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Trust me you won't be disappointed!!!! The author is on another league and he/she really knows their stuff. Personally I'm really enjoying this fan-fic and from what I've read there 99% (damn one 1% escaped) you will too.
I deleted my old review and put this one to get something straight. For a while now I have been getting butthurt people talking about the one rape scene that appeared in the novel that went on for roughly four lines and wasn't even in detail. If another person starts to complain about that ****, I'm straight up deleting your comment or review immediately, I'm tired of it and I can't tolerate responding to toddlers on a constant basis, who just can't seem to handle something like that, but is fine when the main character commits mass murder right?. And to those that are telling other people to not read the novel for themselves because of a stupid reason or some randomness, or any reason in general, and without even taking into account that they are one person and people might like what they don't is disgusting and incompetent.
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The general story is just great. The author doesn't rush and the plot line is just smooth. The MC isn't one of those dumb ones and he thinks through most of his actions. Kudos author. Not fun having it gone though.
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I found this to be a very fun and enjoyable novel to read, I like the main character and the premise of the story is very cool, I don’t think this is much of a spoiler since it happens right away, but he starts out with dinosaurs! Honestly, I think you should at least give this story a try if you want something new and fun to read, I think it’s worth the time.
I'm really liking this novel, I hope the author doesn't drop too soon( at this point I don't expect any DC/Marvel fanfic finishing) I like the originality he brought to the story making the MC reincarnation in the Jurassic Era, good move, I see Prototype ability, totally badass. Not common as nobody ever uses it, and the few that used already dropped. I'm having fun reading this novel until now, I hope it continues for a long time.
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This story doesent really deserve a 5 star in All catagories, but ur imagination and genuine ideas r simply put, awesome. Ive been wanting to read something like this story for a long while now, and this doesent dissapoint. The frst thing is that this took place in DC, second was the point in time. Third was ur creativity and added to that the phenomenol character development, albiet not steady, makes it an exellent piece of work. But by far the best thing about this fic was the powers, ADAPTATION/EVOLUTION/ASSIMILATION is my absolute favourite set of power, coupled with dinosaurs, now ur just spoiling us. All in all, great story. Dont get discouraged by hate comments, theyll always be some no matter what, keep updating, take a break, rest but dont let this go, its a unique concept meant to be held on to. Ps: R his powers and appearence a nod towards Doomsday? They match alot, also thatd be a curious meeting between the 2, dont u think?😊
Great Story especially characters development, and the way you explore the Ancient Era of DC instead of big time skip is awesome and you did it very well, also the writing quality is good for me, and thank you for this good novel, also i hope you wouldn't drop this
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Honestly I agree it's too nerfed and the Martians aren't that op and also you should of stuck to hibernation and woke him up in the ancient Greece to make an impact on history so the league and the amazon's would find out about him in mythology fucking the gods lives and bringing terror beyond cronos,also I think you should right a fan fic about xenoblade chronicles 2 I really like mythra she's a tsundere you could make mc rex's older brother of 18 and got mythra while he got pyra,mythra is stronger though and don't nerf him just being with mythra is enough for the story.nerfing ruins a good story.
Written very well with barely any spelling or grammatical mistakes. The mc at the beginning can be slightly frustrating to read about because he is controlled by his animalistic desires for the first few chapters. I’d encourage you to read on because he does mellow out and eventually he begins his adventure properly. There isn’t much world building as he starts during the era of dinosaurs and therefore there isn’t any civilisation or ‘world’ to be described. I’m sure this will change as we get closer to when DC canon truly starts. I’m also curious how his kingdom building and his actions on mars affect canon, will be interesting to see if Martian manhunter exists due to the fact the war on mars is finished. Character development is somewhat progressing, the sudden animalistic urges of the MC at the start does come from nowhere and isn’t explained very well, but one can kinda make their own conclusions on why his character changed from regular modern person to apex predator. He is prone to bouts of irrational anger though, hopefully in the future he can chill a little bit and use his head more instead of trying to rip things apart. All in all shaping up to be a good fan-fix
It don't make sense, first, the mc was a little bit smart in c1, but he become animal? But after that he get smarter a little, the story good enough. But, them the mc didn't know that birds can't fly in space, again it's okay, but? He **** with a human from after the ice age, they were similar to monkey in that time, they weren't humans like the 'our' humans, but it seems that they are in this story, again maybe it is a religion thing, in DC god create Adam, but what I don't understand is why the **** 65 million year is just a few thousand for him? Do author didn't go to middle school?
Not too bad. However, the way mc behaves is stupid, for example at one point he kills some cave men and the next he takes care of his daughter because 'he feels' sorry. Even though he slaughtered thousands upon thousands of dinosaurs and inherited their bloodlust and so on. It's as if mc isn't experienced old hunter, buy some moody teenager person with a bipolar personality. Lastly, what are the goals of mc other than evolving and getting stronger because I can't see any. He even wants to preserve the main timeline?LOL!
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its a great work. its starts off rough but picks quality with progression. its like seeing a rough stone carved, sculptured into a gem, then a finally a diamond. and all this before canon. i am excited for more and when canon starts. thank you.
Well I'm late with my review things to do in their life so no complaints there. The story development huh 🤔, to me the story is developing pretty well it's not too fast and not too fast and not too slow, you know the characters are all pretty different to some degree I also like Spencer's now Alexander's development as a person he goes from a regular human to a being that thinks like a beast to who we have now. This is in the DC universe yes, but it doesn't immediately start where all the superheroes and supervillains are running around. The rape scene, the rape scene tsk, tsk, tsk. What are you guys fucking babies at the time in which he raped that woman it was as common as fucking trees, so why are you getting such a big head about it and for starters there is only one rape scene and there will be only one as clearly seen by Spencer's now Alexander's character development, also there are many novels and Fan Fictions with much more rape like seriously. Anyway if you give this Fan-fic a chance I promise you won't regret it 👍
Good story, character development is decent but if he's only goal is to get stronger are more famous it will start to get boring, would be good to think about it. i mean at the point where the actual line of DC starts he will be (most likely) an apex being so everything would become blank and bland, i suppose a romance part or something else that could make the story progress in more than just one way would be great. Thanks for the hard work by the way
I read the fanfic ZENITH some months ago and have read it ever since. As this is a fanfic I won't put much care into the world background or character design and instead focus on the main protagonist. It's confusing as a reader to try to understand the protagonist Spencer in some cases. A few reasons why it can become like this is due to Spencer's moral integrity. Spencer's attitude in the story merely allows him to do whatever he wants with no moral boundary's. While I'm all for him not becoming a beta main character, I don't him to become a overpowered criminal either. I also cannot imagine him having any sort of love interest possible with his emotions and moral guidelines getting in the way. Character development needs to happen in order for Spencer to become a stable main character. I'd recommend the novel if you're like me and want the main character to get a quick power boost in a few chapters. This novel is more focused on fighting and gaining power then characters themselves in a way, seeing as it's rare for characters to stay after a few chapters. If you can deal with that then this novel is for you. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sorry if I made a few mistakes in my review. I'm trying to learn from other people's novels before trying out in my own. If any of you would like to help please comment below and tell me if my review was good enough or not it'll mean a lot to me.
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And honest to God absolutely amazing fanfiction. Some of the highest level of polish I have ever seen. Definitely an absolute delight to read, and I would highly recommend to anyone who enjoys a well-built world and incredibly well-constructed characters. For those looking for an absolutely rock-solid fanfiction with really high future prospects and a decent update schedule you will find exactly that here.
Very good very good I very much like this very much like world setting especially caster. Caster is main gorl so nobody can refute! Got that! Overall this is really good I’d like others to see this
In chapter 45 and I like it, the author is developing the MC very good; can't wait to see how he interacts with other heroes and villains. And pleas for dehydrated Jesus Christ, at least 300 chapters, i'm beggin you author, i'm so tired of reading novels that never end becouse left in oblivion T_T, KEEP IT UP
You need to read this its one of the best fanfiction out there and one of the few were the dialogue feels like acutual people are talking and has the perfect pace for power growth
Ótimo livro estou apaixonado pela história, continue o excelente trabalho. Aguardo todos os dias novas atualizações espero que não caia essa excelente fanfic
He is going to become the ultimate life form. More like a ben10 with an inbuilt Omnitrix. Hope he sees more aliens like new gods etc. If he goes to Oa he could meet countless aliens.
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It is a really good Story and the Author doesn't rush anything so that our MC would be Invincible but instead he makes steady progress . And to calm down everbody .....nooo he isn't some Beta ....scared ....useless MC...NOOO FAR FROM IT !. He is THE MC ...and this is ...THE NOVEL!!!!
Trust me you won't be disappointed!!!! The author is on another league and he/she really knows their stuff. Personally I'm really enjoying this fan-fic and from what I've read there 99% (damn one 1% escaped) you will too.
I deleted my old review and put this one to get something straight. For a while now I have been getting butthurt people talking about the one rape scene that appeared in the novel that went on for roughly four lines and wasn't even in detail. If another person starts to complain about that ****, I'm straight up deleting your comment or review immediately, I'm tired of it and I can't tolerate responding to toddlers on a constant basis, who just can't seem to handle something like that, but is fine when the main character commits mass murder right?. And to those that are telling other people to not read the novel for themselves because of a stupid reason or some randomness, or any reason in general, and without even taking into account that they are one person and people might like what they don't is disgusting and incompetent.
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The general story is just great. The author doesn't rush and the plot line is just smooth. The MC isn't one of those dumb ones and he thinks through most of his actions. Kudos author. Not fun having it gone though.
Membuka SPOILER I found this to be a very fun and enjoyable novel to read, I like the main character and the premise of the story is very cool, I don’t think this is much of a spoiler since it happens right away, but he starts out with dinosaurs! Honestly, I think you should at least give this story a try if you want something new and fun to read, I think it’s worth the time.
I'm really liking this novel, I hope the author doesn't drop too soon( at this point I don't expect any DC/Marvel fanfic finishing) I like the originality he brought to the story making the MC reincarnation in the Jurassic Era, good move, I see Prototype ability, totally badass. Not common as nobody ever uses it, and the few that used already dropped. I'm having fun reading this novel until now, I hope it continues for a long time.
Membuka SPOILER This story doesent really deserve a 5 star in All catagories, but ur imagination and genuine ideas r simply put, awesome. Ive been wanting to read something like this story for a long while now, and this doesent dissapoint. The frst thing is that this took place in DC, second was the point in time. Third was ur creativity and added to that the phenomenol character development, albiet not steady, makes it an exellent piece of work. But by far the best thing about this fic was the powers, ADAPTATION/EVOLUTION/ASSIMILATION is my absolute favourite set of power, coupled with dinosaurs, now ur just spoiling us. All in all, great story. Dont get discouraged by hate comments, theyll always be some no matter what, keep updating, take a break, rest but dont let this go, its a unique concept meant to be held on to. Ps: R his powers and appearence a nod towards Doomsday? They match alot, also thatd be a curious meeting between the 2, dont u think?😊
Great Story especially characters development, and the way you explore the Ancient Era of DC instead of big time skip is awesome and you did it very well, also the writing quality is good for me, and thank you for this good novel, also i hope you wouldn't drop this
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Honestly I agree it's too nerfed and the Martians aren't that op and also you should of stuck to hibernation and woke him up in the ancient Greece to make an impact on history so the league and the amazon's would find out about him in mythology fucking the gods lives and bringing terror beyond cronos,also I think you should right a fan fic about xenoblade chronicles 2 I really like mythra she's a tsundere you could make mc rex's older brother of 18 and got mythra while he got pyra,mythra is stronger though and don't nerf him just being with mythra is enough for the story.nerfing ruins a good story.
Written very well with barely any spelling or grammatical mistakes. The mc at the beginning can be slightly frustrating to read about because he is controlled by his animalistic desires for the first few chapters. I’d encourage you to read on because he does mellow out and eventually he begins his adventure properly. There isn’t much world building as he starts during the era of dinosaurs and therefore there isn’t any civilisation or ‘world’ to be described. I’m sure this will change as we get closer to when DC canon truly starts. I’m also curious how his kingdom building and his actions on mars affect canon, will be interesting to see if Martian manhunter exists due to the fact the war on mars is finished. Character development is somewhat progressing, the sudden animalistic urges of the MC at the start does come from nowhere and isn’t explained very well, but one can kinda make their own conclusions on why his character changed from regular modern person to apex predator. He is prone to bouts of irrational anger though, hopefully in the future he can chill a little bit and use his head more instead of trying to rip things apart. All in all shaping up to be a good fan-fix
It don't make sense, first, the mc was a little bit smart in c1, but he become animal? But after that he get smarter a little, the story good enough. But, them the mc didn't know that birds can't fly in space, again it's okay, but? He **** with a human from after the ice age, they were similar to monkey in that time, they weren't humans like the 'our' humans, but it seems that they are in this story, again maybe it is a religion thing, in DC god create Adam, but what I don't understand is why the **** 65 million year is just a few thousand for him? Do author didn't go to middle school?
Not too bad. However, the way mc behaves is stupid, for example at one point he kills some cave men and the next he takes care of his daughter because 'he feels' sorry. Even though he slaughtered thousands upon thousands of dinosaurs and inherited their bloodlust and so on. It's as if mc isn't experienced old hunter, buy some moody teenager person with a bipolar personality. Lastly, what are the goals of mc other than evolving and getting stronger because I can't see any. He even wants to preserve the main timeline?LOL!
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its a great work. its starts off rough but picks quality with progression. its like seeing a rough stone carved, sculptured into a gem, then a finally a diamond. and all this before canon. i am excited for more and when canon starts. thank you.
Well I'm late with my review things to do in their life so no complaints there. The story development huh 🤔, to me the story is developing pretty well it's not too fast and not too fast and not too slow, you know the characters are all pretty different to some degree I also like Spencer's now Alexander's development as a person he goes from a regular human to a being that thinks like a beast to who we have now. This is in the DC universe yes, but it doesn't immediately start where all the superheroes and supervillains are running around. The rape scene, the rape scene tsk, tsk, tsk. What are you guys fucking babies at the time in which he raped that woman it was as common as fucking trees, so why are you getting such a big head about it and for starters there is only one rape scene and there will be only one as clearly seen by Spencer's now Alexander's character development, also there are many novels and Fan Fictions with much more rape like seriously. Anyway if you give this Fan-fic a chance I promise you won't regret it 👍
Good story, character development is decent but if he's only goal is to get stronger are more famous it will start to get boring, would be good to think about it. i mean at the point where the actual line of DC starts he will be (most likely) an apex being so everything would become blank and bland, i suppose a romance part or something else that could make the story progress in more than just one way would be great. Thanks for the hard work by the way
I read the fanfic ZENITH some months ago and have read it ever since. As this is a fanfic I won't put much care into the world background or character design and instead focus on the main protagonist. It's confusing as a reader to try to understand the protagonist Spencer in some cases. A few reasons why it can become like this is due to Spencer's moral integrity. Spencer's attitude in the story merely allows him to do whatever he wants with no moral boundary's. While I'm all for him not becoming a beta main character, I don't him to become a overpowered criminal either. I also cannot imagine him having any sort of love interest possible with his emotions and moral guidelines getting in the way. Character development needs to happen in order for Spencer to become a stable main character. I'd recommend the novel if you're like me and want the main character to get a quick power boost in a few chapters. This novel is more focused on fighting and gaining power then characters themselves in a way, seeing as it's rare for characters to stay after a few chapters. If you can deal with that then this novel is for you. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sorry if I made a few mistakes in my review. I'm trying to learn from other people's novels before trying out in my own. If any of you would like to help please comment below and tell me if my review was good enough or not it'll mean a lot to me.
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And honest to God absolutely amazing fanfiction. Some of the highest level of polish I have ever seen. Definitely an absolute delight to read, and I would highly recommend to anyone who enjoys a well-built world and incredibly well-constructed characters. For those looking for an absolutely rock-solid fanfiction with really high future prospects and a decent update schedule you will find exactly that here.
Very good very good I very much like this very much like world setting especially caster. Caster is main gorl so nobody can refute! Got that! Overall this is really good I’d like others to see this
In chapter 45 and I like it, the author is developing the MC very good; can't wait to see how he interacts with other heroes and villains. And pleas for dehydrated Jesus Christ, at least 300 chapters, i'm beggin you author, i'm so tired of reading novels that never end becouse left in oblivion T_T, KEEP IT UP
You need to read this its one of the best fanfiction out there and one of the few were the dialogue feels like acutual people are talking and has the perfect pace for power growth
Ótimo livro estou apaixonado pela história, continue o excelente trabalho. Aguardo todos os dias novas atualizações espero que não caia essa excelente fanfic
He is going to become the ultimate life form. More like a ben10 with an inbuilt Omnitrix. Hope he sees more aliens like new gods etc. If he goes to Oa he could meet countless aliens.
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It is a really good Story and the Author doesn't rush anything so that our MC would be Invincible but instead he makes steady progress . And to calm down everbody .....nooo he isn't some Beta ....scared ....useless MC...NOOO FAR FROM IT !. He is THE MC ...and this is ...THE NOVEL!!!!