ImmortalCake

ImmortalCake

male LV 6

No, the cake is not a lie. The cake is simply immortal.

2017-06-11 Bergabung United States
Lencana 11

Moments 9
ImmortalCake
ImmortalCake
5 months ago
Commented

Author, just wanted to make a quick comment, you’ve been using “thier” but it should be “their”. Thanks

ImmortalCake
ImmortalCake
1 years ago
Posted

This seems to be a blatant ripoff of the Meddling Giant from ff.net, pretty much word for word. Not sure what you were thinking? https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13801875/1/Meddling-Giant

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ImmortalCake
ImmortalCake
ImmortalCake
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter.

ImmortalCake
ImmortalCake
2 years ago
Commented

poll is the correct spelling for what you wanted.

ImmortalCake
ImmortalCake
2 years ago
Commented

I prefer how it is so far, love the long chapters.

Question on the story pacing: I prefer fleshing things out and taking my time, but I'm not sure if it is being somewhat of an impediment to the plot progression. If need be, I can try to streamline some things to get there quicker, (Chunin exams, specifically the beginning where Naruto meets a certain red haired Jinchuriki, happens in one or two chapters from now.) Should I quicken the pace, or do the slow and steady route. (Slow and steady will mean the story will probably be close to 1mil before it's done, if not longer.)

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

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ImmortalCake
ImmortalCake
3 years ago
Commented

Bai?

ImmortalCake
ImmortalCake
3 years ago
Commented

"but he was glade for Guy's disarming nature." -> glad

ImmortalCake
ImmortalCake
4 years ago
Commented

If Izuna really wanted to see Kakashi without his mask while younger, couldn't he just use his X-Ray vision to see past his mask?