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awesome novel. Keep it up but I've a few questions.... 1st, how old are they especially vy and ly, el is probably 3 or 5 2nd king and princess are otherworlders, I'm guessing being one is possibly somewhat rare but not unheard of, but what are the chances of bother father and daughter being both otherworlders and I need more information altogether. There are some questions answered along the way, but many more are unanswered also, where are the baby vipers, and what are their names?
This story is one of the most interesting that I've ever read on here! I love how the MC has so much power and is so smart about how to use it! Good work! I can't wait to read more!
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Boring (extensive food and meal descriptions - is this another cooking show clone? boring long dialogs - a style invented to add word count while not having to write much story, grammar issues (mixing of tenses).
Iβm glad to feast both my eyes and mind on this amazing original webnovel. The world and characters will grow onto you. Coupled with the good writing, you will be in for a rollercoaster ride with the fellow protagonists! Thankful to author-sama for completing this. If its a novel in hardcopy format, I wouldnt mind purchasing it π Hope that more webnovel readers could stumble upon this gem soon! I shall now head over to author-samaβs new novel :D Byebye~
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! γmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comγ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iβm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Membuka SPOILER
I really don't understand what is going on with this novel, I see plenty of hype.. but the tags seem way off. She gets a system, abilities and gear right off the bat but then doesn't explore them?! She very rarely used the system and instead of doing anything of note she finds menial labor and settles down in a town!? How is this action and adventure, let alone system... And to be clear, I would be fine with any of this if we understood the characters motivations. The only time we do, is when we hear her say she doesn't want to know more about her dagger, wanting to understand it herself... which she then doesn't do.
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I admit to liking transmigration novels a lot as well as fantasy and romance stories. As such, I tend to read the synopsis, and add them to my library to determine whether I should keep or remove. With this novel, for some strange reason is not holding my interest. In that I'm reading but I'm not getting into the FL who I'm sure is written as an extraordinary person. The world seems okay and so far the people but as stated my interest is not invested in the story in terms of emotions. I do not feel them just an okay vibe which is not good for the library as it means a short stay. This of course is no fault of the author per se its just that a reader's taste and interest differs. I am sure the novel is fine for others and even great for some but for me though its early yet, at this state its not going to be in my library for long. Take care author.
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Iβm going to write another review about this novel! To all people who are deciding whether to read this novel or not, you should read it! This novel, I rate it 10/10! This novel is interesting, unique, and fun to read! You wonβt regret reading this! :D
Iβve just started reading this novel and I have to say, this novel is awesome! Good work author! :)
Iβve just started reading this, and itβs great!!! I love novels where the MC is admired and gets powerful as the story progresses and seeing Vy being admired makes me happy and proud for some reason π π π π πππ ππ§‘β£οΈβ£οΈππππβ€οΈπππππππππ€πππ§‘β£οΈπππππβ£οΈπ§‘πππππβ€οΈβ£οΈβ€οΈβ£οΈβ€οΈπβ£οΈπππππππππβ€οΈππππππππ§‘πππππ€ππππππ
This novel seems interesting so I put this in my reading list. Iβm planning on reading this novel. Iβm also doing this for exp, donβt mind me. (~^-^)~
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(Chapter 31 review) Hey! Not a writer or an editor.. be forewarned just like to read! Nothing to complain about writing quality wise. Little to no grammar errors. Flows smoothly and if there are any errors i glossed over them. In this novel we find ourselves following a young women by the name of Veronica black fire, who was thrust into someoneβs elseβs body w/o her memories after dying in her old world. She has a system that acts more like a guide for now and the world is a magic world. Unsure about the power scale or how the magic works really. Main gripes the main character really just casually does things that should not be glossed over. Like she would casually use magic for her first time or eat raw flesh like it was lighting a match and drinking a cup of water. We donβt know her thought while she is doing this and really lacks depths, needs further details to keep the story less jarring. Why did she use magic?! how ?! When did she learn ?
Membuka SPOILER
I love this story. The characters in it and the plot. I can stop reading it and i can't wait to see how the story goes. A must read. I definitely recommend this.
This is really good I really recommend you read this book on your own time cause it's so good and so addicting. I love the story plot and the characters as well. π
Hi Everyone! It's Author san here, finally ready to give her shameless review! This is the first-ever novel I have published here on Webnovel so I hope you all are enjoying it so far! <New World New Life> is the story of a woman's adventure through this fantasy world! She will face plenty of obstacles, meet both friend and foe. She may or may not meet the person she had been searching for, you'll have to read to find out! Writing Quality: I try to edit as much as I can before I upload, although I will admit that more can be done! I am open to feedback, so please let me know if you have any! Stability of Updates: I am aiming to maintain 1 chapter a day at 11.00 am (GMT +8) for as long as this novel goes~ Cross my fingers I might be able to get an extra chapter out here and there! Character Design: There will be tons and tons of characters that come through the story, only a selected few would recur throughout. I try and make them unique from one another so that they don't all feel the same. World Background: This World (maybe worlds?) is vast and contains multiple continents. Do not be surprised to see inspiration from real-world places too! If you have any questions and comments, please feel free to leave them here too! I would love to read them and answer them too! Have an awesome day! <Updated as of 15th March 2020>
awesome novel. Keep it up but I've a few questions.... 1st, how old are they especially vy and ly, el is probably 3 or 5 2nd king and princess are otherworlders, I'm guessing being one is possibly somewhat rare but not unheard of, but what are the chances of bother father and daughter being both otherworlders and I need more information altogether. There are some questions answered along the way, but many more are unanswered also, where are the baby vipers, and what are their names?
This story is one of the most interesting that I've ever read on here! I love how the MC has so much power and is so smart about how to use it! Good work! I can't wait to read more!
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Boring (extensive food and meal descriptions - is this another cooking show clone? boring long dialogs - a style invented to add word count while not having to write much story, grammar issues (mixing of tenses).
Iβm glad to feast both my eyes and mind on this amazing original webnovel. The world and characters will grow onto you. Coupled with the good writing, you will be in for a rollercoaster ride with the fellow protagonists! Thankful to author-sama for completing this. If its a novel in hardcopy format, I wouldnt mind purchasing it π Hope that more webnovel readers could stumble upon this gem soon! I shall now head over to author-samaβs new novel :D Byebye~
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! γmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comγ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iβm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Membuka SPOILER I really don't understand what is going on with this novel, I see plenty of hype.. but the tags seem way off. She gets a system, abilities and gear right off the bat but then doesn't explore them?! She very rarely used the system and instead of doing anything of note she finds menial labor and settles down in a town!? How is this action and adventure, let alone system... And to be clear, I would be fine with any of this if we understood the characters motivations. The only time we do, is when we hear her say she doesn't want to know more about her dagger, wanting to understand it herself... which she then doesn't do.
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Membuka SPOILER I admit to liking transmigration novels a lot as well as fantasy and romance stories. As such, I tend to read the synopsis, and add them to my library to determine whether I should keep or remove. With this novel, for some strange reason is not holding my interest. In that I'm reading but I'm not getting into the FL who I'm sure is written as an extraordinary person. The world seems okay and so far the people but as stated my interest is not invested in the story in terms of emotions. I do not feel them just an okay vibe which is not good for the library as it means a short stay. This of course is no fault of the author per se its just that a reader's taste and interest differs. I am sure the novel is fine for others and even great for some but for me though its early yet, at this state its not going to be in my library for long. Take care author.
β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ§‘π§‘π§‘ππππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ§‘π§‘π§‘ππππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ§‘π§‘π§‘ππππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ§‘π§‘π§‘ππππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ§‘π§‘π§‘ππππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ§‘π§‘π§‘ππππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ§‘π§‘π§‘ππππππππππππ
Iβm going to write another review about this novel! To all people who are deciding whether to read this novel or not, you should read it! This novel, I rate it 10/10! This novel is interesting, unique, and fun to read! You wonβt regret reading this! :D
Iβve just started reading this novel and I have to say, this novel is awesome! Good work author! :)
Iβve just started reading this, and itβs great!!! I love novels where the MC is admired and gets powerful as the story progresses and seeing Vy being admired makes me happy and proud for some reason π π π π πππ ππ§‘β£οΈβ£οΈππππβ€οΈπππππππππ€πππ§‘β£οΈπππππβ£οΈπ§‘πππππβ€οΈβ£οΈβ€οΈβ£οΈβ€οΈπβ£οΈπππππππππβ€οΈππππππππ§‘πππππ€ππππππ
This novel seems interesting so I put this in my reading list. Iβm planning on reading this novel. Iβm also doing this for exp, donβt mind me. (~^-^)~
I love it, it is so interesting and upsetting.β‘β‘β‘β‘β₯οΈβ‘β‘β‘β‘β₯οΈβ‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘Β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘‘‘‘ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] update please
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(Chapter 31 review) Hey! Not a writer or an editor.. be forewarned just like to read! Nothing to complain about writing quality wise. Little to no grammar errors. Flows smoothly and if there are any errors i glossed over them. In this novel we find ourselves following a young women by the name of Veronica black fire, who was thrust into someoneβs elseβs body w/o her memories after dying in her old world. She has a system that acts more like a guide for now and the world is a magic world. Unsure about the power scale or how the magic works really. Main gripes the main character really just casually does things that should not be glossed over. Like she would casually use magic for her first time or eat raw flesh like it was lighting a match and drinking a cup of water. We donβt know her thought while she is doing this and really lacks depths, needs further details to keep the story less jarring. Why did she use magic?! how ?! When did she learn ?
Membuka SPOILER I love this story. The characters in it and the plot. I can stop reading it and i can't wait to see how the story goes. A must read. I definitely recommend this.
This is really good I really recommend you read this book on your own time cause it's so good and so addicting. I love the story plot and the characters as well. π
Hi Everyone! It's Author san here, finally ready to give her shameless review! This is the first-ever novel I have published here on Webnovel so I hope you all are enjoying it so far! <New World New Life> is the story of a woman's adventure through this fantasy world! She will face plenty of obstacles, meet both friend and foe. She may or may not meet the person she had been searching for, you'll have to read to find out! Writing Quality: I try to edit as much as I can before I upload, although I will admit that more can be done! I am open to feedback, so please let me know if you have any! Stability of Updates: I am aiming to maintain 1 chapter a day at 11.00 am (GMT +8) for as long as this novel goes~ Cross my fingers I might be able to get an extra chapter out here and there! Character Design: There will be tons and tons of characters that come through the story, only a selected few would recur throughout. I try and make them unique from one another so that they don't all feel the same. World Background: This World (maybe worlds?) is vast and contains multiple continents. Do not be surprised to see inspiration from real-world places too! If you have any questions and comments, please feel free to leave them here too! I would love to read them and answer them too! Have an awesome day! <Updated as of 15th March 2020>