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MC is so op that it became trash... especially the "fated to die skill" it made every fight trash cus he can kill anyone below his level and bellow with a thought an they have NO chance of evading it. AND WHY IS HE GETTING ALL THESE OP SKILL FROM THESE YOUNG SPIRIT BEAST. IN conclusion TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH KEEP UP THE TRASH WORK.
Your story is amazing. I love how you’ve managed to keep him overpowered but not disgustingly so. The whole can break the world at or before spirit sage type thing just gets really old. I love how detailed you get with your story because it reallly lets us have that big sense of satisfaction of getting to know the person without netting in real life. I unfortunately am also living with my parents and just driving my siblings around daily so I don’t earn money, other wise I would have given you powerstones. I will reserve the 2 I get daily for free to you though. Sorry I can’t do more. You and your story deserve it. Thank you for writing this story and I wish you my sincerest gratitude for your work and luck in everything else you do at life. Thank yo.
bro....please continue to write the story...it being a while i get to read a piece of fanfic and manage to not be disgusting ....👉🙋🏻♂️🙋🏻♂️🙋🏻♂️🙋🏻♂️
Pretty easy to predict what this story will be like. Mc is a useless trash on earth gets Reincarnated with perks and some power then his personality goes from scared/cautious to extreme Arrogance within a short period of time. this could be a story about the Ye family or the lin clan for the similarities to other stories.
idk what the Author thinks ... everything is a mess ... just BS in full display..... GARBAGE 🗑️🗑️🗑️
one of my favorite douluo dalu story I have read it 3 times but everytime, I can wait to read more. please more chapter!!! love it. keep up the good work.
after seeing the 5 wishes.... this author went crazy, be careful no to waste your time with this fanfic it's no good!
Uma porcaria completa! Como ainda tem altas avaliações, não faço idéia. Foi-se as boas obras com criatividade que encontrava por aqui no app. Não leia, perca de tempo. Foi avisado.
i am loving this novel a lot!!!!!! hope to see another chapter released . i specially loved the character design and story development. one of the best novels i have read till now.[img=update]
dude it is so op that everything is gone to drain you are breaking all douluo dalu laws too much op is never too good
Personally I like the story so far, it is not powering only just MC but also some side characters, and it's pretty smooth when it comes to romance. Just hope MC won't have a big Harem like in some fanfics I read where the MC literally had a dozen but never took them seriously. Oh by the way, will Oscar get some good thing like a soul bone or something? Because the original story limited him too much.
Absolute garbage is a i can say the power balance is so messed up nd this is just cannon with minor twists...............................................................................!
I'm not going to lie, at first I thought it was silly, there were a lot of grammatical errors, but as I've been a (male) reader for 3 years I learned to judge not by grammar but by story, so after I started reading this I realized that it was great, the story, the plot, the development among other aspects; One thing I hate is Mc's forced interaction with female characters. A word of advice: NEVER JUDGE A ROMANCE BY THE GRAMMAR, THE GRAMMAR CAN IMPROVE.
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I like OP MC so send more chapters please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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I love it, but one thing that frustrates me is that none of the good Duoluo dalu fanfics write past the tornament ark. The authors always drop it. I hope this one continue
I love it, but one thing that frustrates me is that none of the good Duoluo dalu fanfics write past the tornament ark. The authors always drop it.
круто мне понравился этот фанфик по доулу всем советую к прочтению хотя я думаю что я кину этот фф в брошку просто здесь нету за что зацепится или заинтересоватся фф история слишком быстро идёт
Pela forma que a história está indo até agora seria o interessante ele fazer uma fanfic continuação com os filhos de Tang Ming em Douluo dali 2 seria muito interessante dependendo da quantidade de filhos cada um ficaria com um elemento.
As I said, it's a good story, only two details make me extremely sad, one is to focus on Tang San and company, and the other is to dramatize Qian Renxue, there is also the delay of the fights, two or three chapters for just one fight is horrible, this is a fanfic, it should be faster, but this can be ignored, I have expectations, you have the potential to write an original novel and yours, I hope to read it someday. Five stars!
One of my favourite Doulou dalu fan fics. Love how each member of the harem doesn’t just jump at the mcs feet and there is accltually a lot of good relationships development.
Как говорится начал за здравие кончил за упокой. Набрал много плюшек и пошел в ученики к уроду эпических масштабов да еще и плюшками не пользуется толком.
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Can you please keep writing and update chapters and don't stop. Your novel is really good ? please let us know if you will continue ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
it seems that author thinks of tang San and master as good. Just don't understand that he possess memories and comprehension of so many amazing people but he still has to kneel and lick master just for few spirit rings. And going to Shrek SERIOUSLY Everyone knows that Shrek has nothing other than self righteous people. All the people there if had more resources could have been stronger much earlier. At this point I only feel that mc is a licking dog of tang San and master.
Okey hold up descriptions say its amazing been a long time since i read the manhwa though i forgot the storylol Well i will still read this though
I hate it... almost... That's all............................................................................................................
It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Or in simple language "Double Plus Good." Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This fanfic novel is one of the top out there. The world-building is so fully fleshed out and spine-tinglingly terrifying that it's almost as if "author-san' travelled to such a place, escaped from it, and then just wrote it all down
Author here. And I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 star. Well folks the fanfic will follow canon but the MC will not be side character. It's in the AU so some slight changes will be here and there. But the main plot won't change. I hope you all like this story. And it's gonna be a long one. Will release 1 chap daily at least and almost it depends on me. So try it. Any reviews , suggestions and comments are appreciated either good or bad. Thank You- Allfather PrimorDious.
MC is so op that it became trash... especially the "fated to die skill" it made every fight trash cus he can kill anyone below his level and bellow with a thought an they have NO chance of evading it. AND WHY IS HE GETTING ALL THESE OP SKILL FROM THESE YOUNG SPIRIT BEAST. IN conclusion TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH KEEP UP THE TRASH WORK.
Your story is amazing. I love how you’ve managed to keep him overpowered but not disgustingly so. The whole can break the world at or before spirit sage type thing just gets really old. I love how detailed you get with your story because it reallly lets us have that big sense of satisfaction of getting to know the person without netting in real life. I unfortunately am also living with my parents and just driving my siblings around daily so I don’t earn money, other wise I would have given you powerstones. I will reserve the 2 I get daily for free to you though. Sorry I can’t do more. You and your story deserve it. Thank you for writing this story and I wish you my sincerest gratitude for your work and luck in everything else you do at life. Thank yo.
bro....please continue to write the story...it being a while i get to read a piece of fanfic and manage to not be disgusting ....👉🙋🏻♂️🙋🏻♂️🙋🏻♂️🙋🏻♂️
Pretty easy to predict what this story will be like. Mc is a useless trash on earth gets Reincarnated with perks and some power then his personality goes from scared/cautious to extreme Arrogance within a short period of time. this could be a story about the Ye family or the lin clan for the similarities to other stories.
idk what the Author thinks ... everything is a mess ... just BS in full display..... GARBAGE 🗑️🗑️🗑️
one of my favorite douluo dalu story I have read it 3 times but everytime, I can wait to read more. please more chapter!!! love it. keep up the good work.
after seeing the 5 wishes.... this author went crazy, be careful no to waste your time with this fanfic it's no good!
Uma porcaria completa! Como ainda tem altas avaliações, não faço idéia. Foi-se as boas obras com criatividade que encontrava por aqui no app. Não leia, perca de tempo. Foi avisado.
i am loving this novel a lot!!!!!! hope to see another chapter released . i specially loved the character design and story development. one of the best novels i have read till now.[img=update]
dude it is so op that everything is gone to drain you are breaking all douluo dalu laws too much op is never too good
Personally I like the story so far, it is not powering only just MC but also some side characters, and it's pretty smooth when it comes to romance. Just hope MC won't have a big Harem like in some fanfics I read where the MC literally had a dozen but never took them seriously. Oh by the way, will Oscar get some good thing like a soul bone or something? Because the original story limited him too much.
Absolute garbage is a i can say the power balance is so messed up nd this is just cannon with minor twists...............................................................................!
I'm not going to lie, at first I thought it was silly, there were a lot of grammatical errors, but as I've been a (male) reader for 3 years I learned to judge not by grammar but by story, so after I started reading this I realized that it was great, the story, the plot, the development among other aspects; One thing I hate is Mc's forced interaction with female characters. A word of advice: NEVER JUDGE A ROMANCE BY THE GRAMMAR, THE GRAMMAR CAN IMPROVE.
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I like OP MC so send more chapters please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Please don't drop this novel! looking forward to new chapters ...[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins].................................................
I love it, but one thing that frustrates me is that none of the good Duoluo dalu fanfics write past the tornament ark. The authors always drop it. I hope this one continue
I love it, but one thing that frustrates me is that none of the good Duoluo dalu fanfics write past the tornament ark. The authors always drop it.
круто мне понравился этот фанфик по доулу всем советую к прочтению хотя я думаю что я кину этот фф в брошку просто здесь нету за что зацепится или заинтересоватся фф история слишком быстро идёт
Pela forma que a história está indo até agora seria o interessante ele fazer uma fanfic continuação com os filhos de Tang Ming em Douluo dali 2 seria muito interessante dependendo da quantidade de filhos cada um ficaria com um elemento.
As I said, it's a good story, only two details make me extremely sad, one is to focus on Tang San and company, and the other is to dramatize Qian Renxue, there is also the delay of the fights, two or three chapters for just one fight is horrible, this is a fanfic, it should be faster, but this can be ignored, I have expectations, you have the potential to write an original novel and yours, I hope to read it someday. Five stars!
One of my favourite Doulou dalu fan fics. Love how each member of the harem doesn’t just jump at the mcs feet and there is accltually a lot of good relationships development.
Как говорится начал за здравие кончил за упокой. Набрал много плюшек и пошел в ученики к уроду эпических масштабов да еще и плюшками не пользуется толком.
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Can you please keep writing and update chapters and don't stop. Your novel is really good ? please let us know if you will continue ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
it seems that author thinks of tang San and master as good. Just don't understand that he possess memories and comprehension of so many amazing people but he still has to kneel and lick master just for few spirit rings. And going to Shrek SERIOUSLY Everyone knows that Shrek has nothing other than self righteous people. All the people there if had more resources could have been stronger much earlier. At this point I only feel that mc is a licking dog of tang San and master.
Okey hold up descriptions say its amazing been a long time since i read the manhwa though i forgot the storylol Well i will still read this though
I hate it... almost... That's all............................................................................................................
It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Or in simple language "Double Plus Good." Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This fanfic novel is one of the top out there. The world-building is so fully fleshed out and spine-tinglingly terrifying that it's almost as if "author-san' travelled to such a place, escaped from it, and then just wrote it all down
Author here. And I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 star. Well folks the fanfic will follow canon but the MC will not be side character. It's in the AU so some slight changes will be here and there. But the main plot won't change. I hope you all like this story. And it's gonna be a long one. Will release 1 chap daily at least and almost it depends on me. So try it. Any reviews , suggestions and comments are appreciated either good or bad. Thank You- Allfather PrimorDious.