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I am gonna give myself a cheeky 5 stars as it is my own fanfic :) this is a fanfic inspired by The Immortal Mutant Teen by AinzOolGown0601 (one of my favorite novels on this site) and My Hero Academia. I hope you enjoy it and I'm always open to suggestions. Please do review and comment your thoughts throughout the chapters.
Pity this story was dropped I was looking forward to it aswel. Hopefully in the future the author comes back I definitely enjoyed it aโlot so far. Would recommend reading + this the first โimmortalโ mc that started wayyy back in the past in mha that Iโve found.
author just have to ask is this dropped if not or if you ate just taking a break please keep writing I beg you it is impossible to find great fanfiction like this one of the best I read sadly only had 15(?)-16(?) Chapters called "danmachi: return of the ace" and it was amazing please author you are a great writer please continue๐๐งโโ๏ธ
love this fic, and i can't wait for the next chapters if there are any coming, hope he willenroll in ua as a teacher or something not as a student, that would be out of place
Has the novel been dropped or is this just an extended break? I need more!! ๐ฅฒ hdhdjdjdjdhdbhdhxhchhdbdgxhxuxhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhxhdhxhxhxhxr
Everything about the novel is awesome however the frequency of release wuhuhuhuh Its freaking months for each update I believe based on this the novel will take years to finish author give us your loyal and adoring readers a happy new year will yah?.
Is the main character a 600 year old unit or a 14 year old boyish hero overpowered Mc.๐คฎ...............................................................................................
It is kind of good. ^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^ โโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโ
In 8 months you have 19 chapters and also if mc is hundreds of years old being immortal wouldn't there be one or two religions or have been documented by the church because under their perspective they had a evil immortal man or at least a old wise tale and if he was on that island for hundreds of years as time progressed i'm sure they outside world would have come there before and seen it and if they were killed by mc trying to see it the people would certainly send more people seeing it weird the last people who they sent didn't come back or somehow nobody outside the island has been there in hundreds of years and no one has bought the island to use for anything and to the outside world its just land nobody looking for land has bought said land and the government hasn't come to the island in hundreds of years either i mean if someone came to the island hearing no one can leave the government would think of him as a tyrant
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I hate hypocrites, probably deserves around a 3 star but hypocrytes get 1, Mc has 0 hesitation to kill innocent kids but he hesitates to kill allmight, Mc is basically a dude that hated all villains while liking the people who are basically a reflection of the church he hated so much, church kills you for being a threat to humanity, quirk society turns you into a villain for having a quirk that doesn't look or function "heroicly"
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this should be an anime lol ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I have read the chapters that have been uptate till today (chapter 17), and I can say that I really enjoyed what I had read, and expect that the author will be able to continue this. [img=recommend]
Just the idea Makes me Go insane with exitement :D I am all for it!! 5 stars ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ PLUS IT PROBABLY HAS TO DO WITH ME LISTENING TO "STORYTELLER" LOVE THE BEAT OOGOFODJDHCHFDHCCNDN HYPE OVER 9000!!!
So, I'm once again way too lazy to write a proper review. The Novel is decent. Not amazing but not bad. I'm skeptical about the direction this novel is heading but it doesn't seem too bad. Overall, it's worth a read, and I'm certain you can spend 10 minutes of your time to see if it's worth continuing to read or if it's gonna be forgotten in the vast abyss of countless other novels that have been dropped. Also here is a random GIF of a cute walking meat bag, kinda making me hungry ngl.
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Honestly, it was good until chapter 10. The MC was pretty cool but he suddenly became childish, he is over 600 years old and he just gets angry because he has been compared to a slaver (a misunderstanding). The thing that made me stop is when he suddenly adopts random girls as one of those Japanese isekai beta protagonists. I mean, itโs so clichรฉ, why add OC like that to a story that has already well developed characters, I never understood that in the stories I read. Often itโs like this after: adopted girls want the MC to train them, he refuses, they make him puppy eyes, he accepts. And itโs like that for all their demands to the point where we wonder if the MC isnโt just a f*cking slave.
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Just wow like Idee+Story and the potential of this fanfic is huge. I rly hope the Author dosenยดt drop this for some stupid reasons. Everything els so far is top notch and i hope the Author keeps the rate of the updates up.
Just curious, is this fanfic inspired by โThe Immortal Mutant Teenโ novel and if so, please donโt be inspired by the authors release rate ๐คฃ
I am gonna give myself a cheeky 5 stars as it is my own fanfic :) this is a fanfic inspired by The Immortal Mutant Teen by AinzOolGown0601 (one of my favorite novels on this site) and My Hero Academia. I hope you enjoy it and I'm always open to suggestions. Please do review and comment your thoughts throughout the chapters.
Pity this story was dropped I was looking forward to it aswel. Hopefully in the future the author comes back I definitely enjoyed it aโlot so far. Would recommend reading + this the first โimmortalโ mc that started wayyy back in the past in mha that Iโve found.
author just have to ask is this dropped if not or if you ate just taking a break please keep writing I beg you it is impossible to find great fanfiction like this one of the best I read sadly only had 15(?)-16(?) Chapters called "danmachi: return of the ace" and it was amazing please author you are a great writer please continue๐๐งโโ๏ธ
love this fic, and i can't wait for the next chapters if there are any coming, hope he willenroll in ua as a teacher or something not as a student, that would be out of place
Has the novel been dropped or is this just an extended break? I need more!! ๐ฅฒ hdhdjdjdjdhdbhdhxhchhdbdgxhxuxhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhxhdhxhxhxhxr
Everything about the novel is awesome however the frequency of release wuhuhuhuh Its freaking months for each update I believe based on this the novel will take years to finish author give us your loyal and adoring readers a happy new year will yah?.
Is the main character a 600 year old unit or a 14 year old boyish hero overpowered Mc.๐คฎ...............................................................................................
It is kind of good. ^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^ โโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโโโฟโ
In 8 months you have 19 chapters and also if mc is hundreds of years old being immortal wouldn't there be one or two religions or have been documented by the church because under their perspective they had a evil immortal man or at least a old wise tale and if he was on that island for hundreds of years as time progressed i'm sure they outside world would have come there before and seen it and if they were killed by mc trying to see it the people would certainly send more people seeing it weird the last people who they sent didn't come back or somehow nobody outside the island has been there in hundreds of years and no one has bought the island to use for anything and to the outside world its just land nobody looking for land has bought said land and the government hasn't come to the island in hundreds of years either i mean if someone came to the island hearing no one can leave the government would think of him as a tyrant
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Membuka SPOILER ...................................................................................................................................................
I hate hypocrites, probably deserves around a 3 star but hypocrytes get 1, Mc has 0 hesitation to kill innocent kids but he hesitates to kill allmight, Mc is basically a dude that hated all villains while liking the people who are basically a reflection of the church he hated so much, church kills you for being a threat to humanity, quirk society turns you into a villain for having a quirk that doesn't look or function "heroicly"
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
รลพasnรฉ pokraฤuj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!รลพasnรฉ pokraฤuj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!รลพasnรฉ pokraฤuj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!รลพasnรฉ pokraฤuj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!รลพasnรฉ pokraฤuj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!รลพasnรฉ pokraฤuj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!รลพasnรฉ pokraฤuj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this should be an anime lol ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I have read the chapters that have been uptate till today (chapter 17), and I can say that I really enjoyed what I had read, and expect that the author will be able to continue this. [img=recommend]
Just the idea Makes me Go insane with exitement :D I am all for it!! 5 stars ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ PLUS IT PROBABLY HAS TO DO WITH ME LISTENING TO "STORYTELLER" LOVE THE BEAT OOGOFODJDHCHFDHCCNDN HYPE OVER 9000!!!
So, I'm once again way too lazy to write a proper review. The Novel is decent. Not amazing but not bad. I'm skeptical about the direction this novel is heading but it doesn't seem too bad. Overall, it's worth a read, and I'm certain you can spend 10 minutes of your time to see if it's worth continuing to read or if it's gonna be forgotten in the vast abyss of countless other novels that have been dropped. Also here is a random GIF of a cute walking meat bag, kinda making me hungry ngl.
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Very good......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Honestly, it was good until chapter 10. The MC was pretty cool but he suddenly became childish, he is over 600 years old and he just gets angry because he has been compared to a slaver (a misunderstanding). The thing that made me stop is when he suddenly adopts random girls as one of those Japanese isekai beta protagonists. I mean, itโs so clichรฉ, why add OC like that to a story that has already well developed characters, I never understood that in the stories I read. Often itโs like this after: adopted girls want the MC to train them, he refuses, they make him puppy eyes, he accepts. And itโs like that for all their demands to the point where we wonder if the MC isnโt just a f*cking slave.
Membuka SPOILER .................................................................................................................................... .................................................................. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
Just wow like Idee+Story and the potential of this fanfic is huge. I rly hope the Author dosenยดt drop this for some stupid reasons. Everything els so far is top notch and i hope the Author keeps the rate of the updates up.
Just curious, is this fanfic inspired by โThe Immortal Mutant Teenโ novel and if so, please donโt be inspired by the authors release rate ๐คฃ