on eye on this one.
I was truly intrigued just after reading the synopsis... as went further in the chapter it didn't fail to intrigue me even more. .... the author has done a good job with the plotline, characters and everything.... I am looking forward to read more[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is practically me and my friends when we're together! This book seems interesting...what they will encounter together and how will they react as a group or individually..can't wait for the next chapter.
😁😁😁I love love love it, regardless of the fact that it's just begun, I love it. The beginning, detailing, descriptions, they just knock you off your seat😁 love it.
Wow, the initial chapters are just wow , the book is just so interesting ans gives you the creep 😅.. I love the characters as well as the story title , because it says it all . " The wrong turn " 😅❤ keep it up 😊
The title itself is catchy. It will make you wonder what's in between those three dots 😅. Everything is good except for the first chapter at which it introduces the characters literally. I don't know maybe it's just my style XD. BUT THE STORY IS GOOD 💜
The writing can still be better, especially on conversations, but the I know the story plot will be good! Please continue writing, I'll be looking forward to your improvements!
I am a huuuge fan of horror/tgrilker novels, and you didn't disappoint. I love the interesting plot and how you built your characters. awesome job!
I love the title of your novel author. Its makes one wonder what is hidden in it and your style of writing is good as well. I just started reading and each chapter gets me more curious. Good work author
Nice start. The book has just started and i liked the initial chapters. The plot and characters appear to be appealing. Best of luck for the book.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I enjoyed reading the story and I keep laughing whenever I read the word 'Yaa'😁 but anyways, the book is good though it confused me of who's talking who. Maybe the author can make that clear soon, that's just my only criticism about this book. Come have a look at thia book! I love the thrill and how the story started😁 Keep it up! ❤❤❤
The plot is pretty good and the suspense seems thrilling enough to keep us entertained. Will definitely need to read more of it. I hope it gets creepier though because I love spooky stuff and I'm afraid am still waiting for even more scary parts. Also why is that mansion haunted I don't think you ever explained much about that
The author was very good at her writing skills, vocabulary and content were nicely scripted. Waiting for more chapters to come up! keep it up!
Delightfully creepy and full of exhilarating chills.A wild ride of an adventure with jaunty,believable characters.Definitely a must read ♥️♥️♥️♥️
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Blood Burning Blood. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/blood-burning-blood_19157009606618805
I liked how the author describes her scenes which makes you feel that you're actually the person in the story. The plot is also very interesting and I would continue reading this all the way. Hope to read more from you author!
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Great plot you have there author, the story is a chill even though I never get scared by fiction or horror movies, I got the depiction of the haunted house quite well, can't wait for the next chapter, the idea of the haunted house is a classic and I'd definitely love to read more, good job
Wow I love how how the plot is refined to my taste as a reader and how authentic the thrill is... The characters are in arguably typical which is great to us as readers..
This novel has an engaging plot and the execution has fluidity that propels to the next scene quite easily. In other words, it's easy to get hooked and go on reading. Keep on writing, author. All the best.
Great start! Although the dialogues kind of confuses mew where I don't know whether they are speaking or having an internal monologue, but I love where the story is going!! Good job author!!
Nice plot! Since the arrival at the mansion, it started giving me the creeps. It reminds me of The Haunting of Hill House. I was anticipating the next chapter. Keep it up!
One thing about the book is the mystery of the synopsis. It's an enticing and going by the message of the writer, I tell you, it's a must read. Get a seat and enjoy the author's fantasy.
Membuka SPOILER Interesting story! Quite intriguing and would appeal to readers looking for a scary adventure. Author needs to check for punctuation though. Give it a read guys and show some love!
Characters are amazing. I got hooked in this from the beginning. And u will experience some scary events here.😅..I am paranormal fan btw. And this one "it ROCKS!"❤ keep it up.
An amazing start to this new novel. Characters are a delight to read from the beginning, and they help draw you into the plot almost immediately. You can experience the fear and apprehension along with them as you travel through the chapters. I will be keeping on eye on this one.
I was truly intrigued just after reading the synopsis... as went further in the chapter it didn't fail to intrigue me even more. .... the author has done a good job with the plotline, characters and everything.... I am looking forward to read more[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is practically me and my friends when we're together! This book seems interesting...what they will encounter together and how will they react as a group or individually..can't wait for the next chapter.
😁😁😁I love love love it, regardless of the fact that it's just begun, I love it. The beginning, detailing, descriptions, they just knock you off your seat😁 love it.
Wow, the initial chapters are just wow , the book is just so interesting ans gives you the creep 😅.. I love the characters as well as the story title , because it says it all . " The wrong turn " 😅❤ keep it up 😊
The title itself is catchy. It will make you wonder what's in between those three dots 😅. Everything is good except for the first chapter at which it introduces the characters literally. I don't know maybe it's just my style XD. BUT THE STORY IS GOOD 💜
The writing can still be better, especially on conversations, but the I know the story plot will be good! Please continue writing, I'll be looking forward to your improvements!
I am a huuuge fan of horror/tgrilker novels, and you didn't disappoint. I love the interesting plot and how you built your characters. awesome job!
I love the title of your novel author. Its makes one wonder what is hidden in it and your style of writing is good as well. I just started reading and each chapter gets me more curious. Good work author
Nice start. The book has just started and i liked the initial chapters. The plot and characters appear to be appealing. Best of luck for the book.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER I enjoyed reading the story and I keep laughing whenever I read the word 'Yaa'😁 but anyways, the book is good though it confused me of who's talking who. Maybe the author can make that clear soon, that's just my only criticism about this book. Come have a look at thia book! I love the thrill and how the story started😁 Keep it up! ❤❤❤
The plot is pretty good and the suspense seems thrilling enough to keep us entertained. Will definitely need to read more of it. I hope it gets creepier though because I love spooky stuff and I'm afraid am still waiting for even more scary parts. Also why is that mansion haunted I don't think you ever explained much about that