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Homestly i love this story, I dont usually read fan fic stories mainly because they change the whole plot into some weird direction that compromises it but the way the author has put it down not only gives it an amazing new beginning woth different possibilities but also leaves me with a excited feeling to want mpre of it.
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One of the best stories on this app, it is well written and truly pushes the casual understanding of telekinesis into interesting directions. Bravo, and may I please have some more?
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Finally a MHA fanfiction with an Author who can actually write and spell! I am loving Izukuโs personality being similar to the source material, and how Bakago is no longer a complete prick, just irritatingly smug. I think the quirk is pretty OP, but its still fun. Character interactions feel nice and natural also! Just need more chapters haha
Itโs quite alright for a new fanfiction . I donโt know why I have this feeling that something is missing in this story to make it really really great.
Finally a story with good and decent grammar. That doesnโt frustrate you whilst trying to read the book. Overall liked how All-Might got healed and looking forward to what comes next. Ps. Author keep it up! And does all the characters get a slight boost or are they going to stay the same to the actual MHA? Whilst Izuki is OP? Another Ps. Read up to chapter 10
A good fanfic which shows the potential of telekinesis and its application as a powerful quirk. Telekinesis, according to this novel can act as a weather controlling factor, a healing agent, a destroyer, a movement abilty, solve scientific challenges such as to create minor wormholes. Expecting many more applicabilities you can find from within this quirk, 'Telekinesis'. Thank you for the novel and hope to read more of the chapters.
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A great fanfic with an OP Izuku, but he still has his usual personality. Give it a try if you haven't, you won't be disappointed. Looking forward to reading more, only bad thing would be the update speed which is weekly, but it is worth waiting for.
This novel is good and one of the best fan fiction based on boku no pic.... I mean hero academia and you will not regret reading this. Now regarding story our mc have a quirk which is op and currently has no upper limit to what it can't do and because of that he won't be getting one for all from allmight and because of this the story will be taking a new route in the world of BnHA.
It's a good novel. O restante รฉ para quem lรช usando o navegador e o Google tradutor. A histรณria รฉ boa e estรก em desenvolvimento. Espero que o autor leve atรฉ o fim a histรณria. Declaraรงรฃo feita na mais pura sinceridade por um brasileiro.
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This review is up to the 8th chapter and itโs is going very well so far. I really like how it goes very in depth to his ability to control atoms with his mind. I wish good luck to this fan-fiction and hopefully youโll never drop it.
Ok 5/5 but the mc wayyyyyy 2 op. Author I bet there wont be any fight scenes that include Izuku because he can control atoms he cauld just Thanos snap them away, even if he doesnt want to kill he can cripple them.
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I have read a lot of fics and i know where this is heading but who knows . Yhis fic really have potential though and inreally want to see where this thing goes witha op character like this izuku we really need a new series of villians afterall what is going to happen when he favmce the nomu ofcourse repair his damaged brain and bring him to scences or throw him to the stratossphere or into the sun lets see where you are going to take it ...
Ok, not many chapters, but the mass release of chapters, including how well he has developed the character is amazing. The powers and the ways he uses them is also quite fun to read. So far it's a nice steady pace, with a good story and so far my number 1 BNHA Fan-Fic
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At the time of this review was 6 chapters. It's only been 6 chapters but it's clear that this will become a work of art. From the not to detailed back story of him discovering what his ability can do, to the MC interaction with the other characters. There also the science behind his abilities that I fully enjoy reading and understanding how he becomes strong. 5 stars around, a genuinely enjoyable read
I thoroughly enjoy this fan fiction, especially with the drought of good boku no hero academia fan fiction on this site. The grammar and spelling are perfect except for maybe a mistake her and there, the power is interesting and reminds me of another novel, I think it was called the daily life of the immortal king. Each power is given an explanation which is both good and bad. We donโt get to see the character grow or develop as he is already powerful and has done developed his quirk throughly. It is nice though as each power seems to make sense. I myself donโt understand how plasma works but you made it sound like that was how it should work, so I did not feel the need to question it. This goes along with his other abilities. Overall, I love your writing and your twist on the world but for now, the characters lack depth and I havenโt been to attached to this Deku and Bakugou compared to the canon ones, due to the lack of seeing them grow. Extra points for the suit, VERY NICE! Also please do update this more, because I am very interested in this novel but you have only written ten chapters in over two months, the plot has moved as far as the first and second episodes of the anime.
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Membuka SPOILER Homestly i love this story, I dont usually read fan fic stories mainly because they change the whole plot into some weird direction that compromises it but the way the author has put it down not only gives it an amazing new beginning woth different possibilities but also leaves me with a excited feeling to want mpre of it.
THANK YOUUU AUTHOR-SAMA.... thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks............. ...................................................................................... keep up the good work๐๐๐๐
One of the best stories on this app, it is well written and truly pushes the casual understanding of telekinesis into interesting directions. Bravo, and may I please have some more?
(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง โง๏พ๏ฝฅ: *ใฝ(โใฎโใฝ) (๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง โง๏พ๏ฝฅ: *ใฝ(โใฎโใฝ) (๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง โง๏พ๏ฝฅ: *ใฝ(โใฎโใฝ) (๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง โง๏พ๏ฝฅ: *ใฝ(โใฎโใฝ) (๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง โง๏พ๏ฝฅ: *ใฝ(โใฎโใฝ) (๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง โง๏พ๏ฝฅ: *ใฝ(โใฎโใฝ)
Finally a MHA fanfiction with an Author who can actually write and spell! I am loving Izukuโs personality being similar to the source material, and how Bakago is no longer a complete prick, just irritatingly smug. I think the quirk is pretty OP, but its still fun. Character interactions feel nice and natural also! Just need more chapters haha
Itโs quite alright for a new fanfiction . I donโt know why I have this feeling that something is missing in this story to make it really really great.
Finally a story with good and decent grammar. That doesnโt frustrate you whilst trying to read the book. Overall liked how All-Might got healed and looking forward to what comes next. Ps. Author keep it up! And does all the characters get a slight boost or are they going to stay the same to the actual MHA? Whilst Izuki is OP? Another Ps. Read up to chapter 10
A good fanfic which shows the potential of telekinesis and its application as a powerful quirk. Telekinesis, according to this novel can act as a weather controlling factor, a healing agent, a destroyer, a movement abilty, solve scientific challenges such as to create minor wormholes. Expecting many more applicabilities you can find from within this quirk, 'Telekinesis'. Thank you for the novel and hope to read more of the chapters.
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I Like you fanfic...... thank you............... keep up the good work๐๐ -------------------------------------------------------------------
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A great fanfic with an OP Izuku, but he still has his usual personality. Give it a try if you haven't, you won't be disappointed. Looking forward to reading more, only bad thing would be the update speed which is weekly, but it is worth waiting for.
This novel is good and one of the best fan fiction based on boku no pic.... I mean hero academia and you will not regret reading this. Now regarding story our mc have a quirk which is op and currently has no upper limit to what it can't do and because of that he won't be getting one for all from allmight and because of this the story will be taking a new route in the world of BnHA.
It's a good novel. O restante รฉ para quem lรช usando o navegador e o Google tradutor. A histรณria รฉ boa e estรก em desenvolvimento. Espero que o autor leve atรฉ o fim a histรณria. Declaraรงรฃo feita na mais pura sinceridade por um brasileiro.
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This review is up to the 8th chapter and itโs is going very well so far. I really like how it goes very in depth to his ability to control atoms with his mind. I wish good luck to this fan-fiction and hopefully youโll never drop it.
Ok 5/5 but the mc wayyyyyy 2 op. Author I bet there wont be any fight scenes that include Izuku because he can control atoms he cauld just Thanos snap them away, even if he doesnt want to kill he can cripple them.
Membuka SPOILER I have read a lot of fics and i know where this is heading but who knows . Yhis fic really have potential though and inreally want to see where this thing goes witha op character like this izuku we really need a new series of villians afterall what is going to happen when he favmce the nomu ofcourse repair his damaged brain and bring him to scences or throw him to the stratossphere or into the sun lets see where you are going to take it ...
Ok, not many chapters, but the mass release of chapters, including how well he has developed the character is amazing. The powers and the ways he uses them is also quite fun to read. So far it's a nice steady pace, with a good story and so far my number 1 BNHA Fan-Fic
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At the time of this review was 6 chapters. It's only been 6 chapters but it's clear that this will become a work of art. From the not to detailed back story of him discovering what his ability can do, to the MC interaction with the other characters. There also the science behind his abilities that I fully enjoy reading and understanding how he becomes strong. 5 stars around, a genuinely enjoyable read
I thoroughly enjoy this fan fiction, especially with the drought of good boku no hero academia fan fiction on this site. The grammar and spelling are perfect except for maybe a mistake her and there, the power is interesting and reminds me of another novel, I think it was called the daily life of the immortal king. Each power is given an explanation which is both good and bad. We donโt get to see the character grow or develop as he is already powerful and has done developed his quirk throughly. It is nice though as each power seems to make sense. I myself donโt understand how plasma works but you made it sound like that was how it should work, so I did not feel the need to question it. This goes along with his other abilities. Overall, I love your writing and your twist on the world but for now, the characters lack depth and I havenโt been to attached to this Deku and Bakugou compared to the canon ones, due to the lack of seeing them grow. Extra points for the suit, VERY NICE! Also please do update this more, because I am very interested in this novel but you have only written ten chapters in over two months, the plot has moved as far as the first and second episodes of the anime.
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