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masterpiece novel .. .. it's way too short tho .. .no excessive drama ,very wholesome .i gave it 5 cus I enjoyed a lot .even at worst its only a 4.5 even if it's not ur preferred genre .its a definitely worthwhile read even if u don't like the genre just read for the wholesome
Very cute and fun story. The chapters aren't long but that doesn't affect the story
La historia me encantó, pero me hubiera gustado que tuviera más desarrollo. Esperemos que el autor no hubiera abandonado la historia después de dos años, y que pronto venga un seguimiento de está linda historia, pero con más drama. ////
Good novel to pass the time. Read it in about an hour or two. it's just a sweet novel. the ratings here aren't really relevant because it's only a short story. To summarise though, I enjoyed it.
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wow its really hard to find any faults in this novel..its really short and really really sweet. I fear diabetes XD. Just two characters and most of other characters are not given importance but guess what, The two characters in here are so sooo good that even another novel with hundreds of developed side characters cant even hope to compete with this novel. Although i wanted mooooaaaaar chapters i guess this story ended quite nicely. I loved it and welp thank this novel for killing my apprehensions towards girl's love...
Such a lovely wholesome little story with two lovable leads, both have great character writing allowing the reader to see more of the opposites personality by each other’s perspective. Very cute, much like.
I'm speechless no words comes to my mind when I think of what to say about this. It was good, yes good, very good, I... Let's give it a 5 it was shorter than expected but tbh I got carried away reading it before I knew it I finished the whole thing and I seriously don't know what to feel about this, I was left speechless, no words it is! 3-4 hours I don't know but it took that much to finish 91 chapters, I got carried and blown away I guess?
Amazing. Honestly, this is awesome. Probably the only time so far I’ve given a 5-star review on a <100-chapter novel. Short, but overwhelmingly sweet. My only wish is for more; it’s too damn good, One of the best Yuri novels I’ve read, despite the length. Thank you author, for this absolute gem.
I like the characters povs the world background is decent but not amazing but i like the story in general and hope you can not rush it and finish it it will be a first for me with a non short story yuri on webnovel
The only word to describe this novel is ' Great '. Characters are really flawed and they made story alive. Both FLs are really great. Story's progression is too slow and their thoughts pictured the whole novel into great read. I read chapters continuously. Each chapter hooked me up and character made me stayed. In my opinion, this is one of the best Romance novels as far as I know.
omg this is so cute imma cry T . T this is so worth to read bruh so cute and fluffy their reactions are cute especially asuuu~ im waiting for more updates thank you author ❤️
I like the characters povs the world background is decent but not amazing but i like the story in general would give 5 stars in Stability if you could update soon its been a month and im thinking you dropped like any other yuri
I Like The Story The Characters Personality I hope it gets Updated soon... 😀😀😀😊😀😊😊😊😊😀😊😀😊😊😀😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Ooooo, I love this book already XD. Really funny and relatable -_-... too relatable. Imma stick with this one till I settle... hmm... Should I choose Asura or Lancera? XD reading reading reading!!
I didn't expect to see the different points of view, it was amazing! ah I feel I'm falling more and more in love with this story, the characters that at first sight may seem simple are the most complex ones ;3 , thank you very much for taking the time to keep uploading this story, you can't imagine how happy my day is reading it. Super recommended <3
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When I tell you I read all the current uploaded chapters i mean I read ALL 60+. i love this novel and would love more chapters. TOP 3 of the novels on this website
A very fluffy novel with a huge tsundere protagonist where the actions between her and the FL just makes you melt like chocolate under campfire. For those who like to use Scribblehub more the story is also available to read on the website: https://***.scribblehub.com/series/162470/the-villainess-and-her-victim/
I loved this novel, the characters are cute and the reactions of the MC are funny and adorable. It was really fun to read. I'm only sad because there are few chapters so far, but the release frequency is good. I need moooar ~
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I don't know what to say so I will just spout some random nonsense here, feel free to ignore me. The characters are amazing, like really really amazing. The main character, Asura reminds me of author herself... cough cough...I didn't say anything. So as I was saying the FMC is so fun, her thoughts are awesome. I already like her (not more than Lancera) Lancera is my favourite, and I think she will stay my favourite till the end of this book (I just hope nothing happens to her) Great yuri story even though Yuri is yet to come. Author please give some smut...cough cough...only some is fine. It's only because I want to see Asura reaction. I have no other lewd purpose, I swear. Good luck author a nd gimme some yuri smut.(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)
Lance why did you not tell me earlier. You write soo well. Omg,, your writing skills are so refined. I love Asura and Lancera. Such beauties. Writing quality--- Flawless, can't even find a mistake. Stability of updates- Regular Story development- I like how you started it, with all the chunnism and self narcissism of Asura. Her character develops as we read ahead. I fell like you written everything in 1 pow, its good though but sometimes i felt like Asura is always talking to herself. I know its part of the character but i feel the story will get more interesting when you will add more interaction of characters instead of self interaction...But beside that the story is awesome. Character design---lol Asura even swear on her beauty and intelligence. Well, I like the Asura character and Lancera villainous. I want to know more about Lanceraaaa World background- Uhh its the only part which I didn't understand. Maybe the world is the medieval era. Waitingggggg for more. Everyone, just give a read to this story and I promise you will be hooked. ~~The author is chunni lord, so i am hoping to see more interesting character~~ well done author.
Amazing story to be honest! The plots just make me want to read more and more. Consistent updates too~ Overall, this owl loves it. Good Job Author-tan!
This is a very well written and interesting book. The characters aren’t your standard stereotypes and each have their own personalities. It’s a great read.
I had to give it a 5. Like damn. Been a while since I've been this impressed with a book. Writing quality: Pretty much awesome. I just love how the novel's being narrated. First pov is cool on it's own, but, this novel somehow made me feel more close to Asura. Maybe it's all her stuttering and tsun-tsun behaviour. Author has a berry nice vocab, ngl. I couldn't point out much mistakes, there were hardly one or two glaring ones. Great job on the narration! And the descriptions too, so we'll written! Stability of updates: From what I can see, author's been updating it regularly, so of course, I'll give a five for this as well. *But I will say, PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!* Story development: Honestly, it was just a bit slow in the beginning. But that was because the Author took time to make us understand Asura's backstory. She also clarified what Asura felt, and dropped some good hints, letting our imagination run wild~~ Sometimes they turned out as expected, and other times.. Very different XD Was always a pleasant surprise to me though. Anyway, the execution of plot is very smooth, and I quite look forward to what's gonna happen next! (currently on ch 19 and the cliffy is killlingggg meeeee) Character design: If there was a 10 star option, I would've given that. MIND-BLOWING work. Author made me speechless with the work she's done on character designing. At first glance it seems a bit clichéd, but then the depth provided by Asura and Lancera's backstory... (though Lancera's backstory hasn't been elaborated on yet, I assume it'll be made clear in the future). It just helped me imagine them better. Especially the part where Asura first got to know about her love for compliments. It was relatable, yet not. The turning point of her life, I'd say. Also, so far, Asura's character is a bit hard to decipher. Is she an otaku? An ojou-sama? A tsundere? An egoist? Or all of the above? **: Lancera sounds like a potential yandere, I agree with Asura on this. World Background: Aight. This was well described from the first chapter itself. Starting with the description of classes, to the society's hierarchical system, to their prejudice for gay love. World building isn't slow, but it's not rapid either. More of a go with the flow type. I'm enjoying it. Small details being unraveled here and there. Though.. I'm not sure whether to call it modern or medieval since they got tech but still have this monarch system. With this, I end my review. I never expected to find such a gem. Support the author 100%.Will vote when I get my ** lol. Thank you for the chapters! And looking forward for more!~ I'll probably binge read the next 10 chaps Mhm. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Membuka SPOILER masterpiece novel .. .. it's way too short tho .. .no excessive drama ,very wholesome .i gave it 5 cus I enjoyed a lot .even at worst its only a 4.5 even if it's not ur preferred genre .its a definitely worthwhile read even if u don't like the genre just read for the wholesome
Very cute and fun story. The chapters aren't long but that doesn't affect the story
La historia me encantó, pero me hubiera gustado que tuviera más desarrollo. Esperemos que el autor no hubiera abandonado la historia después de dos años, y que pronto venga un seguimiento de está linda historia, pero con más drama. ////
Good novel to pass the time. Read it in about an hour or two. it's just a sweet novel. the ratings here aren't really relevant because it's only a short story. To summarise though, I enjoyed it.
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wow its really hard to find any faults in this novel..its really short and really really sweet. I fear diabetes XD. Just two characters and most of other characters are not given importance but guess what, The two characters in here are so sooo good that even another novel with hundreds of developed side characters cant even hope to compete with this novel. Although i wanted mooooaaaaar chapters i guess this story ended quite nicely. I loved it and welp thank this novel for killing my apprehensions towards girl's love...
Such a lovely wholesome little story with two lovable leads, both have great character writing allowing the reader to see more of the opposites personality by each other’s perspective. Very cute, much like.
I'm speechless no words comes to my mind when I think of what to say about this. It was good, yes good, very good, I... Let's give it a 5 it was shorter than expected but tbh I got carried away reading it before I knew it I finished the whole thing and I seriously don't know what to feel about this, I was left speechless, no words it is! 3-4 hours I don't know but it took that much to finish 91 chapters, I got carried and blown away I guess?
Amazing. Honestly, this is awesome. Probably the only time so far I’ve given a 5-star review on a <100-chapter novel. Short, but overwhelmingly sweet. My only wish is for more; it’s too damn good, One of the best Yuri novels I’ve read, despite the length. Thank you author, for this absolute gem.
I like the characters povs the world background is decent but not amazing but i like the story in general and hope you can not rush it and finish it it will be a first for me with a non short story yuri on webnovel
The only word to describe this novel is ' Great '. Characters are really flawed and they made story alive. Both FLs are really great. Story's progression is too slow and their thoughts pictured the whole novel into great read. I read chapters continuously. Each chapter hooked me up and character made me stayed. In my opinion, this is one of the best Romance novels as far as I know.
omg this is so cute imma cry T . T this is so worth to read bruh so cute and fluffy their reactions are cute especially asuuu~ im waiting for more updates thank you author ❤️
I like the characters povs the world background is decent but not amazing but i like the story in general would give 5 stars in Stability if you could update soon its been a month and im thinking you dropped like any other yuri
I Like The Story The Characters Personality I hope it gets Updated soon... 😀😀😀😊😀😊😊😊😊😀😊😀😊😊😀😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Ooooo, I love this book already XD. Really funny and relatable -_-... too relatable. Imma stick with this one till I settle... hmm... Should I choose Asura or Lancera? XD reading reading reading!!
I didn't expect to see the different points of view, it was amazing! ah I feel I'm falling more and more in love with this story, the characters that at first sight may seem simple are the most complex ones ;3 , thank you very much for taking the time to keep uploading this story, you can't imagine how happy my day is reading it. Super recommended <3
Love everything❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
good and interesing. ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
When I tell you I read all the current uploaded chapters i mean I read ALL 60+. i love this novel and would love more chapters. TOP 3 of the novels on this website
A very fluffy novel with a huge tsundere protagonist where the actions between her and the FL just makes you melt like chocolate under campfire. For those who like to use Scribblehub more the story is also available to read on the website: https://***.scribblehub.com/series/162470/the-villainess-and-her-victim/
I loved this novel, the characters are cute and the reactions of the MC are funny and adorable. It was really fun to read. I'm only sad because there are few chapters so far, but the release frequency is good. I need moooar ~
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I don't know what to say so I will just spout some random nonsense here, feel free to ignore me. The characters are amazing, like really really amazing. The main character, Asura reminds me of author herself... cough cough...I didn't say anything. So as I was saying the FMC is so fun, her thoughts are awesome. I already like her (not more than Lancera) Lancera is my favourite, and I think she will stay my favourite till the end of this book (I just hope nothing happens to her) Great yuri story even though Yuri is yet to come. Author please give some smut...cough cough...only some is fine. It's only because I want to see Asura reaction. I have no other lewd purpose, I swear. Good luck author a nd gimme some yuri smut.(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)
Lance why did you not tell me earlier. You write soo well. Omg,, your writing skills are so refined. I love Asura and Lancera. Such beauties. Writing quality--- Flawless, can't even find a mistake. Stability of updates- Regular Story development- I like how you started it, with all the chunnism and self narcissism of Asura. Her character develops as we read ahead. I fell like you written everything in 1 pow, its good though but sometimes i felt like Asura is always talking to herself. I know its part of the character but i feel the story will get more interesting when you will add more interaction of characters instead of self interaction...But beside that the story is awesome. Character design---lol Asura even swear on her beauty and intelligence. Well, I like the Asura character and Lancera villainous. I want to know more about Lanceraaaa World background- Uhh its the only part which I didn't understand. Maybe the world is the medieval era. Waitingggggg for more. Everyone, just give a read to this story and I promise you will be hooked. ~~The author is chunni lord, so i am hoping to see more interesting character~~ well done author.
Amazing story to be honest! The plots just make me want to read more and more. Consistent updates too~ Overall, this owl loves it. Good Job Author-tan!
This is a very well written and interesting book. The characters aren’t your standard stereotypes and each have their own personalities. It’s a great read.
I had to give it a 5. Like damn. Been a while since I've been this impressed with a book. Writing quality: Pretty much awesome. I just love how the novel's being narrated. First pov is cool on it's own, but, this novel somehow made me feel more close to Asura. Maybe it's all her stuttering and tsun-tsun behaviour. Author has a berry nice vocab, ngl. I couldn't point out much mistakes, there were hardly one or two glaring ones. Great job on the narration! And the descriptions too, so we'll written! Stability of updates: From what I can see, author's been updating it regularly, so of course, I'll give a five for this as well. *But I will say, PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!* Story development: Honestly, it was just a bit slow in the beginning. But that was because the Author took time to make us understand Asura's backstory. She also clarified what Asura felt, and dropped some good hints, letting our imagination run wild~~ Sometimes they turned out as expected, and other times.. Very different XD Was always a pleasant surprise to me though. Anyway, the execution of plot is very smooth, and I quite look forward to what's gonna happen next! (currently on ch 19 and the cliffy is killlingggg meeeee) Character design: If there was a 10 star option, I would've given that. MIND-BLOWING work. Author made me speechless with the work she's done on character designing. At first glance it seems a bit clichéd, but then the depth provided by Asura and Lancera's backstory... (though Lancera's backstory hasn't been elaborated on yet, I assume it'll be made clear in the future). It just helped me imagine them better. Especially the part where Asura first got to know about her love for compliments. It was relatable, yet not. The turning point of her life, I'd say. Also, so far, Asura's character is a bit hard to decipher. Is she an otaku? An ojou-sama? A tsundere? An egoist? Or all of the above? **: Lancera sounds like a potential yandere, I agree with Asura on this. World Background: Aight. This was well described from the first chapter itself. Starting with the description of classes, to the society's hierarchical system, to their prejudice for gay love. World building isn't slow, but it's not rapid either. More of a go with the flow type. I'm enjoying it. Small details being unraveled here and there. Though.. I'm not sure whether to call it modern or medieval since they got tech but still have this monarch system. With this, I end my review. I never expected to find such a gem. Support the author 100%.Will vote when I get my ** lol. Thank you for the chapters! And looking forward for more!~ I'll probably binge read the next 10 chaps Mhm. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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