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I Enjoy Reading it, and want more. And hope to see guqin and if possible make a background for cuz all we know is that Tang hao adpoted him but don't know about his true parents. WELL I HOPE TO READ MORE
Прекрасный роман желаю удачи и улучшения материального положения автору ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
dear author I read all your fanfictions in 3 days! I really appreciate your work and as someone who has read hundreds of fantastic novels I can tell you what most of your readers don't like is the fact that the hero never has really found himself in a difficult or desperate situation. and as for me, I beg you on my knees to add RongRong to the harem. you could do some kind of scenario where she sacrifices herself to save Tang ming, then she will fall into some kind of coma .... ect ..... you can easily make a new bow to save RongRong ... and well good luck dear author.
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Good story, nice character's development, fascinating abilities from wishes or obtained as the story continue. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . but I have enough with the use of chinese words which not familiar enough and disturb my immersion when reading your story. so yeah, its not really my cup of tea. I need to stop reading for the sake of my dying brain cells and sanity. thank but no thanks
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The story quite interesting, even thou at early stage of the novel, its look alike the same for most fan fiction novel, so what i wondering when will be the 2nd spirit Qilin and 3rd spirit (i forgot) will show up in the plot, are there going to have 10k year old for the 1st ring?100k/200k/1m if that happen kinda to OP. Just keep update the story will become ur fan
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The story is great and has lot of potential. It has great continuity and the develpment is neider slow nor fast. There are some minor gramar mistakes but they have no efect upon the story and reading experience. Overall its a great story and its worth reading. This story is not for people who like to see the mc become insainly op and gets all the girls
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Honestly, this is a well written story, in fact one of the best I've read alongside Martial world and such. Thus you won't be disappointed. Writing Quality - No complaints - 5 Stars Stability of Updates - One chapter every three days, generally - 5 Stars Story Development - Though a bit slow paced it doesn't bore me - 5 Stars Character Design - Characters aren't 2D, but actually think. Though Tang Ming could use some work I.E. relies on OG's Plot Armour somewhat and utilizing he's wished knowledge I.E. Nuwa's painting (Ji Ning's soul-cultivation? technique, increasing divine sense, perception/comprehension, Eidetic memory, ect... - 4 Stars World Background - I literally cannot have any complaints due to the nature of fanfics, let alone yours which in fact integrates in DD1 world perfectly - 5 Stars
Membuka SPOILER
Nahh I just don't like you. Pululululukukkukukululullululululululluulullulululululululullulululluluulylululululululululuuluullulululululululu
i hope in the future tang ming will make his own god position and help evolve their own god realm. and there is a lot of battle of god and fight other god realm that the same as there after they evolve.
Membuka SPOILER
Really good story with lot of content and is quite intresting. Although the author's not cusrses sometimes, he writes it in a funny way and he is quite good at the book. Best Wishes and Update faster please. I will even use coins or fast passes to read if you can update it more
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Membuka SPOILER
Thoroughly enjoyable novel with a 'Good' Mc, which is rare af on here these days as most DD novels seem to have a murderhobo mc with trust issues.
Классный фанфик но почему в гг выбрали бомжа)) уже выбрали хотяб роботягу какого-то Ито луче было а так норм!!!>>))>))))))>))>))))))))?¿)[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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more chapters. 💗💗💜💜💜💙💙❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💙💙💙💙💙💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💕💕💗💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💗💗💜💜💙💙💙💙💙💙💙🧡💜💜👍🏻💜💜💜💗💗💗💗💗💙💙💜
I Enjoy Reading it, and want more. And hope to see guqin and if possible make a background for cuz all we know is that Tang hao adpoted him but don't know about his true parents. WELL I HOPE TO READ MORE
Прекрасный роман желаю удачи и улучшения материального положения автору ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
dear author I read all your fanfictions in 3 days! I really appreciate your work and as someone who has read hundreds of fantastic novels I can tell you what most of your readers don't like is the fact that the hero never has really found himself in a difficult or desperate situation. and as for me, I beg you on my knees to add RongRong to the harem. you could do some kind of scenario where she sacrifices herself to save Tang ming, then she will fall into some kind of coma .... ect ..... you can easily make a new bow to save RongRong ... and well good luck dear author.
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Good story, nice character's development, fascinating abilities from wishes or obtained as the story continue. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . but I have enough with the use of chinese words which not familiar enough and disturb my immersion when reading your story. so yeah, its not really my cup of tea. I need to stop reading for the sake of my dying brain cells and sanity. thank but no thanks
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
The story quite interesting, even thou at early stage of the novel, its look alike the same for most fan fiction novel, so what i wondering when will be the 2nd spirit Qilin and 3rd spirit (i forgot) will show up in the plot, are there going to have 10k year old for the 1st ring?100k/200k/1m if that happen kinda to OP. Just keep update the story will become ur fan
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the star tells my opinion of this fic. .....................................................................................................
The story is great and has lot of potential. It has great continuity and the develpment is neider slow nor fast. There are some minor gramar mistakes but they have no efect upon the story and reading experience. Overall its a great story and its worth reading. This story is not for people who like to see the mc become insainly op and gets all the girls
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Honestly, this is a well written story, in fact one of the best I've read alongside Martial world and such. Thus you won't be disappointed. Writing Quality - No complaints - 5 Stars Stability of Updates - One chapter every three days, generally - 5 Stars Story Development - Though a bit slow paced it doesn't bore me - 5 Stars Character Design - Characters aren't 2D, but actually think. Though Tang Ming could use some work I.E. relies on OG's Plot Armour somewhat and utilizing he's wished knowledge I.E. Nuwa's painting (Ji Ning's soul-cultivation? technique, increasing divine sense, perception/comprehension, Eidetic memory, ect... - 4 Stars World Background - I literally cannot have any complaints due to the nature of fanfics, let alone yours which in fact integrates in DD1 world perfectly - 5 Stars
Membuka SPOILER Nahh I just don't like you. Pululululukukkukukululullululululululluulullulululululululullulululluluulylululululululululuuluullulululululululu
i hope in the future tang ming will make his own god position and help evolve their own god realm. and there is a lot of battle of god and fight other god realm that the same as there after they evolve.
Membuka SPOILER Really good story with lot of content and is quite intresting. Although the author's not cusrses sometimes, he writes it in a funny way and he is quite good at the book. Best Wishes and Update faster please. I will even use coins or fast passes to read if you can update it more
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Membuka SPOILER Thoroughly enjoyable novel with a 'Good' Mc, which is rare af on here these days as most DD novels seem to have a murderhobo mc with trust issues.
Классный фанфик но почему в гг выбрали бомжа)) уже выбрали хотяб роботягу какого-то Ито луче было а так норм!!!>>))>))))))>))>))))))))?¿)[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Thanks for your works!!!!!!!!!!!