CHAOTIC ASURA

LV 14

Brezer

This could be a cool story but the grammar is terrible and I mean one if not the worst stories here for the grammar issue. The author needs an editor or translator or whatever.

LV 5

pandabanana

Every moment I see the shaunguang sisters, I get 100% more furious as they are basically shameless leeches who the mc blatantly helps and on top of that, they literally meddle with his affairs. If this isn’t the case of a parasitic relationship I don’t know what is.

LV 4

SAKIVGARUDA

I have always been shameless, why not now. Well the story tries to give an overpowered mc who will not always be in disadvantage. Why not let him get every opportunity thing.

LV 5

Sirione

I like this how mc is dealing with the situation, this story is cool I hope it stays constant without resorting to repetitive cliches..........................

LV 4

okyo

Not bad keep up the good work..............ubuvyvyv6c6c6fyvycycycyc7v7v6f5v4v4c4f4f4cfifuf4rc5dswqasdzxxbkkomnbhjggy7g7g7v6v6v6v7v7v7g7g7ibvuvuv6c6f6d5d5w😃☺😃😑😃😑😃😐😃😐

LV 14

StoneBowl

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story. It's development and continued updates excite me. Its grammar and writing style are decent. It flows well, but wouldn't fit well in a professional writing atmosphere. But, since you are reading novels here, this more personal and *******ish writing style shouldn't be a problem whatsoever. The character development has been somewhat shallow. The characters have generally stayed the same, with the only real character changes occurring in a few traumatized people. The change in one character which involved rape was - in my opinion - distasteful. It was a bit idealistic and a not well described change that could have been written better. But, the novel has since moved on, and my enjoyment has been rekindled. The cultivation system - while often referenced - could be better described. The characters true strength gain are not shown well; neither are the differences between ranks. Still, this doesn't truly hinder the novel. As it's highly consistent and quick chapters are pushed out, the story moves along nicely. The pace starts out has odd and choppy, but soon finds its rhythm. I hope the novel continues to grow in the way it has previously, and look forward to it's future chapters.

LV 5

dhark19

Nice........... ....................................................................mmm.mm.......,.....................................,.......................... ,.........,.........................,............ ..........,....,.. ......................................... thanks....................mmm. Nnnmmmmmnn................................. ..........mmm...

LV 14

Insert_Name

So far this is a damn good book and I recommend who likes “good” characters and Byronic heroes ————————————————————————————————————————————————

LV 5

MonarchOHeavens

The character is interesting the plot is interesting women are interesting all that is involved in the history of an interest of wanting more ....

LV 5

Sirione

is missing in the story of expressive dialogues, most of the time it seems robots talking...........................................................

LV 5

XDinosore

I really enjoy this. Smart MC and few overused cliches. 👏👏👏👏👏👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

LV 4

licani

good novel......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

Jezzekiel

Ahh, sigh, should have heeded the aux chapter's warning xD The novel is pretty decent, the plot progresses at a decent pace and the story presents a lot of information at the beginning, unlike other cultivation novels which info dump and expect you to understand everything. The paragraphs are quite messy, it's a bit hard to read, especially with the subpar grammar but those are minor issues, all in all, a good read. Keep it up!

LV 14

Yanorth

One of the best novels of this site, the mc is really cool and I'm loving that the mc don't just use 1 weapon but more than 10. The world background is really good and finally a mc that is a leader

LV 1

KenRingdomStory

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LV 5

saintk

so far this is good would like more chapters though but other than that i like that the mc has space and time power and beasts, would like to see what he does with them, pity the is no way to make a clone of himself that way he can practice all his powers at the same time,

LV 6

GGMissFortune

coughcough... MC came from some super OP family that is going through some trouble so his parents sent him down to a lower realm, which happened to be Beginner's village in classic RPG. MC's new adoptive father hooks him up with villager beauties -> said villager beauties are trash that leeches off MC -> MC is idiot that wastes his time in lower realm instead of grinding EXP

LV 6

GGMissFortune

boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp??? boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp??? boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp??? boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp??? boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp???

LV 6

Enlightened_Being

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