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I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter for every day. I hope you continue writing because for me this novel so fantastic than original harry potter. Please don't drop this novel even you are so busy and I know you have free time even 2-3 hours per day.
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Complete and utter trash, the main character can’t speak, talks about his friends like their his “pack” Wtf, this is just terrible. I have no idea why there r so many good reviews, somethings up
why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why you did not continue writing why why why. I love to read every day for me this novel so interesting and fantastic.i hope you thinks before dropped it and if you busy you can recreate after you had free time.
One of the most interesting stories on this site.The MC is unique and not just a plain antihero.The characters have a good mix of staying true to the Hp books however have well written changes to their character because of inteactions with the Mc.
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I like the story and it’s direction, but I think the author might be dead. Just a warning from one fan to another. The author does do good work though, and I’d suggest it if you want the beginning of a story.
I enjoyed it alot. Hope the author would continue writing tho. I like smart characters and that is what our M.C. is. His power is also explained well and the character building is consistent. Cheers!
Written by a young person. Pretentious hero, 0 skills acquired, all skills inherited. Heir: Potters, Peverels, Merlin and probably Trump and Clintons... A completely senseless storyline based on the legacy of OP.
Kensington nie mam konta na stronie internetowej firmy na sprzedaż w koncu z tym kompem na kurwę na nie będzie już religii i się spytam o tym jak się nazywa się na miejscu zdarzenia przyszłego wynika że kosztuję na kurwę na nie mam nic przeciwko mnie dzisiaj dostęp do biegania odsłuch płyty główne w koncu na kurwę w miarę możliwości zmiany postów na forum bloga stronę w domu i idę spać spokojnie w koncu z tym że kosztuję nie będzie ja nie mam nic przeciwko temu żeby sobie kostkę cebulę pokroić w kostkę cebulę obrać ze sobą na kurwę na pewno jest to że gdziekolwiek jesteś na stronach sklepu na pewno jest w koncu na kurwę na nie wiem jak coś masz dużą ilością słów kluczowych lub po kliknięciu Play i T-Mobile ekstraklasy w miarę możliwości i się spytam o tym kompem w tym roku po prostu nie ma co ukrywać się z użytkownikiem Anna zarejestruj i się spytam na na legendarnej już w Polsce i się nie chcę mieć na kurwę w tym kompem nie mam butów ani w domu i idę na y usługi na terenie gminy na rok coraz bardziej kwestia czego zjadłem w miarę w miarę w miarę cicho jak coś na grilla z tobą w ogień w kominku oraz nie mam nic ze względu na kurwę na pewno
I like the concept and idea behind this novel... But I am the type of reader where I try to put myself inside the shoes of the MC... So, I am a straight male and when MC said he don't care about gender as long as they are cute he'd smash so you can geuss that was a big turn off for me, nothing against Bisexuals and Homosexuals but I am not one of them and therefore cannot put myself in the shoes of this MC who can smash anything as long as its cute. P.s. I don't care if I trigger anyone, all I'm saying is that I am not Bi therefore cannot rrlate to MC and therefore cannot continue to read, if this changes and MC is confirmed to be straight pls let me know and I will get back to reading it.
Thank you for letting us know what is happening! You are one of the first to let he fans know what is going on. So thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Good story.will be good if updated regularly.less details on pre Hogwarts time but it's a new background so it's interesting to read.looks like it'll eventually have androgynous parts so for those who don't want to read it it's bad luck.
Very interesting with a unique take on the finding out of the Magical World, different from Harry’s. I love your work and i hope you will continus @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
This fan-fic is without a doubt a work of art. The MC is a genius in every sense of the word and pretty much represents a lot of our thoughts when looking back at events that occur in HP. The world-building is well thought out and masterful while the character design is marvelous. Would recommend to anyone, even those who aren't HP fans. Sincerely hope the author continues this great work with relatively stable updates.
I’m actually shook by the amount of good reviews this novel has because so far it’s utter trash 😂. The story is so cringe I can’t help but wonder if it was written by a 12 year old. Iron fist? Warrior Goblins? Pack? Go check out the first couple chapters to see what I mean lol. But if you actually end up liking this novel... I guess it doesn’t take much to entertain you. Not trying to be an ass (kind of am being one already) but this novel is so bad that at this point it’s just a joke that I can’t take seriously. It seems like it was written by some socially awkward shut in who fantasizes about being some dominant and over powered mc with crazy cheats (that don’t even fit in with the HP world) who’s a genius at whatever he does. OP characters are awesome.... when they’re done right. This isn’t a matter of poor writing but the thought process and level of thinking are... concerning.
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Did this get dropped. No more chapters.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Getting all of my voting stones as long as you keep pumping out chapter! Best fan-fic that I’ve read of the Harry Potter world so far. Very interested to see if Alex is the next dark lord or not. Can’t wait to see what girl Alex will end up with.
Love the boookkkk needs to update. This is one of my favorite HP fanfics please updateeeeeee ...............................................….................... ..................
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Although it doesn't explain the world very much it's good enough to pass. Good storyline, I have to say I only have 3 Harry Potter. Fanfics that I seem worthy of respect and awe. This being one of them while the other two are Harry Potter: New Dawn, Harry Potter Rise Of The Golden Falcon.
I am really enjoying this, it is a very satisfying and well written story. The characters are well rounded and there is depth to them, I would appreciate more but as of chapter 34 there is so much potential to this story that I expect that depth to develop naturally. The additions the author has made to the original plot are unique and intriguing. I just want more chapters to make my life complete as this is probably one of the best Harry Potter fan-fic's on the site, right up there with Prince of Shadows.
Very good novel I recommend it only there is a big problem not even if it's just me but I think the mc is bixesual or not since even saying that he likes tonks to me it is very strange to me as he acts with nevilles
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The author has talent but ultimately turned the stories MC in a +1 self gratification fic. Absolutely nothing we haven't seen before. It's the usual massive inheritance **** with royal versions of familiars, and a so called cunning MC who keeps waving a bullseye over his ass by being anything but cunning. This is a fic where the image and first chapter seem to make a promise of a badass character through the usual ****. Then add a bunch of filler chapters up to and in between Canon 1st year. The result is people singing praises whilst it's just the same as usual... I went into this fic with nothing but it's title and image to go by. I had high expectations and due to the quality of the work I believed this fic might be something different. It wasnt. Every cliché and op thing you can imagine without any of it making a difference is there.
I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter for every day. I hope you continue writing because for me this novel so fantastic than original harry potter. Please don't drop this novel even you are so busy and I know you have free time even 2-3 hours per day.
why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why you don't continue writing.it is you so busy
Complete and utter trash, the main character can’t speak, talks about his friends like their his “pack” Wtf, this is just terrible. I have no idea why there r so many good reviews, somethings up
why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why you did not continue writing why why why. I love to read every day for me this novel so interesting and fantastic.i hope you thinks before dropped it and if you busy you can recreate after you had free time.
One of the most interesting stories on this site.The MC is unique and not just a plain antihero.The characters have a good mix of staying true to the Hp books however have well written changes to their character because of inteactions with the Mc.
I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more
I like the story and it’s direction, but I think the author might be dead. Just a warning from one fan to another. The author does do good work though, and I’d suggest it if you want the beginning of a story.
I enjoyed it alot. Hope the author would continue writing tho. I like smart characters and that is what our M.C. is. His power is also explained well and the character building is consistent. Cheers!
Written by a young person. Pretentious hero, 0 skills acquired, all skills inherited. Heir: Potters, Peverels, Merlin and probably Trump and Clintons... A completely senseless storyline based on the legacy of OP.
Kensington nie mam konta na stronie internetowej firmy na sprzedaż w koncu z tym kompem na kurwę na nie będzie już religii i się spytam o tym jak się nazywa się na miejscu zdarzenia przyszłego wynika że kosztuję na kurwę na nie mam nic przeciwko mnie dzisiaj dostęp do biegania odsłuch płyty główne w koncu na kurwę w miarę możliwości zmiany postów na forum bloga stronę w domu i idę spać spokojnie w koncu z tym że kosztuję nie będzie ja nie mam nic przeciwko temu żeby sobie kostkę cebulę pokroić w kostkę cebulę obrać ze sobą na kurwę na pewno jest to że gdziekolwiek jesteś na stronach sklepu na pewno jest w koncu na kurwę na nie wiem jak coś masz dużą ilością słów kluczowych lub po kliknięciu Play i T-Mobile ekstraklasy w miarę możliwości i się spytam o tym kompem w tym roku po prostu nie ma co ukrywać się z użytkownikiem Anna zarejestruj i się spytam na na legendarnej już w Polsce i się nie chcę mieć na kurwę w tym kompem nie mam butów ani w domu i idę na y usługi na terenie gminy na rok coraz bardziej kwestia czego zjadłem w miarę w miarę w miarę cicho jak coś na grilla z tobą w ogień w kominku oraz nie mam nic ze względu na kurwę na pewno
I like the concept and idea behind this novel... But I am the type of reader where I try to put myself inside the shoes of the MC... So, I am a straight male and when MC said he don't care about gender as long as they are cute he'd smash so you can geuss that was a big turn off for me, nothing against Bisexuals and Homosexuals but I am not one of them and therefore cannot put myself in the shoes of this MC who can smash anything as long as its cute. P.s. I don't care if I trigger anyone, all I'm saying is that I am not Bi therefore cannot rrlate to MC and therefore cannot continue to read, if this changes and MC is confirmed to be straight pls let me know and I will get back to reading it.
Thank you for letting us know what is happening! You are one of the first to let he fans know what is going on. So thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Good story.will be good if updated regularly.less details on pre Hogwarts time but it's a new background so it's interesting to read.looks like it'll eventually have androgynous parts so for those who don't want to read it it's bad luck.
Very interesting with a unique take on the finding out of the Magical World, different from Harry’s. I love your work and i hope you will continus @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
This fan-fic is without a doubt a work of art. The MC is a genius in every sense of the word and pretty much represents a lot of our thoughts when looking back at events that occur in HP. The world-building is well thought out and masterful while the character design is marvelous. Would recommend to anyone, even those who aren't HP fans. Sincerely hope the author continues this great work with relatively stable updates.
I’m actually shook by the amount of good reviews this novel has because so far it’s utter trash 😂. The story is so cringe I can’t help but wonder if it was written by a 12 year old. Iron fist? Warrior Goblins? Pack? Go check out the first couple chapters to see what I mean lol. But if you actually end up liking this novel... I guess it doesn’t take much to entertain you. Not trying to be an ass (kind of am being one already) but this novel is so bad that at this point it’s just a joke that I can’t take seriously. It seems like it was written by some socially awkward shut in who fantasizes about being some dominant and over powered mc with crazy cheats (that don’t even fit in with the HP world) who’s a genius at whatever he does. OP characters are awesome.... when they’re done right. This isn’t a matter of poor writing but the thought process and level of thinking are... concerning.
Membuka SPOILER Did this get dropped. No more chapters.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Getting all of my voting stones as long as you keep pumping out chapter! Best fan-fic that I’ve read of the Harry Potter world so far. Very interested to see if Alex is the next dark lord or not. Can’t wait to see what girl Alex will end up with.
Love the boookkkk needs to update. This is one of my favorite HP fanfics please updateeeeeee ...............................................….................... ..................
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Although it doesn't explain the world very much it's good enough to pass. Good storyline, I have to say I only have 3 Harry Potter. Fanfics that I seem worthy of respect and awe. This being one of them while the other two are Harry Potter: New Dawn, Harry Potter Rise Of The Golden Falcon.
I am really enjoying this, it is a very satisfying and well written story. The characters are well rounded and there is depth to them, I would appreciate more but as of chapter 34 there is so much potential to this story that I expect that depth to develop naturally. The additions the author has made to the original plot are unique and intriguing. I just want more chapters to make my life complete as this is probably one of the best Harry Potter fan-fic's on the site, right up there with Prince of Shadows.
Very good novel I recommend it only there is a big problem not even if it's just me but I think the mc is bixesual or not since even saying that he likes tonks to me it is very strange to me as he acts with nevilles
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The author has talent but ultimately turned the stories MC in a +1 self gratification fic. Absolutely nothing we haven't seen before. It's the usual massive inheritance **** with royal versions of familiars, and a so called cunning MC who keeps waving a bullseye over his ass by being anything but cunning. This is a fic where the image and first chapter seem to make a promise of a badass character through the usual ****. Then add a bunch of filler chapters up to and in between Canon 1st year. The result is people singing praises whilst it's just the same as usual... I went into this fic with nothing but it's title and image to go by. I had high expectations and due to the quality of the work I believed this fic might be something different. It wasnt. Every cliché and op thing you can imagine without any of it making a difference is there.