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la historia esta muy buena, hay buenas ideas y todo, lo único que tengo para criticar es la emisión y el contenido de los capítulos ha sido deficiente y según veo esta novela ya lleva tiempo lo que podria significar una posible caida o hiatus?, bueno solo es una posibilidad. en cuanto a las idea del autor acerca de la pareja o parejas, no veo nada malo en utilizar personales principales, igual se eligen por algo, en realidad lo importante en la historias para harem es que el no recoja mujeres por capricho y que haya una unión real de la relacion dando fuerza a la relacion, si se cumple no importa cuantas tenga
If i have to describe this story in a single sentence it would be "The perfect definition of Overpowered MC". Cool - Check, Powerful - Check, Looks - Perfect and above all not a hypocrite that only spouts nonsense hero stuff. It may not be what the original story had in mind but it is a perfect origin story (sort of) in its own way. Good work.
En los 3 primeros capitulos, te meten a un mc cruel despiadado, que vivió mas de 600 años matando sin distinción si eran vuenos o malos, solo lo mataban porque entraban a la carcel, luego sale de la carcel se vuelve un beta mc que si es heroe no lo mata aunque lo ataque a matar,si es villano lo mata, luego esta como tonto queriendo pensar con la polla, buscando un harem.
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Not that good, average grammar where you could find mistakes, updates are slow, MC is being a wannabe edge lord, there are so many different things in the plot which makes you think that the author hasn't even read the anime itself, literally not that good. I don't think it's really worth reading this as I can barley understand how the **** MC knows things as he's not capable of knowing.
Membuka SPOILER
This is really interesting and i really like the story so far, i think Styxx is really cool and i can’t wait to read more about him and his new cat girl daughters.
If you really want a gritty, rational MC then don't read this. Read at best the first 3 chapters and then go to a different book, the MC is immature; having no similarity to a man who's lived for hundreds of years. He's irrational, impulsive, unhinged and blatantly stupid. He takes in 3 fucking furry loli's who he has no fucking use for or obligation to help. It's pretty fucking disappointing since the MC that was described from chapter 1-3 is so fucking cool but then it becomes a basic fucking isekaitard who does shit for people for no fucking reason whatsoever.
For a guy over 600 years old this is some of the worst self controll ive ever seen and for that in droping it. their are too many Times he cant controll himself like cmon
Such a unique idea definitely worth the five star rating. Keep up the good work cause i dont want this to be dropped. Tho it is fast paced it has a lot of potential
I love how it started and how the mc changed through a whole 300 years of torture,killing,pain,boredom,and now he is finally getting into the plot of my hero academia,so please keep it up I love this story please.
very good novel based on mha and very powerful mc[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Before I read, thought I might as well give this just for the synopsis, loved it! Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah “NANI❗️‼️⁉️❓” Lol
Amazing writting, a very good plot and a very well written OC. Keep those chapters going hot body. I really do not want you to drop this. REEEEEEEE.
Damn, so far(ch10) it's good. (′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)
Your grammar is not bad but you are making a bunch of simple mistakes like saying someone's name and not using him or her later to refer to that person but instead saying their name/title again. Go read some history with better grammar than yours and see what you are doing wrong, believe me, it helps.
This is a must read!! Quality is amazing and the development feels really smooth. World background is nicely done and character design is thought out and well executed. The story is fast paced, yes, but it's super well written despite that, and even more, it seems to bring this excitement or anticipation with every chapter's end. You just wanna read more. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter and I really do believe that this fic deserves the good ol' star review. God damn I hope this doesn't get dropped.
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Love your story man hope you keep it up but dont release to hasty. Quality over quantity.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
as long as there is no harem, this is 5 stars, however if this is a harem, then the whole story is trash, however now it is good so yeah, just letting you know
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i like this story but i don't know the stability of updates but i can't wait for more plz continue posting and i'll try to continue reading tho its hard with how many books i'm reading of all types but like like like and i'll probably give power stones [so long as i see this well i'm doing my daylee power stone pass out and don't forget this story].
Not many chapters have been released at the time of this review, but so far it seems to be a well done fanfic and has an interesting concept that I haven't seen done in an mha fanfic before, only problem is slow updates but the author has said not to complain about that so not much can be done.
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Love it! No need for more explanation. Kinda sad that it only has 14 chapters as of now. Hope that author-san uploads on a regular!
la historia esta muy buena, hay buenas ideas y todo, lo único que tengo para criticar es la emisión y el contenido de los capítulos ha sido deficiente y según veo esta novela ya lleva tiempo lo que podria significar una posible caida o hiatus?, bueno solo es una posibilidad. en cuanto a las idea del autor acerca de la pareja o parejas, no veo nada malo en utilizar personales principales, igual se eligen por algo, en realidad lo importante en la historias para harem es que el no recoja mujeres por capricho y que haya una unión real de la relacion dando fuerza a la relacion, si se cumple no importa cuantas tenga
If i have to describe this story in a single sentence it would be "The perfect definition of Overpowered MC". Cool - Check, Powerful - Check, Looks - Perfect and above all not a hypocrite that only spouts nonsense hero stuff. It may not be what the original story had in mind but it is a perfect origin story (sort of) in its own way. Good work.
En los 3 primeros capitulos, te meten a un mc cruel despiadado, que vivió mas de 600 años matando sin distinción si eran vuenos o malos, solo lo mataban porque entraban a la carcel, luego sale de la carcel se vuelve un beta mc que si es heroe no lo mata aunque lo ataque a matar,si es villano lo mata, luego esta como tonto queriendo pensar con la polla, buscando un harem.
Ok._... /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// ///////
Not that good, average grammar where you could find mistakes, updates are slow, MC is being a wannabe edge lord, there are so many different things in the plot which makes you think that the author hasn't even read the anime itself, literally not that good. I don't think it's really worth reading this as I can barley understand how the **** MC knows things as he's not capable of knowing.
Membuka SPOILER This is really interesting and i really like the story so far, i think Styxx is really cool and i can’t wait to read more about him and his new cat girl daughters.
If you really want a gritty, rational MC then don't read this. Read at best the first 3 chapters and then go to a different book, the MC is immature; having no similarity to a man who's lived for hundreds of years. He's irrational, impulsive, unhinged and blatantly stupid. He takes in 3 fucking furry loli's who he has no fucking use for or obligation to help. It's pretty fucking disappointing since the MC that was described from chapter 1-3 is so fucking cool but then it becomes a basic fucking isekaitard who does shit for people for no fucking reason whatsoever.
For a guy over 600 years old this is some of the worst self controll ive ever seen and for that in droping it. their are too many Times he cant controll himself like cmon
Such a unique idea definitely worth the five star rating. Keep up the good work cause i dont want this to be dropped. Tho it is fast paced it has a lot of potential
I love how it started and how the mc changed through a whole 300 years of torture,killing,pain,boredom,and now he is finally getting into the plot of my hero academia,so please keep it up I love this story please.
very good novel based on mha and very powerful mc[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
pppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfffffffffffffffffffeeeeeeeeeeeeeeecccccccccccccccccccctttttttttttttttttt..............perfect 👍
Before I read, thought I might as well give this just for the synopsis, loved it! Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah “NANI❗️‼️⁉️❓” Lol
Amazing writting, a very good plot and a very well written OC. Keep those chapters going hot body. I really do not want you to drop this. REEEEEEEE.
Damn, so far(ch10) it's good. (′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)(′ʘ⌄ʘ‵)
Your grammar is not bad but you are making a bunch of simple mistakes like saying someone's name and not using him or her later to refer to that person but instead saying their name/title again. Go read some history with better grammar than yours and see what you are doing wrong, believe me, it helps.
This is a must read!! Quality is amazing and the development feels really smooth. World background is nicely done and character design is thought out and well executed. The story is fast paced, yes, but it's super well written despite that, and even more, it seems to bring this excitement or anticipation with every chapter's end. You just wanna read more. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter and I really do believe that this fic deserves the good ol' star review. God damn I hope this doesn't get dropped.
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Love your story man hope you keep it up but dont release to hasty. Quality over quantity.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
as long as there is no harem, this is 5 stars, however if this is a harem, then the whole story is trash, however now it is good so yeah, just letting you know
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i like this story but i don't know the stability of updates but i can't wait for more plz continue posting and i'll try to continue reading tho its hard with how many books i'm reading of all types but like like like and i'll probably give power stones [so long as i see this well i'm doing my daylee power stone pass out and don't forget this story].
Not many chapters have been released at the time of this review, but so far it seems to be a well done fanfic and has an interesting concept that I haven't seen done in an mha fanfic before, only problem is slow updates but the author has said not to complain about that so not much can be done.
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Love it! No need for more explanation. Kinda sad that it only has 14 chapters as of now. Hope that author-san uploads on a regular!