Pokemon: Ultimate Generations

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OllieZ

- Good grammar and english (you'd be surprised how rare is this lol) - Not usually fan on the potential thing in Pokémon, but you handle it well - The pacing is quite good - He steals and is from other people. But he is not downright cruel and evil - Not too much focused in the system. - Not OP from the start. Doesn't have OP cheats either. If you'd like to read a quiality Pokemon fic, this novel is for you.

LV 14

GreekAres

I noticed that you havent gotten a review yet, and i thought it would be a shame for pokemon-fans to skip this novel based on this. So the story is about a transmigrated male that comes from earth, he’s got a system, but it only got the appraisal ability and in a later chapter the Mc got a quest (so its not one of the boring op ones where mc is the strongest in 7 chapters). The Mc joined team rocket from the start and he isnt scared to steal pokemon from other trainers ( he hasnt done it yet, but there is a possibility that he will), the story explains seceral things about the team rocket group and show the interraction between the mc and team rocket grunts and other team rocket members, its an exciting FF with an unusual background, i myself find it refreshing that the mc isnt a «hero» that helps every single person he see, and spew annoying cringeworthy speeches out of nowhere, there is also no harem which is a plus (it just doesnt mesh well with the pokemon world), the stability of updates is great, the grammar is perfect, the world background is good, and the Mc doesnt seem fake at all, and it seems that there are some depth to him. Thanks for the novel, and keep it up.

LV 4

ShinBowlNoodles

good english and grammar, the main character is in kanto if you are wondering i recommend reading it.

LV 4

this_your_bush

I'm really enjoying this very much. Your English is really good without any noticeable grammar mistakes. The only thing I don't like is that it's a lot like the games. Try to add some good battling scenes. Great job so far. Great idea about having 2 teams!

LV 5

Devil_Hex

Review till CHP 47 Kinda pretty ordinary so far. All mechanics followed in the fanfic are from the games, so not as realistic as when one follows manga or anime (u know, dumb rules like if u catch 7th Pokémon, it teleports to PC, or pokemons getting healed in 5 mins in that machine and so on) MC is reasonable character. He doesn't remember everything from the games, but he does remember the crucial info that anyone who loves pokemon games should know. He is smart (but not so smart that everyone else seems shit Infront of MC). Though the chp 47 had MC suddenly act incredibly dumb. I really hope author doesn't screw up the fanfic by making MC's intelligence inconsistent just to suit the plot. Other characters are reasonably intelligent too, though the ones with inexperience act dumb initially (but not much focus is given to them, a quarter chapter at most) Issue :- Lots of confusion exist as to which mons MC should/will train due to him acquiring too many mons of 3*/4* potential. So that's one thing author could come clean on in one of the chapters ahead. Will MC only train 2 teams of 6 mons, or will he train 30-40 mons? Good - Grammar is pretty good. Very few mistakes.

LV 3

PolarKuma

Should’ve used the appearance card later though. First join team rocket, accumulate rank and power, then use the appearance card to switch to alliance group. Tsk.

LV 5

Dracmon13

it's kind of forced from what I saw, in chapter 43-46, he just forgets about the thunderbolt, for the love right author, really idiot

LV 10

SpeedwagonDrip

author pls dont drop this is one of the few novels i actually enjoy author pls dont drop this is one of the few novels i actually enjoy author pls dont drop this is one of the few novels i actually enjoy

LV 13

JimiMali04

Author can't you continue your previous novel? 'Dungeon System' that novel is one of my favourite i hope you will continue that novel.. please...

LV 5

MechanicalHeart101

I absolutely love your book. Please keep it up. it is fun and makes sense. Pokémon is honestly my favourite anime. This fanfic is the best I have read in a while. Great work 🙂👍

LV 14

JoSauer

I realy like this novel. Its not as good as similar novels like Master of Tactics and the early chapters of Rise of the Dark Pokemon but its still my second most looked forward novel on this site and way better than Lengendary Pokrmon Trainer. If anyone has suggestions of pokemon with a aptitude System I would be quite grateful.

LV 15

TehHawks

Love the story flow and take on the pokemon world. Sadly it seems to have been dropped

LV 15

Tunic01

1fml? or harem?.................... ........ .............. . . .............. ....... ........... ... . ...........

LV 4

Betoran2

Writting Quality 3/5 It could had been a 4/5 because the grammar get better, not good but better which... is something. Stability of Updates 2/5 Story Development 4/5 Yeah, it really does developt and maintains the tags, mostly(antihero? more like villain). Character Design 4/5 Should really see about how some characters act more from a chinese novel. Most characters are just big stereotypes or very repetitive in terms of intellect and emotional reactions. They are bland really. But most characters from the series are actually spot on. World Background 5/5 It has a very good worldbuilding on the first chapters, a little rushed but not enough to make me annoyed at the start but that is to be expected because of the whole "entering a new world" part of the story. This novel is actually quite refreshing... if you can ignore the MC. Yes. quite the contradiction isn't it? Well, that is because as the tag says. MC is an anti-hero. Well, the tag itself is wrong. He isn't an antihero. Just a villain. Which I dislike quite a lot. Literally, his first choice of what to do in the pokemon world is "lets join team rocket!" and the first person who he meet and helped him... well, he though about stealing his pokeballs but didn't because the dude was stacked. So, yeah. The MC is quite literally a arrogant young master from a chinese story, it has a lot of chinese tropes too. But overall, it sticks to the whole antihero persona(character with way more negative qualities than good ones). The fact that this story isn't your typical "Do x mission to get x broken power" is another good point. System is there just to help mc measure his prey and enemies but isn't really "useful" because a 2* can beat a 4*. For those that want a villain story, this is it. Just... I really dislike the MC and everything he represents but I must give a neutral review so here. But don't expect a lot of logic from MC, he literally runs to other regions to try and not call attention even though he is famous in his region... but what does he do? He uses the same pokemons(he has a lot of other pokemons that do not connect to his villain persona) and even some that had their wanted posters in his region when ENTERING another region. He even speaks about not calling attention but decides to fight the first dude that challenges him and uses the most obvious way to make him being notice by using a pokemon that forces everyone to puke and run away from the smell making him infamous. But, overall and average story. 3,6 final score.

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victor_dupretz

More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

LV 4

Kancha_T

This story is as good as Pokemon master of tactics but with a more fast paced MC. Absolutely loved this story. Highly recommended to read this!

LV 4

Sato_Shiii

this novel is awesome!!!!! its perfect for all those people who love cunning clever and opporturnistic mc, really worth ur time although updating stability is not that stable ,still gonna give 5 star ch 70-ish Really gave me the goosebumps

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JohnSonic3

I'm so glad that I found such a wonderful gem of a story, I always love MC that are chaotic neutral, excited for the update to see what will happen next!!