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I don't understand he was reborn overpowered,already has the memories of either the movies or comics and he just starts killing immediately. I don't even know what he was before being reborn. it's like bam and that how it's supposed to be. a little clarification would be needed sometimes cause not everyone can follow your thought process.
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Here are my rating for each section: Writing Quality 3 -> 4 - I completely understand the 'English isn't my first language'. And I applaud you author for all your hardwork so I added another star. But there are no trigger warnings nor notes to help the reader keep up with the information given. I would recommend a small glossary at the end of each chapter. I don't know if anyone else is bothered by it, but sometimes I get thrown off because it is a mix of omnipotent Third Person (author) POV and First Person (mc) POV??? Story Development 4 - I would have rated it a 2, but considering I couldn't get that far. I rated it a 4. The story isn't progressing in accordance with ATLA, and plot is heavily affected by character design. In other words, it is heavily affected by the wish fulfillment trope of many SI stories. Character Design 1 - There is no villain, murder, killer, or some sort of criminal / psychopath tag. Sexism is visible to a degree (as is mostly common with harem tags, so I didn't take off points based on that.) and MC is the typical wish fullfillment OP-SI type, but he has a brain (unlike another of others of this type of mc). However, he uses his brain for... let's just say he's smart but not wise interests. And other characters (aside from the characters whoes personalities were shown in ATLA) were kind of one-dimensional as is most similar to characters in basic Xianxia stories. Updating Stability 5 - ... No clue if this finished and have no idea if it updated. so I just gave it 5 stars. World Background 4 - I couldn't get very far. so instead of what I first put (3) I put 4. But from what I have seen so far, there were quite a few info dumps of plans. So it ties closely with Writing quality and Story Development. There is also 'that'. the choice of antagonists (SPOILER: Taken from Korra despite being in ATLA just so that there can be 'villains'). I'm still quite confused about that, and feel there is definitely something I haven't understood, so I didnt give a low rating. Hence a 4. As for continuing this story. I just can't. 'that' characters death in that manner is just.... No thank you. Sorry.π
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Great Fan story the best so far for Avatar in my Humble opinion π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯ Btw is there gonna be book 2? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
La mejor historia que leΓ en este sitio del avatar, original con un buen argumento y desarrollo de personaje, para resumir es un hombre moderno en el cuerpo de Zuko pero lo que lo diferencia y es lo mejor para mi es como el mc decide cambiar todo el mundo y darle forma el mismo sin esperar al avatar o seguir el guion, sino con sus propias ideas y valores muy recomendable, espero que siga pronto con el libro dos para ver el enfrentamiento contra el avatar y el antiguo orden contra el nuevo que el mc trata de imponer al mundo. ContinΓΊe escribiendo y gracias por esta historia
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All your books have interesting lore. You built extensive background. You improve on what is already there and also use it creatively. You do research to make sure you entres make some sense. You use their natural powers creatively. All I can say is you should keep writing.
amazing story. keep up the work. intrieging plot with more lore than I have read. Some new characters that fit and add background to the world. some of which sound so integral to the world I don't know if they also exist in the original avatar.
Love this story and stay safe author πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ Ps More chapter please
Otima história a melhor fanfiction de avatar que eu jÑ tive o prazer de ler e conhecer e espero que continu ela por muito tempo e logo chegarÑ a 2 milháes de visualizaçáes!!
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Portanto, eu queria esperar atΓ© que vocΓͺ terminasse o primeiro livro para deixar minha resenha. Eu nΓ£o tenho muito a dizer, eu amo esta histΓ³ria, embora inicialmente a tenha abandonado por um tempo quando Iroh foi morto (ainda tenho traumas), decidi dar-lhe outra chance quando li sua histΓ³ria em DC e descobri que era o mesmo autor, como estou feliz com essa decisΓ£o. Obrigado pelos capΓtulos e lembre-se, nunca se pode ter limΓ΅es suficientes com a Azula e a Toph ( Ν‘~ ΝΚ Ν‘Β°).
If you haven't read it yet you should give it a try, there isn't a lot of avatar fanfic and this one is among my favorite [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
love this novel author, i do hope you won't dropped this worderful novel and i do hope you recreate some famous skills like rasengan and chemistry for jude so she won't be useless.
Perfect work so far for the end of book one had lots of background info for those new to avatar stable updates and great quality and story development perfect score from me and hope others who read this great story enjoy it as much as me and a BIG THANKS to the author Daichi_TBR193 for writing and posting this story I mean it I have enjoyed this a lot thanks.
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Ya go fire nation destroy the avatar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is the best avatar fan-fic if I have ever seen one. The plot is completely original and it keeps you intrigued about future development. Kudos to the author and looking forward to how this story develops!
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An awesome Avatar fic, for sure. Very original too, imo. A bit heavy on the harem aspect but I can overlook that. For some that's probably a plus. Probably my favorite aspect of this story has to be the kingdom-building elements as Zuko takes the reins of the newly minted Phoenix Empire. The story follows him as he travels across the world and starts incorporating different tribes, benders and teachings into his nation. So you'll be seeing earth benders, water benders and more. It's a bending nation, not limited to just one singular element, with emphasis on a cult of personality centered around Emperor Zuko. It also is not at all shy about completely smashing the script in terms of the show's plotline. For some who hold the plot up as a sacred gospel, this could be a negative. Personally I like the direction its going. Emperor Zuko has even started propagating/indoctrinating that the Avatar and its "cycle" is a negative thing, that its keeping them from uniting together by forcing each bending nation to be separated. There is no real conflict, at least thus far, in terms of martial threats. Zuko is OP and he trains his girls to be equally OP in their respective fields. So this isn't really much of a "action" fic and more focus on world and kingdom building. I haven't seen Avatar in several years and my memory of it is foggy, yet I was able to keep up and follow this story well enough. I had to perform a few google searches to get appearances but otherwise the story is written and self-contained well enough that even someone with no Avatar knowledge could likely still follow it and enjoy it for what it is. Also, the chapters are quite lengthy. Which is just awesome. You don't read the chapter in a few sneezes then get left with cliffhangers on every update. There's actual meat to each one and you're not left feeling like you blinked and missed something. It's great. Honestly the only thing I can complain about, mildly, is pretty subjective. I think it has gone a bit far in adding to the harem. Wasn't bad at first but near the end of the first volume some of the additions do feel kinda arbitrary to me and don't carry the same emotional or time investment building the individual character like the original girls did, and as a result does cause the others to fade in the background a bit. It comes down to personal tastes I guess. If you want a bloodpumping action-adventure with lots of fighting and vigorous training montages with overcoming limits and surpassing challenges... not much of that here. If you like OP MCs that aren't psychopathic sociopaths, but still hold lofty ambition and drive with a focus on kingdom and world building elements and touch of lemon on the side... well, here you go. The description tags him as a selfish MC but, personally, I think that's a tad misleading. Maybe my standards are just different due to all the Chinese cultivation novels I've read but this MC isn't really what I'd call selfish. He seems pretty benevolent in regards to wanting to uplift his nation. Insofar that a monarch can be without being unreasonably naive or passive, anyway. Though maybe I'm just a victim of his indoctrination. All Hail Lelouch -- I mean all Hail Emperor Zuko!
I don't understand he was reborn overpowered,already has the memories of either the movies or comics and he just starts killing immediately. I don't even know what he was before being reborn. it's like bam and that how it's supposed to be. a little clarification would be needed sometimes cause not everyone can follow your thought process.
Membuka SPOILER Here are my rating for each section: Writing Quality 3 -> 4 - I completely understand the 'English isn't my first language'. And I applaud you author for all your hardwork so I added another star. But there are no trigger warnings nor notes to help the reader keep up with the information given. I would recommend a small glossary at the end of each chapter. I don't know if anyone else is bothered by it, but sometimes I get thrown off because it is a mix of omnipotent Third Person (author) POV and First Person (mc) POV??? Story Development 4 - I would have rated it a 2, but considering I couldn't get that far. I rated it a 4. The story isn't progressing in accordance with ATLA, and plot is heavily affected by character design. In other words, it is heavily affected by the wish fulfillment trope of many SI stories. Character Design 1 - There is no villain, murder, killer, or some sort of criminal / psychopath tag. Sexism is visible to a degree (as is mostly common with harem tags, so I didn't take off points based on that.) and MC is the typical wish fullfillment OP-SI type, but he has a brain (unlike another of others of this type of mc). However, he uses his brain for... let's just say he's smart but not wise interests. And other characters (aside from the characters whoes personalities were shown in ATLA) were kind of one-dimensional as is most similar to characters in basic Xianxia stories. Updating Stability 5 - ... No clue if this finished and have no idea if it updated. so I just gave it 5 stars. World Background 4 - I couldn't get very far. so instead of what I first put (3) I put 4. But from what I have seen so far, there were quite a few info dumps of plans. So it ties closely with Writing quality and Story Development. There is also 'that'. the choice of antagonists (SPOILER: Taken from Korra despite being in ATLA just so that there can be 'villains'). I'm still quite confused about that, and feel there is definitely something I haven't understood, so I didnt give a low rating. Hence a 4. As for continuing this story. I just can't. 'that' characters death in that manner is just.... No thank you. Sorry.π
Membuka SPOILER Great Fan story the best so far for Avatar in my Humble opinion π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯ Btw is there gonna be book 2? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
La mejor historia que leΓ en este sitio del avatar, original con un buen argumento y desarrollo de personaje, para resumir es un hombre moderno en el cuerpo de Zuko pero lo que lo diferencia y es lo mejor para mi es como el mc decide cambiar todo el mundo y darle forma el mismo sin esperar al avatar o seguir el guion, sino con sus propias ideas y valores muy recomendable, espero que siga pronto con el libro dos para ver el enfrentamiento contra el avatar y el antiguo orden contra el nuevo que el mc trata de imponer al mundo. ContinΓΊe escribiendo y gracias por esta historia
https://screenrant.com/avatar-last-airbender-toph-sun-lavabender-revealed/ El origen de lavabeinder [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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All your books have interesting lore. You built extensive background. You improve on what is already there and also use it creatively. You do research to make sure you entres make some sense. You use their natural powers creatively. All I can say is you should keep writing.
amazing story. keep up the work. intrieging plot with more lore than I have read. Some new characters that fit and add background to the world. some of which sound so integral to the world I don't know if they also exist in the original avatar.
Love this story and stay safe author πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ Ps More chapter please
Otima história a melhor fanfiction de avatar que eu jÑ tive o prazer de ler e conhecer e espero que continu ela por muito tempo e logo chegarÑ a 2 milháes de visualizaçáes!!
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Portanto, eu queria esperar atΓ© que vocΓͺ terminasse o primeiro livro para deixar minha resenha. Eu nΓ£o tenho muito a dizer, eu amo esta histΓ³ria, embora inicialmente a tenha abandonado por um tempo quando Iroh foi morto (ainda tenho traumas), decidi dar-lhe outra chance quando li sua histΓ³ria em DC e descobri que era o mesmo autor, como estou feliz com essa decisΓ£o. Obrigado pelos capΓtulos e lembre-se, nunca se pode ter limΓ΅es suficientes com a Azula e a Toph ( Ν‘~ ΝΚ Ν‘Β°).
If you haven't read it yet you should give it a try, there isn't a lot of avatar fanfic and this one is among my favorite [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
love this novel author, i do hope you won't dropped this worderful novel and i do hope you recreate some famous skills like rasengan and chemistry for jude so she won't be useless.
Perfect work so far for the end of book one had lots of background info for those new to avatar stable updates and great quality and story development perfect score from me and hope others who read this great story enjoy it as much as me and a BIG THANKS to the author Daichi_TBR193 for writing and posting this story I mean it I have enjoyed this a lot thanks.
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Ya go fire nation destroy the avatar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is the best avatar fan-fic if I have ever seen one. The plot is completely original and it keeps you intrigued about future development. Kudos to the author and looking forward to how this story develops!
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An awesome Avatar fic, for sure. Very original too, imo. A bit heavy on the harem aspect but I can overlook that. For some that's probably a plus. Probably my favorite aspect of this story has to be the kingdom-building elements as Zuko takes the reins of the newly minted Phoenix Empire. The story follows him as he travels across the world and starts incorporating different tribes, benders and teachings into his nation. So you'll be seeing earth benders, water benders and more. It's a bending nation, not limited to just one singular element, with emphasis on a cult of personality centered around Emperor Zuko. It also is not at all shy about completely smashing the script in terms of the show's plotline. For some who hold the plot up as a sacred gospel, this could be a negative. Personally I like the direction its going. Emperor Zuko has even started propagating/indoctrinating that the Avatar and its "cycle" is a negative thing, that its keeping them from uniting together by forcing each bending nation to be separated. There is no real conflict, at least thus far, in terms of martial threats. Zuko is OP and he trains his girls to be equally OP in their respective fields. So this isn't really much of a "action" fic and more focus on world and kingdom building. I haven't seen Avatar in several years and my memory of it is foggy, yet I was able to keep up and follow this story well enough. I had to perform a few google searches to get appearances but otherwise the story is written and self-contained well enough that even someone with no Avatar knowledge could likely still follow it and enjoy it for what it is. Also, the chapters are quite lengthy. Which is just awesome. You don't read the chapter in a few sneezes then get left with cliffhangers on every update. There's actual meat to each one and you're not left feeling like you blinked and missed something. It's great. Honestly the only thing I can complain about, mildly, is pretty subjective. I think it has gone a bit far in adding to the harem. Wasn't bad at first but near the end of the first volume some of the additions do feel kinda arbitrary to me and don't carry the same emotional or time investment building the individual character like the original girls did, and as a result does cause the others to fade in the background a bit. It comes down to personal tastes I guess. If you want a bloodpumping action-adventure with lots of fighting and vigorous training montages with overcoming limits and surpassing challenges... not much of that here. If you like OP MCs that aren't psychopathic sociopaths, but still hold lofty ambition and drive with a focus on kingdom and world building elements and touch of lemon on the side... well, here you go. The description tags him as a selfish MC but, personally, I think that's a tad misleading. Maybe my standards are just different due to all the Chinese cultivation novels I've read but this MC isn't really what I'd call selfish. He seems pretty benevolent in regards to wanting to uplift his nation. Insofar that a monarch can be without being unreasonably naive or passive, anyway. Though maybe I'm just a victim of his indoctrination. All Hail Lelouch -- I mean all Hail Emperor Zuko!