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I was adoring this, but I will say it's extremely depressing that you're not continuing this novel.
It is an amazing story so far and is well worth a read however it is currently on a bit of a hiatus. The MC is intelligent and OP but has his priorities, a not to bright nor dark personality and is openminded enough to still be relatable towards. The background and story mostly follow the original story but the author likes to and their own twists and beauty to both and those changes are part of what makes the story as amazing as it is. I can only hope the author will pick the story back up or rewrite it so I can see how Alexander Prince grows and develops as his story continues.
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Please continue this story!! ...................................................... ................................................
Please continue with the story its good i think you should continue it because its the second best harry potter ff that i have read the first is i have pure magic this comes behind because there is only thirty-two chapters.
I like how u have done this book especially with the MC would love to read more of it or u can remake this book and do things in the plot or characters differently in which it fits the picture that u have for the book look forward to reading more of this book or when u remake it
Wwwwwwwwhhhhhyyyyyyy. couldn't you just make more just why it's the fourth best one I've read for Harry Potter. fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
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Honestly I do enjoy your story but it has been discontinued for a year so I also have no hope in it. Author I know your still fairly active on webnovel and I want to encourage you to continue. Anyway thanks for something that I enjoyed and could waste one hour of my day
please tell me you haven't dropped this book, I realize that things happen and I'm late to the game on this one, however I have fallen in love with this story. Please don't give up on it
Thanks for the awesome novel, keep it up!!!! Love the relationship with Snape, sooo good :D the Merlin part was a bit much but if you start to mould it further into the story that would be cool. Bloodline is awesome but do the Merlin thing and point him away from that! Hope you keep up the updates, here's some stones for fun :)
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Now, I rarely give full 5 stars (if ever), but this one is an absolute pleasure. This fanfic is an appropriate amount of fluff, humor, dark and ****ery. I would honestly never pay Pat reon subscriptions for novels because there are so many out there, but this one probably could make me yield. PLEASE CONTINUE
I would have given all five but due to incomplete 1 is gone any ways please upload new chapters or new volume. . please
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Would you accept a a Loki/Arrowverse challenge, A Game of thrones challenge, A Star Wars Challenge, Naruto/ Avatar Last airbender challenge, A Harry Potter challenge, a 100 Fanfiction Challenge A Percy Jackson challenge?
What a fantastic spin on the Harry Potter fans. This story is captivating and intriguing all at the same time. Grab your hat, cape, broom and wand. You are about to embark on another magical adventure.
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Love the Alex and Tonks paring hope you Keep that in the story, also should make her seem more than the few times she has been if Alex is trying to win her. Hope you don’t drop the book excited to see where else the story goes.
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The story is amazing, it adds a dark but interesting background to mc. It talks a lot about mc heritage and provides an incredible amount of info for any made-up things (familiars, origin, etc.).
The main character is over powered as heck and I love how they deal with Hermione and her tirade even though I love her as a character she was too bossy in the begining. The writing is good though with a few sentences that confuse the reader sometimes and has a good format. I like how the author explains any new spells they add in but sometimes I would like it to be a bit more indepth. The thing with the main character being rich from his mother is alright but I would like it if the buisness side of things is explained a bit more on hoe it is done insemtead of having the mother do all the work and suddenly the hold the most shares of a company (more than 50%) and suddenly they practically own a company now with a few other small shareholders; maybe explain how exactly his mother sort of beat the company into submission by getting more shares or something along the lines of it.
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Come back author we need more, this fic is one of the best here, it wouldn't matter if it was one chap a week, we just need it to be there
OMG, realmente gostei muito da história, o protagonista tem um ótimo desenvolvimento de personagem, além de uma boa compreensão de como desenvolver a história 😍😍😍❤️❤️
When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?
hello, the author I cannot give your novel full 5 stars because you do not release a new chapter after 3 months. for me, this novel has the potential to become popular even that not popular like original but it has quality. I hope can read a new chapter if you read this review and I hope you not too busy.
May be I'm not too much fund of OP MC. What is the use of Villain if MC as a Child is more Powerful than villain's prime.? And Story Development is a little careless as may be u too inexperienced or too care about facts. My idea is that too much facts or too much expression of author's idea onC will make the story taste sour
I really like the idea so far. But I'm scared that it's yaoi/BL coz you keep having Nevil(or as you call him, Teddy Bear) lie on his lap. Author please can you tell me the direction it takes so I can know whether to stop reading. I don't like yaoi
One of the beat fanfics I've read its so good I can't help bit fall in love with this novel I love the stupid pranks the mc pulls Being overprotective over harry Pls don't drop it
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Update again please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()
Honestly my expectations were quite high, I was trying to like this but there just comes more and more useless information or oc characters. Then there is the vagueness what he is Bi/straight/gay and seeing as the bio says nothing i like a normal person believed hey this is straight bec if it was anything else i would state so in the bio like so many other authors does. more side quests than actual story telling(im not inlcuding the entire history for each or every small detail that is forced upon me)
Membuka SPOILER I was adoring this, but I will say it's extremely depressing that you're not continuing this novel.
It is an amazing story so far and is well worth a read however it is currently on a bit of a hiatus. The MC is intelligent and OP but has his priorities, a not to bright nor dark personality and is openminded enough to still be relatable towards. The background and story mostly follow the original story but the author likes to and their own twists and beauty to both and those changes are part of what makes the story as amazing as it is. I can only hope the author will pick the story back up or rewrite it so I can see how Alexander Prince grows and develops as his story continues.
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Please continue this story!! ...................................................... ................................................
Please continue with the story its good i think you should continue it because its the second best harry potter ff that i have read the first is i have pure magic this comes behind because there is only thirty-two chapters.
I like how u have done this book especially with the MC would love to read more of it or u can remake this book and do things in the plot or characters differently in which it fits the picture that u have for the book look forward to reading more of this book or when u remake it
Wwwwwwwwhhhhhyyyyyyy. couldn't you just make more just why it's the fourth best one I've read for Harry Potter. fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
It's amazing. [img = aktualizace]Don't change it.[img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace]
Honestly I do enjoy your story but it has been discontinued for a year so I also have no hope in it. Author I know your still fairly active on webnovel and I want to encourage you to continue. Anyway thanks for something that I enjoyed and could waste one hour of my day
please tell me you haven't dropped this book, I realize that things happen and I'm late to the game on this one, however I have fallen in love with this story. Please don't give up on it
Thanks for the awesome novel, keep it up!!!! Love the relationship with Snape, sooo good :D the Merlin part was a bit much but if you start to mould it further into the story that would be cool. Bloodline is awesome but do the Merlin thing and point him away from that! Hope you keep up the updates, here's some stones for fun :)
Membuka SPOILER Now, I rarely give full 5 stars (if ever), but this one is an absolute pleasure. This fanfic is an appropriate amount of fluff, humor, dark and ****ery. I would honestly never pay Pat reon subscriptions for novels because there are so many out there, but this one probably could make me yield. PLEASE CONTINUE
I would have given all five but due to incomplete 1 is gone any ways please upload new chapters or new volume. . please
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Would you accept a a Loki/Arrowverse challenge, A Game of thrones challenge, A Star Wars Challenge, Naruto/ Avatar Last airbender challenge, A Harry Potter challenge, a 100 Fanfiction Challenge A Percy Jackson challenge?
What a fantastic spin on the Harry Potter fans. This story is captivating and intriguing all at the same time. Grab your hat, cape, broom and wand. You are about to embark on another magical adventure.
Membuka SPOILER Love the Alex and Tonks paring hope you Keep that in the story, also should make her seem more than the few times she has been if Alex is trying to win her. Hope you don’t drop the book excited to see where else the story goes.
Membuka SPOILER The story is amazing, it adds a dark but interesting background to mc. It talks a lot about mc heritage and provides an incredible amount of info for any made-up things (familiars, origin, etc.).
The main character is over powered as heck and I love how they deal with Hermione and her tirade even though I love her as a character she was too bossy in the begining. The writing is good though with a few sentences that confuse the reader sometimes and has a good format. I like how the author explains any new spells they add in but sometimes I would like it to be a bit more indepth. The thing with the main character being rich from his mother is alright but I would like it if the buisness side of things is explained a bit more on hoe it is done insemtead of having the mother do all the work and suddenly the hold the most shares of a company (more than 50%) and suddenly they practically own a company now with a few other small shareholders; maybe explain how exactly his mother sort of beat the company into submission by getting more shares or something along the lines of it.
Membuka SPOILER Come back author we need more, this fic is one of the best here, it wouldn't matter if it was one chap a week, we just need it to be there
OMG, realmente gostei muito da história, o protagonista tem um ótimo desenvolvimento de personagem, além de uma boa compreensão de como desenvolver a história 😍😍😍❤️❤️
When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?When is the next chapter?
hello, the author I cannot give your novel full 5 stars because you do not release a new chapter after 3 months. for me, this novel has the potential to become popular even that not popular like original but it has quality. I hope can read a new chapter if you read this review and I hope you not too busy.
May be I'm not too much fund of OP MC. What is the use of Villain if MC as a Child is more Powerful than villain's prime.? And Story Development is a little careless as may be u too inexperienced or too care about facts. My idea is that too much facts or too much expression of author's idea onC will make the story taste sour
I really like the idea so far. But I'm scared that it's yaoi/BL coz you keep having Nevil(or as you call him, Teddy Bear) lie on his lap. Author please can you tell me the direction it takes so I can know whether to stop reading. I don't like yaoi
One of the beat fanfics I've read its so good I can't help bit fall in love with this novel I love the stupid pranks the mc pulls Being overprotective over harry Pls don't drop it
Membuka SPOILER Update again please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()
Honestly my expectations were quite high, I was trying to like this but there just comes more and more useless information or oc characters. Then there is the vagueness what he is Bi/straight/gay and seeing as the bio says nothing i like a normal person believed hey this is straight bec if it was anything else i would state so in the bio like so many other authors does. more side quests than actual story telling(im not inlcuding the entire history for each or every small detail that is forced upon me)
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