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Star Wars: New Fate (Dropped)
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Layan died at the hand of an Empire's assassin and found a way to send his consciousness back into the past.
What will be the consequences of his actions?
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great story, as well as very well made with a constant update of new chapters. the story doesn't progress too quickly but not too slow either just perfect. keep up this amazing work.
I dont like star wars...make no mistake I love the characters..the lore...the weapons..I just dont like it cause theirs a **** ton of stuff but thats what makes it great,,,,so when I read FF's most of the time I dont understand some of the references..but some FFs write dope **** that despite not understanding you still enjoy it..this one is like that.its amazing ..only sad thing is that theres tragic **** here...maybe add some fluff and happiness to balance out the depressing **** like slavery and ****.BUT its still great...
I was very excited to read this novel, when i read the firsts three chapters my animation only increased, but soon after that the novel went downhill, the author writes very well, has an interesting idea, the universe star wars is incredible, but the execution is done in a very poor way, I felt like the author was very excited and worked hard in the firsts three chapters, but after that he got unmotivated and started writing in a lazy way (no offense, just my feeling). The protagonist has a personality (?) Incompatible with his life story, he is not a genius, he did not start training since he was a child, he does not have any kind of miraculous treasure, and he is not the most hardworking, he had motivations, but when he "transmigrated" these motivations weakened, he practically wants nothing, he is just living, in one of the first great difficulties that he faced, he DIED, even so he still has an inexplicable desire to train a padawan ... That does not make sense. The story has become boring, nothing happens, the "firsts" chapters are based on encounters with uninteresting characters, dialogues with uninteresting characters, shopping with uninteresting characters and traveling with uninteresting characters. ... I don't feel any progression, the MC did not "look" for his kyber crystal (in he previous life he did), there was no search for interesting pieces to assemble his lightsaber, there was no depth in the act, he simply bought the pieces in a store and assembled an absolutely generic saber... I don't feel any progression ², the MC does not train, he only teaches, his padawan does not have an interesting history, it is simply forcibly introduced, it is not natural, the author wanted the MC to have an apprentice, so he simply forced her in the history I don't feel any progression ³, i have no idea of the powers that the protagonist has and how powerful he became after he transmigrated, the author leaves everything very vague, you don't know the strength of the MC or the level of skill that he has with a saber. The novel has a lot of potential, the author writes very well and the universe is incredible, but honestly, i would prefer if the protagonist had not died and continued on his original timeline...
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I don’t have much to say about the story, it’s good, I can’t judge by everyone, but as this is a comment session I’ll leave my opinion. Boring, the protagonist is the type who has a horrible past, he remembers all the time that it was horrible but he remains a “humanity” guy, he went through a lot of things in fact, he may even go to the dark side in the future, God knows, but at least I don't have the patience for this kind of relaxed soap opera. Honestly, his padawã only appeared to fill his patience, the protagonist broke the unwritten law that is not talked about before transmigrating or reincarnating, not that it is a serious rule, but like the pirate codex, it is more of an "orientation" , which I dare say I follow faithfully, well, that's it, it's not my type of story, but it can be yours, have fun.
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Really good story, amazing useage of star wars lore (at least legends) i need to feel this thing with 140 characters, keep up the good work author
Love the story. It's a great idea and I love the OC. Having a MC of a fanfic that isn't human was refreshing, and character development is great. The characters themselves are all nice and add to the plot nicely. Overall, my only complaint is that it seems dropped, I hope the author picks it back up again.
I am so enthralled by the world in which you have created within the canon of star wars making characters of your own and interacting with the canon characters. This fan fiction is top for star wars I just wish that there can be more chapter uploads. You have inspired me to think about making a star wars fan fiction as well I just need to think where it goes :) thanks again for this fan fiction my only negative of this fan fiction is the slow chapter release that is all.
Great story, I have learned a lot about the Star Wars universe and planets. I would recommend this as it has long chapters and great lore to be had.
I like this 10/10 Filling: HshehwvhdhehdhvdhdbjdujdhjsvvdhjdkkdbdvhshdhdjdjwjjwjdjbdjdjdidopdpdldkkdjdhdhhehdjduehejjedjdjdjdjdjdjudjdkskdidkdjdjjdhdhhshdhhehdhdhjdbdjydkfhizguztkzgkshkzgjzgjzgjzjsrusfhsfhsrharuFjatusrusruatjsrusruurw
Despite the somewhat poor grammar and occasional improper word use, this is probably the best star wars fanfic I've read on this site. it's unfortunate that it's in hiatus, and I hope that it isn't actually dropped. if the author had this story edited and started posting again I'd give this story a 5 easily. even without further editing I'd love to see this story picked back up.
This is the only novel I have found that has executed the traveling back in a elegant way that addresses not only the consequences of changing the past in major ways but also the moral and ethical implications of changing them as well as the question of whether the order even deserves to be saved. Ot has a so far beautifully executed arc of character growth as well as the development of the story as it isn't a granteed victory because of the lack of knowledge he had before he came back. There is actual ******* and suspense about whether he will mess up or not because it is a real possibility he wasn't in any prominent position or or special place to know the full backstory behind order 66 so he is operating on fragmented information and what he learned from shaak ti and the empire. I love this novel because it actually makes you care about the characters and their is real mystery as to whether he will succeed or fail.
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Après avoir lu une 2eme fois pour trouver des failles Je dis bravo à l’auteur Mon anglais n'étant pas très bon, je reste neutre d'un point de vue grammatical Je me permets cependant d'écrire mon opinion de l'histoire, la conception des personnages et le contexte mondial L’histoire tiens le rythme les condition son possible dans le monde Star Wars. Puissance économique, militaire, politique sont nécessaire pour changer l’histoire, le mc n’est pas un bourrin qui agis sans réfléchir, il sait où sont les failles et exploite ses connaissances historiques Même si les changements déjà effectué influence déjà la guerre des clones. Spoiler : si Jango quitte les séparatistes maintenant, il y a peu de chance que ce soit lui qui tente d’assassiner la sénatrice, Obiwan ne peut plus remonter jusqu’à kamino. L’armée n’est donc pas découverte. La guerre peut débute d’une manière très différente. L’histoire peut prendre une tournure très différente Les personnages et leurs points de vue sont en constante évolution, la plus flagrante de tous est Lyn, qui évolue vraiment vite peut être même trop vite à mon gout. Le contexte mondial de star wars est un mélange de politique et de science-fiction et l’auteur intègre merveilleusement bien l’univers étendu dans le contexte mondial montrant les divisions jedi/jedi vert/sith et république/csi star wars n’est pas un endroit simple pour ecrire une fanfiction Tous mes encouragements et surtout n’abandonne pas. ^^ Je le classe dans le top 3 de mes fanfiction avec 1- Bend in time (harry potter) 2- Dragonborn saga (skyrim) 3- Star wars new fate (star wars) 4- Pokemon a mystical journey (pokemon)
a very good star wars fanfiction, continues like that. the story has a good pace, we wait with haste for historical situations. we make it attract in history, waiting for a new chapter and that's great.
Over all I like the direction and outlook that this story comes from. The author made a great character and has given him a mission worthy to draw in fans.
I really love this book. This is amazing. I love the action and adventure, and because I love adventure and action books without romance, this is my favorite. Thank you so much author!!!
I have been waiting for a great star aars story for a long time and I'm pretty sure this is it I like and am invested in the story and am intrigued because I did not keep up with the books so each chapter brings something new.
The book is absolutely amazing it's well written with few mistakes and I dont know about anyone else but star wars novels on webtoon are hard to find so I applaud you even more for writing this to the point I'd even off to check for grammar mistakes for u if it guaranteed you to keep writing. So keep writing your great book
This is a very well written story with excellent character and background development. It's only fault is it's not updated regularly enough since I'm greedy. Please don't stop this halfway and thanks for the story.
Jilid 1
- 1 Prolog (1) 4 years ago
- 2 Prolog (2) 4 years ago
- 3 Prolog (3) 4 years ago
- 4 Chapter 1 –Slavery 4 years ago
- 5 Chapter 2- Doubts 4 years ago
- 6 Chapter 3 - Escape 4 years ago
- 7 Chapter 4 – Lyng’Ella 4 years ago
- 8 Chapter 5 – On the way to Corellia 4 years ago
- 9 Chapter 6 – Corellia 4 years ago
- 10 Chapter 7 – Sienn’s Father 4 years ago
- 11 Chapter 8 – Searching for a ship 4 years ago
- 12 Chapter 9 – Green Jedi Enclave 4 years ago
- 13 Chapter 10 - Green Jedi Council 4 years ago
- 14 Chapter 11 – Shopping 4 years ago
- 15 Chapter 12 – Leaving Corellia 4 years ago
- 16 Chapter 13 – Tatooine 4 years ago
- 17 Chapter 14 – Building a lightsaber 4 years ago
- 18 Chapter 15 – Ossus 4 years ago
- 19 Chapter 16 – Ysanna 4 years ago
- 20 Chapter 17- A dead tree? 4 years ago
- 21 Chapter 18 – The Great Jedi Library 4 years ago
- 22 Chapter 19 – Secret talk 4 years ago
- 23 Chapter 20 – New Jedi Order Founding Act 4 years ago
- 24 Chapter 21 – First steps toward Ossus Restoration 4 years ago
- 25 Chapter 22 – Training Start 4 years ago
- 26 Chapter 23 – Futures Issues 4 years ago
- 27 Chapter 24 – Droids 4 years ago
- 28 Chapter 25 – Vima-Da-Boda 4 years ago
- 29 Chapter 26 – Restoration Plan 4 years ago
- 30 Chapter 27 – Is it my birthday? 4 years ago
- 31 Chapter 28 – Training Droid 4 years ago
- 32 Chapter 29 – Sparring dual 4 years ago
- 33 Chapter 30 – Survivors of the past 4 years ago
- 34 Chapter 31 – One month 4 years ago
- 35 Chapter 32 – Master and Student (1) 4 years ago
- 36 Chapter 33 – Master and Student (2) 4 years ago
- 37 Chapter 34 – Mustafar (1) 4 years ago
- 38 Chapter 35 - Mustafar (2) 4 years ago
- 39 Chapter 36 – Mustafar (3) 4 years ago
- 40 Chapter 37 – Mustafar (4) 4 years ago
- 41 Chapter 38 – Mustafar (5) 4 years ago
- 42 Chapter 39 – A Crazy Idea 4 years ago
- 43 Chapter 40 –Twin lightsabers 4 years ago
- 44 Chaper 41 – Infiltration 4 years ago
- 45 Chapter 42 – Death Watch’s Hideout 4 years ago
- 46 Chapter 43 – Relics 4 years ago
- 47 Chapter 44 – Capturing Pre Vizsla 4 years ago
- 48 Chapter 45 –Robbery 4 years ago
- 49 Chapter 46 – Drain Knowledge 4 years ago
- 50 Chapter 47 – Talk with Lama Su 4 years ago
- 51 Chapter 48 – Clone vs Droid 4 years ago
- 52 Chapter 49 – Meeting a legend 4 years ago
- 53 Chapter 50 – Cloning experiment 4 years ago
- 54 Chapter 51 – Deal 4 years ago
- 55 Chapter 52 – Fears 4 years ago
- 56 Chapter 53 – Six months 4 years ago
- 57 Chapter 54 – First Trial *Rancor* 4 years ago
- 58 Chapter 55 – Second trial *The lost city of the Jedi* 4 years ago
- 59 Chapter 56 – Third trial *Mirror* 4 years ago
- 60 Chapter 57 – Revelations (1) 4 years ago
- 61 Chapter 58 – Revelations (2) 4 years ago
- 62 Chapter 59 – An apprentice searching for a crystal 4 years ago
- 63 Chapter 60 – Reunion 4 years ago
- 64 Chapter 61 – Purest Jedi 4 years ago
- 65 Chapter 62 – Confrontation 4 years ago
- 66 Chapter 63 – Little Shae 4 years ago
- 67 Chapter 64 – Jedi High Council 4 years ago
- 68 Chapter 65 – Plans 4 years ago
- 69 Chapter 66 – Veil 4 years ago
- 70 Chapter 67 – Frozen 4 years ago
- 71 Chapter 68 – Uncle Goldy 4 years ago
- 72 Chapter 69 – Saving the damsel in distress (after putting her in danger) 4 years ago
- 73 Chapter 70- Padmé 4 years ago
- 74 Chapter 71- Big Boy 4 years ago
- 75 Chapter 72- Sowing doubt 4 years ago
- 76 Chapter 73 – Dark Side 4 years ago
- 77 Chapter 74 – conspiracy 4 years ago
- 78 Chapter 75 – 4 years ago
- 79 Chapter 76 – Leisure 4 years ago
- 80 Chapter 77 – Unexpected 4 years ago
- 81 Chapter 78 – Can we talk? 4 years ago
- 82 Chapter 79 – Back home 4 years ago
This is a rare one where the mc didn't read star wars in his first life. His first life was as shaak ti's average disciple as she's dying after the clone wars ended. He doesn't have extremely accurate knowledge about what will happen in the future, he just knows the stuff that people know from information reports after everything happened. For example, if someone spread false information about what happened and the truth didn't come to light by the time he died in his first life, he will be acting based on false information. He also doesn't know about things that the jedi don't know or things only a star wars fan will know. He becomes powerful in his second life, but isn't instantly op. So far he hasn't attacked the people he knows are sith and sith supporters, he's more focused on building his army before starting anything. He's building a new jedi order that doesn't fear the dark side, an order more like the original jedi and the je'daii
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