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Harley went on a mission alone, only to end up missing. Harith spends a few weeks searching for the mage, refusing to give up even though the chances of finding Harley alive was slim.

Fortunately for him, he does end up finding Harley, but the mage is not the same person as before. This Harley couldn't remember anything, couldn't speak, and follows him around. What will Harith do to help him remember?

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GodSlyer

I am not hating on this novel but I am literally confused as to how this novel got this high on the leaderboard 2.5/5 for grammar it can be read sure but sometimes i get dis orientes by how 1 paragraph they refer to a character as he then the next they put it. 2/5 for story...There is literally no story whatsoever for the released chapters...what we know is Hanabi almost got killed by Balmond and Tigreal, but as far as i know Balmond is from a clan of war mongering orcs why would he join sides with the Monians? And 3/4 of the entire story is basically just replicating item descriptions from the game, and how the heck those Hanabi get to maxed level immediately just because she killed creeps...what the heck is with that logic?! If so everyone in the Land of Dawn should all be killing each other for every creeps found just to get that exp..but NO they dont they literally just dont give a **** about the minions 1.5/5 for the world buildjng...there really aint nothing said about the world, there is not mention of Hanabis clan🙄 A swan princess can be found participating in a tournament when she should be guarding her lake. Sure im Jealous of the guy/girl cause of how they managed to climb the rank and get so high the board..But i just want a fucking answer how they got thus ranking?

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MasterLucy

Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh Finally A story that doesn't have so many character ahhh

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LokiRein21

ahhhhhh another Update GO GO GO GO author Hope other can read this too You can actually compete on top 4 though too bad The gap is big But still I support you go go go

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OtakuAnimeLOve

Ahhh Author Update please I can't with the bl going an ah My poor heart can't take this ah Update please MORE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

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JustForJimin

Oh You have actually Improved the truth is your first story Is Not that good though but good thing you made a new One hope you continue to do this good luck:)

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Daoist965743

This is a good story good thing that you changed it already good thing you made the story longer hope you continue the good work and don't lose hope I'm sure you you can do it :)) . . . . .

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geniebear

hiiii! do you like fantasy? or do you like lunox? then check out my novel "I Think I've Met You in One of My Dreams" a story of Lunox. thank you!

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BissPlease

Author Please give me mature contents please huhuhuhuhu Author Please give me mature contents please huhuhuhuhu Author Please give me mature contents please huhuhuhuhu Author Please give me mature contents please huhuhuhuhu

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