Astro_young

male LV 10
2020-12-20 Bergabung Global
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Astro_young
Astro_young
1 years ago
Commented

Hello, how are you?, it has been years since I first read this fic, and I must say that I do not get tired of Re reading it. Simply a work to enjoy again and again like wine, today 2023 finish reading it again and let me say thank you, thank you for doing this work as far as you could. It is one of the best works that and read, unfortunately it was not officially completed as it should be but thank you thank you and thank you very much.

Astro_young
Astro_young
1 years ago
Commented

Brother you have a pretty good concept, do not leave this lying and try to be more recurrent with the chapters so hooked and one does not forget this work. [img=update]

Astro_young
Astro_young
2 years ago
Replied to iLoveHarem_S2

You need an urgent partner, and the hand does not quiet you

Astro_young
Astro_young
2 years ago
Replied to Seishiro

And here 1 year later, it just leaves a bad reading taste and you would get lost with the Pov

Astro_young
Astro_young
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter, a hug 🤗

Astro_young
Astro_young
2 years ago
Posted

Majestic work, one of the best, [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Astro_young
Astro_young
2 years ago
Commented

This good cap, it would be good to have a relationship his girls are more partners and partners than someone with whom to share real love

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Astro_young
Astro_young
2 years ago
Commented

Go at your own pace pa, It is a good literary work 👍🏻🔥

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Astro_young
Astro_young
2 years ago
Posted

Hmm como lo explico, primero sería bueno que subiera capítulos un poco mas seguido no se pero subes los caps después de 20 días y así, segundo la historia deberías hacer que Hades visite el tártaro para que consuma diversas almas y se haga mas fuerte luego que viaje a otros panteones de visita y seria bueno que el foco principal de la historia sea DXD

Astro_young
Astro_young
2 years ago
Posted

I like the theme of the world but hmm I feel that you should add a challenge, a war or something that puts the mc in trouble, give it something that puts it against the ropes and evolves on the fly. But otherwise this Super this project. [img=recommend][img=update]