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This is really good, describes a deku with an ordinary quirk, but because he has 10 years to find out possibilities and limits, he can do much more, as he figured out he could move around cells, which is extremely powerful.
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I mean... Woah... I have been on this website for around half a year and my standards has been lowered to next to nothing, so i was incredibly overwhelmed with the quality of this novel. I highly incourage you to continue writing on this. Also the story writing is really good. The way you describe Izuku's quirk and the way he handles things is really neatly done. Also thanks for swearing, not a lot of novels do that. No sh!t, i would say that this is one of the best Fan-Fics posted on here.
I love everything about this novel but sadly at the moment it's on hiatus so I can't read anymore of this amazing story. ...................
It is an amazing book. Its exceptional, ingenious and the writer finds ways to explain Midoriya's moves. Although I'd like him to be more confident.
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Please write more, I follow you on fanfiction too and this is one of the best bnha fan fics plz plz plz write again. I have been waiting for a chapter for months now and nothing has come and this saddens me because this was by far my fav bnha. it’s a work of art
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I really liked it, I recommend anyone to read it if you are actually interested in novels with a character that actually utilizes the full potential of their abilities and not just the basics
Best MHA fanfic out their though Mc is sometimes a pussy but other than that the progress of the story is commendable ,keep posting more chapters and keep em coming.
A great story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
I need more of this lol . It's timeless i read it whenever I'm bored I've suggested it to many people all loved it I'm just sad thares not more
This novel of yours is excellent but the stability of updating the story is really annoying. Hope so you will understand and update story fastly.
Very good work actually, keep it up!! You should do more works. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤✨✨✨✨✨👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This was the best story I had ever read. The character were beautiful writen. My favorite is Bakaku more pleasant personality bit still being himself.
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Woah. Man, this story is realllyyyyy good. Don't you dare abandon it. I want to read it all. I'm excited about Nomu vs Izu. It'll be epic, i'm sure. Also MOMO x IZUKU!!
Make deku less op, but have lots of potential. And, besides that, your novel is great. Keep up the good work (and do not forget to make deku a little less op)
This is really good, describes a deku with an ordinary quirk, but because he has 10 years to find out possibilities and limits, he can do much more, as he figured out he could move around cells, which is extremely powerful.
Membuka SPOILER I mean... Woah... I have been on this website for around half a year and my standards has been lowered to next to nothing, so i was incredibly overwhelmed with the quality of this novel. I highly incourage you to continue writing on this. Also the story writing is really good. The way you describe Izuku's quirk and the way he handles things is really neatly done. Also thanks for swearing, not a lot of novels do that. No sh!t, i would say that this is one of the best Fan-Fics posted on here.
I love everything about this novel but sadly at the moment it's on hiatus so I can't read anymore of this amazing story. ...................
It is an amazing book. Its exceptional, ingenious and the writer finds ways to explain Midoriya's moves. Although I'd like him to be more confident.
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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Please write more, I follow you on fanfiction too and this is one of the best bnha fan fics plz plz plz write again. I have been waiting for a chapter for months now and nothing has come and this saddens me because this was by far my fav bnha. it’s a work of art
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I really liked it, I recommend anyone to read it if you are actually interested in novels with a character that actually utilizes the full potential of their abilities and not just the basics
Best MHA fanfic out their though Mc is sometimes a pussy but other than that the progress of the story is commendable ,keep posting more chapters and keep em coming.
A great story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
I need more of this lol . It's timeless i read it whenever I'm bored I've suggested it to many people all loved it I'm just sad thares not more
This novel of yours is excellent but the stability of updating the story is really annoying. Hope so you will understand and update story fastly.
Very good work actually, keep it up!! You should do more works. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤✨✨✨✨✨👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This was the best story I had ever read. The character were beautiful writen. My favorite is Bakaku more pleasant personality bit still being himself.
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Woah. Man, this story is realllyyyyy good. Don't you dare abandon it. I want to read it all. I'm excited about Nomu vs Izu. It'll be epic, i'm sure. Also MOMO x IZUKU!!
Make deku less op, but have lots of potential. And, besides that, your novel is great. Keep up the good work (and do not forget to make deku a little less op)