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Finally! Finally! Hahaha! We finally reached 1 million views! Thanks to everyone who accompanied me on this fantastic journey, I hope you keep reading, because without you I wouldn't be here!👊🏾
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First Yuan Zun fanfic i've read btw and God tier potential pls author continue this plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Pleas give us more😭😭 The story was good and i was really interested in seeing how it was gonna go out ahhhhh PLEASE COME BACK IM BEGGING !
Repeating chapters again and again. Dropped. Repeating chapters again and again. Dropped. Repeating chapters again and again. Dropped. Repeating chapters again and again. Dropped.
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So there are quite a few grammar mistakes which are really annoying, at some point I thought mtl could translate better. The story development could be better, it should be a ff but you often have the feeling that you read the original novel. We don't know much about the character, only a few of his power and his look. The update stability seems really bad, a few comments are really old and there are only 38 chapters, so it could be much better. World background is from the original novel. As result I expected much more from this ff.
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Well It's a good story the only downpoint is that the is limiting the mc too much I mean his progression is being limited by the author cause his cultivation has no logic in it his too slow in progression he is only improving if the ''plot" moves his like limiting the mc because for "plot" sake it's not like he needed not to be op he just needs to hide his power well and move on with the plot
Yupp good job keep. It up i really like the progress of the story good job👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Respect for writing a Yuan Zun or Dragon Prince Yuan Fanfic! I have never seen one so I was kind of disappointed when I realized that. Thanks man😊! Keep up the good work!!!!
Please Mr. Author try to increase the release rate of the chapters 🙏🙏🙏🙏[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
D'abord je dois te remercier car ça fait plaisir de voir des auteurs Français de fanfic sur des lights novels en plus tu passe le bac et tu écris en anglais GG a toi le S hâte de voir comment tu vas développer l'histoire s/o next level😉
One of the greatest fanfiction i read in my point of view keep it up men good job...................................................................................................
1. slow paced 2. part of the chapters are a recap of the previous chapter 3. there are 5 chapters that seems like a copy paste from the original yuan zun, the worst part is its done in zhong yuan pov. 4. 5 wishes and some of that wasted already, 3 of that wish could be merged with a system with power from multiverses,,,, and genius in genesis rune only?? why not in genesis qi and body cultivation too?? only reason i read this after this is because there arent any fanfic about yuan zun other than this one
thanks for the chapters man here is your reward, a solid 5 gold star rating keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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You should focus more on the Mc and his skills than on the former Mc but in general chill I like it, keep going, you have a lot of people supporting you
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If used less Wuxia Terminology and acted like any other normal person from the 21st Century then that would improve the overall reading experience. Main character isn't relatable or realistic but the story is still good
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the beginning of the novel is practically the same as the original, but from the perspective of a secondary character, from the total focus to the original mc of the work, but little by little it is giving space to ling yao the mc of the fanfic, the story so far has been practically the same from the original, but little by little it’s changing, I’m enjoying the romance between mc and yaoyao the most beautiful girl in the original, I was a little annoyed to be watching su yu wei and zhao yuan flirting and the mc just looking, but now it’s getting better, my grade is low, but the soap opera is showing potential and if it continues like this it will be very good as long as it has a good update rate, if it improves I will increase the stars of the criticism, I am rooting a lot for mc and yaoyao and loving the author's choice for a slow and fluid romance, without anything forced, it would be disappointed if yaoyao fell in love at first sight with mc.
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I really hope you complete this amazing story and I respect you for writing it it's the first yuan zun fanfic in all fanfic sites and the story has alot of potential so thank you for the chapters
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Please keep your focus on this and release new chapters daily . Fan of your work .all the best and thank you for coming up with such a great story .
Here is the author of the novel "Reincarnated in the World of the Dragon Prince". Honestly, the only thing I can say is that the novel is good, but it could probably be better, I'm trying to do it😁. About the chapters under chapter 16, only one word can describe them that’s "garbage", yes garbage, all the chapters in chapter 16 are garbage and I would not advise anyone to read it without having much patience😩. Even so, when I read I always feel a great shame and always wonder how I wrote something like that 😂, hey, it's life, every human being learns from his mistakes from the past. However, the novel is fantastic for me😎
Finally! Finally! Hahaha! We finally reached 1 million views! Thanks to everyone who accompanied me on this fantastic journey, I hope you keep reading, because without you I wouldn't be here!👊🏾
Are you dropping this ??? please don't !!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
It’s a review for the previous version ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
First Yuan Zun fanfic i've read btw and God tier potential pls author continue this plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Pleas give us more😭😭 The story was good and i was really interested in seeing how it was gonna go out ahhhhh PLEASE COME BACK IM BEGGING !
Repeating chapters again and again. Dropped. Repeating chapters again and again. Dropped. Repeating chapters again and again. Dropped. Repeating chapters again and again. Dropped.
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So there are quite a few grammar mistakes which are really annoying, at some point I thought mtl could translate better. The story development could be better, it should be a ff but you often have the feeling that you read the original novel. We don't know much about the character, only a few of his power and his look. The update stability seems really bad, a few comments are really old and there are only 38 chapters, so it could be much better. World background is from the original novel. As result I expected much more from this ff.
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Good job keep it up... . ... ........ .. .............. ...... ...... ... ...... ... .. . .... . .Good job keep it up... . ... ........ .. .............. ...... ...... ... ...... ... .. . .... . .
Well It's a good story the only downpoint is that the is limiting the mc too much I mean his progression is being limited by the author cause his cultivation has no logic in it his too slow in progression he is only improving if the ''plot" moves his like limiting the mc because for "plot" sake it's not like he needed not to be op he just needs to hide his power well and move on with the plot
Yupp good job keep. It up i really like the progress of the story good job👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Respect for writing a Yuan Zun or Dragon Prince Yuan Fanfic! I have never seen one so I was kind of disappointed when I realized that. Thanks man😊! Keep up the good work!!!!
Please Mr. Author try to increase the release rate of the chapters 🙏🙏🙏🙏[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
D'abord je dois te remercier car ça fait plaisir de voir des auteurs Français de fanfic sur des lights novels en plus tu passe le bac et tu écris en anglais GG a toi le S hâte de voir comment tu vas développer l'histoire s/o next level😉
One of the greatest fanfiction i read in my point of view keep it up men good job...................................................................................................
1. slow paced 2. part of the chapters are a recap of the previous chapter 3. there are 5 chapters that seems like a copy paste from the original yuan zun, the worst part is its done in zhong yuan pov. 4. 5 wishes and some of that wasted already, 3 of that wish could be merged with a system with power from multiverses,,,, and genius in genesis rune only?? why not in genesis qi and body cultivation too?? only reason i read this after this is because there arent any fanfic about yuan zun other than this one
thanks for the chapters man here is your reward, a solid 5 gold star rating keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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You should focus more on the Mc and his skills than on the former Mc but in general chill I like it, keep going, you have a lot of people supporting you
💙♥️♥️💖💖💖💖💖♥️♥️♥️💖💖💖♥️♥️💙♥️♥️💖💖💖💗💖💖♥️♥️💙👍🏻💙💙💙💙💙💙👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻💙💙💙💙💙♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖👍🏻👍🏻💙💙💙💙👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
If used less Wuxia Terminology and acted like any other normal person from the 21st Century then that would improve the overall reading experience. Main character isn't relatable or realistic but the story is still good
AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing AMazing Thanks for writhing such an AMazing story
the beginning of the novel is practically the same as the original, but from the perspective of a secondary character, from the total focus to the original mc of the work, but little by little it is giving space to ling yao the mc of the fanfic, the story so far has been practically the same from the original, but little by little it’s changing, I’m enjoying the romance between mc and yaoyao the most beautiful girl in the original, I was a little annoyed to be watching su yu wei and zhao yuan flirting and the mc just looking, but now it’s getting better, my grade is low, but the soap opera is showing potential and if it continues like this it will be very good as long as it has a good update rate, if it improves I will increase the stars of the criticism, I am rooting a lot for mc and yaoyao and loving the author's choice for a slow and fluid romance, without anything forced, it would be disappointed if yaoyao fell in love at first sight with mc.
Just amazing and excellent book Just amazing and excellent book Just amazing and excellent book Just amazing and excellent book Just amazing and excellent book Thank you for completing it
I really hope you complete this amazing story and I respect you for writing it it's the first yuan zun fanfic in all fanfic sites and the story has alot of potential so thank you for the chapters
Awesome!!!!! This fanfic is the best!!!! Please do more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Please keep your focus on this and release new chapters daily . Fan of your work .all the best and thank you for coming up with such a great story .
Here is the author of the novel "Reincarnated in the World of the Dragon Prince". Honestly, the only thing I can say is that the novel is good, but it could probably be better, I'm trying to do it😁. About the chapters under chapter 16, only one word can describe them that’s "garbage", yes garbage, all the chapters in chapter 16 are garbage and I would not advise anyone to read it without having much patience😩. Even so, when I read I always feel a great shame and always wonder how I wrote something like that 😂, hey, it's life, every human being learns from his mistakes from the past. However, the novel is fantastic for me😎