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Nice. Can't say much since it's only three chapters, but what you have so far is enogh to pull me in. I'd actually want a FemC with spine for once, and this is shaping up to be something of the sort. Keep on writingđź‘Ť
Other stories with villainesses almost always have the main character as the villainess who isn't actually that much of a villainess... So, what about a story of a villainess is the love interest, and the main character who is a prideful, narcissistic tsundere? XD Hope y'all enjoy this novel and tell me what you think! Make sure to check out my main novel too~ Tools of Slaughter: Story of a Human
There are three chapters so it will be hard for me to determine to pace of novel. Aside from the story development, I am truly impressed by your writing style. The vocabularies are not repetitive and the word choice is great. (I noted some of the words hehe.) I was able to portray the looks of the characters within a few paragraphs. The scenarios are also described perfectly. I feel like I'm inside the novel itself. The world background is detailed and the punctuation marks, especially the commas, are used correctly. Nothing much to criticize about since the novel currently has three chapters. I wish all the best to author and keep on writing!
Nice. Can't say much since it's only three chapters, but what you have so far is enogh to pull me in. I'd actually want a FemC with spine for once, and this is shaping up to be something of the sort. Keep on writingđź‘Ť
Other stories with villainesses almost always have the main character as the villainess who isn't actually that much of a villainess... So, what about a story of a villainess is the love interest, and the main character who is a prideful, narcissistic tsundere? XD Hope y'all enjoy this novel and tell me what you think! Make sure to check out my main novel too~ Tools of Slaughter: Story of a Human
There are three chapters so it will be hard for me to determine to pace of novel. Aside from the story development, I am truly impressed by your writing style. The vocabularies are not repetitive and the word choice is great. (I noted some of the words hehe.) I was able to portray the looks of the characters within a few paragraphs. The scenarios are also described perfectly. I feel like I'm inside the novel itself. The world background is detailed and the punctuation marks, especially the commas, are used correctly. Nothing much to criticize about since the novel currently has three chapters. I wish all the best to author and keep on writing!