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I love this series dont know when the second season will come out but they need to hurry it up man I can't wait much longer so I'm hoping they will continue the series and realise the 2nd season very soon.
This story got me on a rollercoaster ride I swear. I'm really glad I get to find an amazing and refreshing story. Sometimes I get really tired of others with the same story type. But this! This is a gem! 15/10 would read all over again. โฅโฅ
๐๐ผ๐๐ผGreat story and good fast pace! Itโs so nice for one that flows and get going! Loving this story with its interesting FL๐ฆพ๐ฆพ Still waiting for a ML ๐ค๐ค
This novel is interesting and I overall recommend reading it. It is so exciting and fascinating to read and enjoy when your bored or not doing anything
I enjoy the progress of this novel and look forward to continuing reading each chapter. The characters seems well rounded and progressing quite nice.
This story moves really fast solving our FL problems. I love stories with โsystems โ which gives our lead characters all kinds of weapons,knowledge,answers and help.
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I'm all caught up and I want more. I'm loving how the story is developing. ๐๐๐ Thank you for letting us read this wonderful story you've thought up!
Like the starting โ10โ chapters. This story is different from most because the drama/issues havenโt started from the beginning. Because the beginning is so peaceful,the issues will come as a surprise.
I was quite happily surprised by this story. It's well written and the plot has me hooked; there's a lot of stuff going on that has me intrigued and eager to read more. definitely worth picking up!
This book is amazing, currently at all available chapters. Even after 130 chapters I find myself eagerly awaiting the release of the next chapter. Hidden within the words of the pages is a complex world that explores human and non human nature, takes you in the air and across the wide world. A little bit of luck, and sometimes a lack thereof, this novel keeps a person guessing. Coupled with an author that takes time to respond to comments and tries to engage author-reader interactions you feel connected to the very source of the crwative process. WARNING this book id a ripping good page turner, so be prepared for the binge reading! โค
It is really interesting to be a most powerful person even you are just a woman in the long run people will always have to see that whatever man can do a woman can do also.
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There is no romance tag is there a ML in this Novel??? ฤฐf there is ML don't read it๐ง๐ง๐ง ๐ง๐ป๐ฝ๐ฝ๐น๐คซ๐๐น๐๐๐๐๐๐คฎ๐๐คซ๐คฌ๐ฏ๐คฌ๐ฏ๐คซ๐คฌ๐ฏ๐๐น๐ฝโญ๐คโ ๏ธ๐๐ค๐ก๐๐ฝโ ๏ธ๐ป๐น๐ง๐ก๐๐ค๐ก๐๐คฏ๐๐ฝ๐โ ๏ธ๐คฌ๐ค๐คซ๐ป๐น๐ค๐ค๐ปโญ๐คฏ๐ก๐โ ๏ธ๐ค๐คฌ๐ ๐ฏ๐คค๐ ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฝโ ๏ธโญ๐ป๐๐๐ค๐ป๐น๐ค๐คฌ๐คฉโ ๏ธ๐๐ค๐ป๐น๐๐๐โญ๐คฏ๐ก๐ค๐ค๐ป๐ฏ๐ฝโ ๏ธ
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐Love ๐ this book keep up the good work.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
This is truly an amazing story I just started reading this this morning and it's 5 or so hours later and am finished with the recent update. I want to thank the author for making such a good novel and to keep up the great work. :)
As a reader it felt like I was on a backseat, watching Vy, it is a very good novel for me to read. Usually I leave novels in chunks so I can read them over the course of a few days but I ended up reading the whole thing in one day, I kinda got sucked into it. I can't think of any problems, maybe just try to fit in a little bit more world-building so we know more about the place? But I'm still enjoying it nonetheless. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the subsequent chapters :) pssst, I like how badass Vy can be...
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Exp ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐โบ๏ธ๐ค๐๐๐ค๐๐คฃ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ
ok i luv it is so cool ...........................wait.................................๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐done
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As of ch 20 Ive read a lot of system stories. And the first thing i noticed is that the novel is very face paced. But it lacks a lot, it lacks depth in characters the main female. The fl in my opinion does have any charismatic quality yet, to grab my attention to fall deep in love with her and the novel early on. This novel lacks early world building. Even if it has magic they just brush paced the very basic of the basic to continue the flow of chapters but not the whole (at least no yet). The characters introduced are background characters and tying in to being faced paced the fl build connections to these background charcters very quick. Like it feels forced not seemless like i see in other novels. I.m.o i rate the novel maybe a 2.5/5. Its on the weaker side to reincarnation/system genre. So take it with grain of salt.
Writing Quality: Way better than most; delightful to read Stability of updates: I binged my way through all the chapters so far in one sitting. I did glance at the dates for each chapter and it looks like the story is updated regularly. Story Development: I really don't like that the MC seems to run into overly nice, helpful, trusting people everywhere. It doesn't seem like the MC encounters meaningful challenges. The plot armor seems a little too strong to me. Otherwise, the story telling is pretty good. Character Design: The MC is very likeable. I like the fact that the System in this story also seems to have some personality to it. Still too early for me to say much about the other characters as most other characters aren't too developed yet. World Background: I like the fact that we discover the world gradually as the MC does. There is no giant info dump to slog through. The world is still somewhat mysterious and I am looking forward the the way it is gradually developed. Overall: I'm really liking the story so far. I'd be really surprised if this doesn't become one of the more popular, trending stories in the future.
(Currently at chapter 38) Full five star review ~ Their is nothing to complain about. Interesting story with much potential. Plot development is their, neither too slow or too fast. The world is described in much detail. Characters aren't shallow. What else is their to say? It's a good story and probably worth your time. I strongly recommend this story to all people who love good fantasy.
It so interesting to read please update we you have a chance .........................................................................................
Give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go,
Just the first few chapters and you are hooked. Good development, easy to follow, great plot and unlike the classical reincarnation novels there are no death by suicide, murder or something, so very straight forward. The system can converse so it is a bit different from the classic, and I gotta say we have the same idea-ish in mind. Keep up the good work! And I added the book to the library, looking forward to further updates!
Here's a brief summary of the first few chapters๐... "I GOT HOOKED, and there's no question about it!!".... It's a novel that anyone would want to read all through the end, in all honesty beyond any reasonable doubt. Author-sama, I have one request... To continue writing not a good read, but one of the " BEST READS" that anyone would have a great time of reading fulfillment! We're with you in your writing endeavors๐ God bless!! We will be silently waiting for the upcoming updates๐
Never thought that it would be an interesting story! At first, to be frank I really had difficulty remembering the names, but as chapters moved by i hit used to it. Where am I seemed a little clitch at first impress but had a different plot in the inside. Three gifts... And other chapters were also interesting, hope this author continues the story instead of abandoning it. And I don't found any fault with plots till now at 20+ chapters.
OMG, m already reading few stories by I never thought that I ll hooked with this also Cz I ws thinkin let's finish others first bt after I started reading this I kinda liked it Thnku author for an interesting story. Thumbs up
I love this series dont know when the second season will come out but they need to hurry it up man I can't wait much longer so I'm hoping they will continue the series and realise the 2nd season very soon.
This story got me on a rollercoaster ride I swear. I'm really glad I get to find an amazing and refreshing story. Sometimes I get really tired of others with the same story type. But this! This is a gem! 15/10 would read all over again. โฅโฅ
๐๐ผ๐๐ผGreat story and good fast pace! Itโs so nice for one that flows and get going! Loving this story with its interesting FL๐ฆพ๐ฆพ Still waiting for a ML ๐ค๐ค
This novel is interesting and I overall recommend reading it. It is so exciting and fascinating to read and enjoy when your bored or not doing anything
I enjoy the progress of this novel and look forward to continuing reading each chapter. The characters seems well rounded and progressing quite nice.
This story moves really fast solving our FL problems. I love stories with โsystems โ which gives our lead characters all kinds of weapons,knowledge,answers and help.
Membuka SPOILER I'm all caught up and I want more. I'm loving how the story is developing. ๐๐๐ Thank you for letting us read this wonderful story you've thought up!
Like the starting โ10โ chapters. This story is different from most because the drama/issues havenโt started from the beginning. Because the beginning is so peaceful,the issues will come as a surprise.
I was quite happily surprised by this story. It's well written and the plot has me hooked; there's a lot of stuff going on that has me intrigued and eager to read more. definitely worth picking up!
This book is amazing, currently at all available chapters. Even after 130 chapters I find myself eagerly awaiting the release of the next chapter. Hidden within the words of the pages is a complex world that explores human and non human nature, takes you in the air and across the wide world. A little bit of luck, and sometimes a lack thereof, this novel keeps a person guessing. Coupled with an author that takes time to respond to comments and tries to engage author-reader interactions you feel connected to the very source of the crwative process. WARNING this book id a ripping good page turner, so be prepared for the binge reading! โค
It is really interesting to be a most powerful person even you are just a woman in the long run people will always have to see that whatever man can do a woman can do also.
Membuka SPOILER There is no romance tag is there a ML in this Novel??? ฤฐf there is ML don't read it๐ง๐ง๐ง ๐ง๐ป๐ฝ๐ฝ๐น๐คซ๐๐น๐๐๐๐๐๐คฎ๐๐คซ๐คฌ๐ฏ๐คฌ๐ฏ๐คซ๐คฌ๐ฏ๐๐น๐ฝโญ๐คโ ๏ธ๐๐ค๐ก๐๐ฝโ ๏ธ๐ป๐น๐ง๐ก๐๐ค๐ก๐๐คฏ๐๐ฝ๐โ ๏ธ๐คฌ๐ค๐คซ๐ป๐น๐ค๐ค๐ปโญ๐คฏ๐ก๐โ ๏ธ๐ค๐คฌ๐ ๐ฏ๐คค๐ ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฝโ ๏ธโญ๐ป๐๐๐ค๐ป๐น๐ค๐คฌ๐คฉโ ๏ธ๐๐ค๐ป๐น๐๐๐โญ๐คฏ๐ก๐ค๐ค๐ป๐ฏ๐ฝโ ๏ธ
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐Love ๐ this book keep up the good work.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
This is truly an amazing story I just started reading this this morning and it's 5 or so hours later and am finished with the recent update. I want to thank the author for making such a good novel and to keep up the great work. :)
As a reader it felt like I was on a backseat, watching Vy, it is a very good novel for me to read. Usually I leave novels in chunks so I can read them over the course of a few days but I ended up reading the whole thing in one day, I kinda got sucked into it. I can't think of any problems, maybe just try to fit in a little bit more world-building so we know more about the place? But I'm still enjoying it nonetheless. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the subsequent chapters :) pssst, I like how badass Vy can be...
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Exp ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐โบ๏ธ๐ค๐๐๐ค๐๐คฃ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ
ok i luv it is so cool ...........................wait.................................๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐done
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As of ch 20 Ive read a lot of system stories. And the first thing i noticed is that the novel is very face paced. But it lacks a lot, it lacks depth in characters the main female. The fl in my opinion does have any charismatic quality yet, to grab my attention to fall deep in love with her and the novel early on. This novel lacks early world building. Even if it has magic they just brush paced the very basic of the basic to continue the flow of chapters but not the whole (at least no yet). The characters introduced are background characters and tying in to being faced paced the fl build connections to these background charcters very quick. Like it feels forced not seemless like i see in other novels. I.m.o i rate the novel maybe a 2.5/5. Its on the weaker side to reincarnation/system genre. So take it with grain of salt.
Writing Quality: Way better than most; delightful to read Stability of updates: I binged my way through all the chapters so far in one sitting. I did glance at the dates for each chapter and it looks like the story is updated regularly. Story Development: I really don't like that the MC seems to run into overly nice, helpful, trusting people everywhere. It doesn't seem like the MC encounters meaningful challenges. The plot armor seems a little too strong to me. Otherwise, the story telling is pretty good. Character Design: The MC is very likeable. I like the fact that the System in this story also seems to have some personality to it. Still too early for me to say much about the other characters as most other characters aren't too developed yet. World Background: I like the fact that we discover the world gradually as the MC does. There is no giant info dump to slog through. The world is still somewhat mysterious and I am looking forward the the way it is gradually developed. Overall: I'm really liking the story so far. I'd be really surprised if this doesn't become one of the more popular, trending stories in the future.
(Currently at chapter 38) Full five star review ~ Their is nothing to complain about. Interesting story with much potential. Plot development is their, neither too slow or too fast. The world is described in much detail. Characters aren't shallow. What else is their to say? It's a good story and probably worth your time. I strongly recommend this story to all people who love good fantasy.
It so interesting to read please update we you have a chance .........................................................................................
Give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go,
Just the first few chapters and you are hooked. Good development, easy to follow, great plot and unlike the classical reincarnation novels there are no death by suicide, murder or something, so very straight forward. The system can converse so it is a bit different from the classic, and I gotta say we have the same idea-ish in mind. Keep up the good work! And I added the book to the library, looking forward to further updates!
Here's a brief summary of the first few chapters๐... "I GOT HOOKED, and there's no question about it!!".... It's a novel that anyone would want to read all through the end, in all honesty beyond any reasonable doubt. Author-sama, I have one request... To continue writing not a good read, but one of the " BEST READS" that anyone would have a great time of reading fulfillment! We're with you in your writing endeavors๐ God bless!! We will be silently waiting for the upcoming updates๐
Never thought that it would be an interesting story! At first, to be frank I really had difficulty remembering the names, but as chapters moved by i hit used to it. Where am I seemed a little clitch at first impress but had a different plot in the inside. Three gifts... And other chapters were also interesting, hope this author continues the story instead of abandoning it. And I don't found any fault with plots till now at 20+ chapters.
OMG, m already reading few stories by I never thought that I ll hooked with this also Cz I ws thinkin let's finish others first bt after I started reading this I kinda liked it Thnku author for an interesting story. Thumbs up