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Aside from the Main Character's RL background (in which I have a few conjectures on how it will play in the much later chapters like those who've read novels like evil dragon and shura's wrath of the same genre), the current plot setting is very well thought off and chapters consists of elements important for building up the MC and the scenarios relating for future chapters (unlike others that just make chapters to add as a fodder to keep up with word count which containing something that is completely obvious and wastes time and SS). For those who like VRMMO Novels, this is a gem in the dust that should be added in your "Must Read" lists.
The writing quality is something very hard to find on this app in my personal opinion, and to somehow prove me wrong is this author who does an outstanding job. More frequent updates is what makes understanding the story way easier, not re-reading a chapter to recap, honestly as close to leisurely reading as possible. The story has a great starting point, and currently I'm only at 169 out of 260 something chapters at the moment and I think the author doesn't get as much credit for the way they manage to develop the story at reasonable pace without crazily jumping up all the time. I will say the only downside is that the world background is very in depth for the purpose of understanding, but only to the extent of the MC's understanding. If you've read to the end of this review, I recommend you read this novel because it is like a luminescent sapphire, absolute gem. 💯💯💯
Yet another very enjoyable read by the author, really loved how you created a unique perspective around the MC. Even though i would have liked if you showed scenes of the places after MC left them to display the subsequent development. Except for that i loved the novel. Thank you for creating it as well as your other books 👍
Is it dropped well 😅 facing was bit tooo fast well a good one. Though chapters in the middle felt too rushed without giving a clear view on what's happening. Well most of the chapter was filled with experience notification 😮💨😶
Author sama are you really going to continue this novel Please reply I reall like this book
At first, it was great. But after he moves to the Nature domain arc, the story becomes really boring, like I began to force myself to read it. The characters are bland. The chapters are short. Overall not a bad story until chapter 250 and up. I am currently on chapter 353. Hoping it gets better.
About to start reading this after reviewing many positive reviews. Will come back to amend my opinion after 100+ chapters.
As im still fairly in the beginning StaGes of the story my review is a tad bit biast but thats beCause when the book was advertiSed as SomethinG i would like from the synopsis that was true. now why Biased? Well thats because low and behOld i didnt even know it Was the work from the same Author of aNOther novel i enjoy. and Im completely caught up on that One which i would definitely give 5 across the bOard.
it's like a budget version of the novel Devils Cage, ,............................... . . . .........,......,,,,,............,................
Not gonna read this for now, but, I feel like the Omni in mastery is unnecessary. Since Omni is a very strong and serious word. Omnipotence, omnifarious, omniscient etc etc. Someone with Omni-Mastery would essentially master anything and everything instantly. If you see someone swinging a sword at you, you would know exactly how to deflect, avoid or parry the strike. Why? Cuz you've just instantly mastered swordsmanship and control of your own body & mind. Just, don't mess with the word Omni unless you mean it in every sense of the word, since that's exactly what it means.
Got to chapter 64 now. The “supposed” start. I don’t mind lengthy explanations, so no problem in taking your time world building. The writing quality (grammar and structure) is good. Bad parts I really don’t enjoy and might make me drop: -The space out of the MC because he is talking with himself and forgets he is actually interacting with another character. - The length of the chapters is reduced to a point where I’m pretty sure it’s the bare minimum one can consider a chapter (around the second volume it starts happening, probably to make you unlock more? - The trying to be funny but simply annoying AI. If this is the same in following chapters for me it’s the worst of all the negative things. It’s supposed to help, not annoy or prank. - There is a part that the author had to step in and announce it is not Plot Armour. Maybe the special ability, not 100%, but maybe. But the animal companion with the lions memory? Really? -For now that’s all, I’ll redo if I change my opinion. For better or worse.
This is perfect simply perfect I hope this never ends i love it it has no herem and is balanced in every way possible it's almost impossible to find something like this again definitely adding it to my favorites[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Second chapter I'm already thoroughly impressed. This is some of the most high quality English literature I've seen on this platform. The writer actually makes use to proper Grammer 99% of the time. They also employ literary devices that is such a breath of fresh air with all of the mediocre translations and broken English that is seen on this app. Read this if you appreciate literature over some stupid cultivation novel.
Gotta say, other than some grammar errors, this is a really good story, just binge read the first 2 volumes in about 4.5 hours Really enjoying the world builing, character developement and class descriptions
at first it seems intriguing, and written well, But then there was the forced contract scene which completely annoyed me into quitting, just to see future directions i checked the chapter names and then i saw the "sect" part, obviously this is going into xianxia Chinese trash direction, no thanks.
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So far at chapter 126 it has been a really boring read. It consist of one fight after another following a similar pattern. There is next to no interesting side characters or plot development. The writing quality is good but the story line is quite bland.
I want to tell you that I stumbled upon your story last week. It’s quite captivating and intriguing. I unfortunately found it through another site where there isn’t the pay restriction, but I searched this site out after reading what was available. I just had to say bravo and thank you for this immersive story.
The writing at the beginning is very full of repetitive statistics but you can visibly tell as the novel goes on that the author is actively improving their writing style. the background seems fleshed out and even in chapter 200 things that happened in chapter 6 can still be relevant. I really like the book now that I am further along and if you are having difficulty with the first chapters just hang in there. only thing I wish for is more side characters/devolpment with other characters.
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The story is pretty generic with nothing really popping out to set it apart from other similar novels on the site. Additionally, the chapter sizes are quite small, and quality is pretty sub par (par for the course on this site). Sentence structure is all over the place with an entire paragraph being one gigantic run-on sentence. So much could be fixed by a skilled editor.
I'm a little bit nervous because I'm feeling like your narrative is dry and I would rather play the game than a play by play dumb games and I don't want to
one of the best novel i've read so far. the only thing is that the novel update is slow. the story development is clear, the world background is clear too.
I had high hopes for this story, but... Chapters are waaay too short. Too many nonsensical rants sometimes lasting up to 2 chapters. An annoying AI. Confusing almost cultivation novel like babbling about his affinity training. At about Ch 60 the Author changes stats by /10...cause reasons. It was about there i dropped. Started out well and then somehow just got derailed.
I love the story the protagonist is involved in the world and is not really dumb or overly heroic or easily falling for and doing everything for women kbecause their women and he should’ the world gets a basic explanation at the start which gets more developed as the book goes on. Have not finished it yet but this is definitely e of my favourites!
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book is amazing exempt a few or more typos storyline is above average can't say it is one of my favorites but it makes me want to keep reading so plz don't drop the novel
Its a really cool novel. I enjoy the premise of mastering everything, so this was nice. It wasn't rushed and I enjoy the stage like system with the domains.
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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
As the author of this novel, I will leave a review to summarize what is this novel about (since the synopsis doesn't tell much :") This is the story of a person who is in despair of his disability and his awaiting death, who gets the chance to enter a revolutionary VR game for a chance to get cured. But he starts with 9 other testers, as the only players within the whole game world, with different innate abilities that differentiates them from the common folk. Starting as a game native, and building up his strength in this game where getting logged out equals death **: this is my first novel here, I wish you enjoy it, power stones & feedback would be appreciated.
Aside from the Main Character's RL background (in which I have a few conjectures on how it will play in the much later chapters like those who've read novels like evil dragon and shura's wrath of the same genre), the current plot setting is very well thought off and chapters consists of elements important for building up the MC and the scenarios relating for future chapters (unlike others that just make chapters to add as a fodder to keep up with word count which containing something that is completely obvious and wastes time and SS). For those who like VRMMO Novels, this is a gem in the dust that should be added in your "Must Read" lists.
The writing quality is something very hard to find on this app in my personal opinion, and to somehow prove me wrong is this author who does an outstanding job. More frequent updates is what makes understanding the story way easier, not re-reading a chapter to recap, honestly as close to leisurely reading as possible. The story has a great starting point, and currently I'm only at 169 out of 260 something chapters at the moment and I think the author doesn't get as much credit for the way they manage to develop the story at reasonable pace without crazily jumping up all the time. I will say the only downside is that the world background is very in depth for the purpose of understanding, but only to the extent of the MC's understanding. If you've read to the end of this review, I recommend you read this novel because it is like a luminescent sapphire, absolute gem. 💯💯💯
Yet another very enjoyable read by the author, really loved how you created a unique perspective around the MC. Even though i would have liked if you showed scenes of the places after MC left them to display the subsequent development. Except for that i loved the novel. Thank you for creating it as well as your other books 👍
Is it dropped well 😅 facing was bit tooo fast well a good one. Though chapters in the middle felt too rushed without giving a clear view on what's happening. Well most of the chapter was filled with experience notification 😮💨😶
Author sama are you really going to continue this novel Please reply I reall like this book
At first, it was great. But after he moves to the Nature domain arc, the story becomes really boring, like I began to force myself to read it. The characters are bland. The chapters are short. Overall not a bad story until chapter 250 and up. I am currently on chapter 353. Hoping it gets better.
About to start reading this after reviewing many positive reviews. Will come back to amend my opinion after 100+ chapters.
As im still fairly in the beginning StaGes of the story my review is a tad bit biast but thats beCause when the book was advertiSed as SomethinG i would like from the synopsis that was true. now why Biased? Well thats because low and behOld i didnt even know it Was the work from the same Author of aNOther novel i enjoy. and Im completely caught up on that One which i would definitely give 5 across the bOard.
it's like a budget version of the novel Devils Cage, ,............................... . . . .........,......,,,,,............,................
Not gonna read this for now, but, I feel like the Omni in mastery is unnecessary. Since Omni is a very strong and serious word. Omnipotence, omnifarious, omniscient etc etc. Someone with Omni-Mastery would essentially master anything and everything instantly. If you see someone swinging a sword at you, you would know exactly how to deflect, avoid or parry the strike. Why? Cuz you've just instantly mastered swordsmanship and control of your own body & mind. Just, don't mess with the word Omni unless you mean it in every sense of the word, since that's exactly what it means.
Got to chapter 64 now. The “supposed” start. I don’t mind lengthy explanations, so no problem in taking your time world building. The writing quality (grammar and structure) is good. Bad parts I really don’t enjoy and might make me drop: -The space out of the MC because he is talking with himself and forgets he is actually interacting with another character. - The length of the chapters is reduced to a point where I’m pretty sure it’s the bare minimum one can consider a chapter (around the second volume it starts happening, probably to make you unlock more? - The trying to be funny but simply annoying AI. If this is the same in following chapters for me it’s the worst of all the negative things. It’s supposed to help, not annoy or prank. - There is a part that the author had to step in and announce it is not Plot Armour. Maybe the special ability, not 100%, but maybe. But the animal companion with the lions memory? Really? -For now that’s all, I’ll redo if I change my opinion. For better or worse.
This is perfect simply perfect I hope this never ends i love it it has no herem and is balanced in every way possible it's almost impossible to find something like this again definitely adding it to my favorites[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Second chapter I'm already thoroughly impressed. This is some of the most high quality English literature I've seen on this platform. The writer actually makes use to proper Grammer 99% of the time. They also employ literary devices that is such a breath of fresh air with all of the mediocre translations and broken English that is seen on this app. Read this if you appreciate literature over some stupid cultivation novel.
Gotta say, other than some grammar errors, this is a really good story, just binge read the first 2 volumes in about 4.5 hours Really enjoying the world builing, character developement and class descriptions
at first it seems intriguing, and written well, But then there was the forced contract scene which completely annoyed me into quitting, just to see future directions i checked the chapter names and then i saw the "sect" part, obviously this is going into xianxia Chinese trash direction, no thanks.
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So far at chapter 126 it has been a really boring read. It consist of one fight after another following a similar pattern. There is next to no interesting side characters or plot development. The writing quality is good but the story line is quite bland.
I want to tell you that I stumbled upon your story last week. It’s quite captivating and intriguing. I unfortunately found it through another site where there isn’t the pay restriction, but I searched this site out after reading what was available. I just had to say bravo and thank you for this immersive story.
The writing at the beginning is very full of repetitive statistics but you can visibly tell as the novel goes on that the author is actively improving their writing style. the background seems fleshed out and even in chapter 200 things that happened in chapter 6 can still be relevant. I really like the book now that I am further along and if you are having difficulty with the first chapters just hang in there. only thing I wish for is more side characters/devolpment with other characters.
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The story is pretty generic with nothing really popping out to set it apart from other similar novels on the site. Additionally, the chapter sizes are quite small, and quality is pretty sub par (par for the course on this site). Sentence structure is all over the place with an entire paragraph being one gigantic run-on sentence. So much could be fixed by a skilled editor.
I'm a little bit nervous because I'm feeling like your narrative is dry and I would rather play the game than a play by play dumb games and I don't want to
one of the best novel i've read so far. the only thing is that the novel update is slow. the story development is clear, the world background is clear too.
I had high hopes for this story, but... Chapters are waaay too short. Too many nonsensical rants sometimes lasting up to 2 chapters. An annoying AI. Confusing almost cultivation novel like babbling about his affinity training. At about Ch 60 the Author changes stats by /10...cause reasons. It was about there i dropped. Started out well and then somehow just got derailed.
I love the story the protagonist is involved in the world and is not really dumb or overly heroic or easily falling for and doing everything for women kbecause their women and he should’ the world gets a basic explanation at the start which gets more developed as the book goes on. Have not finished it yet but this is definitely e of my favourites!
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book is amazing exempt a few or more typos storyline is above average can't say it is one of my favorites but it makes me want to keep reading so plz don't drop the novel
Its a really cool novel. I enjoy the premise of mastering everything, so this was nice. It wasn't rushed and I enjoy the stage like system with the domains.
Membuka SPOILER Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
As the author of this novel, I will leave a review to summarize what is this novel about (since the synopsis doesn't tell much :") This is the story of a person who is in despair of his disability and his awaiting death, who gets the chance to enter a revolutionary VR game for a chance to get cured. But he starts with 9 other testers, as the only players within the whole game world, with different innate abilities that differentiates them from the common folk. Starting as a game native, and building up his strength in this game where getting logged out equals death **: this is my first novel here, I wish you enjoy it, power stones & feedback would be appreciated.