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hey you evil author ..how dare you leave this fanfic in between!!! i curse you with truck-kun without isekai..... Muahahahahahhaha.....!!!...
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hayst its been 1 year pls comeback ............. .......................................... ......................... . . ..
finally your back hurry up and make more.or I'll comit arson . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Writing quality: 1 horrible i see so many mistakes in one paragraph Updating: dont know 2 Development: to fast you barely get ahold of the situation 3 Character design: 2 terrible nothing interesting World: 1
*Kyokai Suigetsu* The serious review is gone. It was just an illusion. When did you think it was a real review? I can tell that you've never been true to me I can smell that you're acting so fearfully I can hear what you're hoping I want to hear I can feel the alarm bells are ringing in me I can touch but I know you don't feel a thing I can pray but I know you commit a sin I can sense now it's all become clear to see You're no good ,and you mean no good treacherously.
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Soooo good SAO br? Astonishing! Absolutely Amazing! Anyways interesting plot, gud character development, storylines smooth as baldi and so much more Overall, extraordinary miraculous portentous and marvelous! Btw grammar mistakes are still present hopefully will fix. Thanks for your hardwork! I appreciate it. And i wish you would spill sum gudass ConTEnT to keep up the hype..bye-
I liked the beginning of the story but after a while, the descriptions of the world weren't as good as they could've been. The worlds that he will travel to are good but I think you should make him travel to different worlds more.
I am not keen on writing o reviewing so I will just say that I love this story, I think It is great, and keep the hard work!! (5-star rating here, Tehee).
I love the story because it keeps the chapter entertaining pls update[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Noice . . . . . . ................hmmm .................... ...................what? ...................... ............haahhhh.....you still here?......
falta que actualice mas seguido los capítulos por que abecés demora mucho como maximo 1 mes y medio o mas....................................................[img = monedas]
a good read one of the rare few I bothered reading till the end (at the time of writing there are only 89 chapters) he starts off only slightly strong but ends up getting OP, unfortunately we dont really see him use his powers all that much except his sword skills.
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
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hey can anyone tell me does this has anything to do with the Vampire showing on the cover because I've read up to like around 40 chapters and so far it hasn't
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did u drop it? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] please continue its almost one month still waiting for it
very good story, I really liked how it develops and it goes to other worlds ... I just think it started to take a long time to update, the last 20 chapters were posted over the course of 8 months ... anyway, I really liked the story and the changes in the original story line, I just hope that it is possible to have more chapters faster ...
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muy buena te apoyo todos los días pero. por favor no demores mucho en subir un cap.. ...............-------------------------------------------------------
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bueno sigue asi ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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One of the most interesting book I read so far , it has very good character development and the story doesn't feel rushed . I definitely recommend people to read this book ...
the best bless continue the novel[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
hey you evil author ..how dare you leave this fanfic in between!!! i curse you with truck-kun without isekai..... Muahahahahahhaha.....!!!...
goog [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Membuka SPOILER hayst its been 1 year pls comeback ............. .......................................... ......................... . . ..
finally your back hurry up and make more.or I'll comit arson . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Writing quality: 1 horrible i see so many mistakes in one paragraph Updating: dont know 2 Development: to fast you barely get ahold of the situation 3 Character design: 2 terrible nothing interesting World: 1
*Kyokai Suigetsu* The serious review is gone. It was just an illusion. When did you think it was a real review? I can tell that you've never been true to me I can smell that you're acting so fearfully I can hear what you're hoping I want to hear I can feel the alarm bells are ringing in me I can touch but I know you don't feel a thing I can pray but I know you commit a sin I can sense now it's all become clear to see You're no good ,and you mean no good treacherously.
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Soooo good SAO br? Astonishing! Absolutely Amazing! Anyways interesting plot, gud character development, storylines smooth as baldi and so much more Overall, extraordinary miraculous portentous and marvelous! Btw grammar mistakes are still present hopefully will fix. Thanks for your hardwork! I appreciate it. And i wish you would spill sum gudass ConTEnT to keep up the hype..bye-
I liked the beginning of the story but after a while, the descriptions of the world weren't as good as they could've been. The worlds that he will travel to are good but I think you should make him travel to different worlds more.
I am not keen on writing o reviewing so I will just say that I love this story, I think It is great, and keep the hard work!! (5-star rating here, Tehee).
I love the story because it keeps the chapter entertaining pls update[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Noice . . . . . . ................hmmm .................... ...................what? ...................... ............haahhhh.....you still here?......
falta que actualice mas seguido los capítulos por que abecés demora mucho como maximo 1 mes y medio o mas....................................................[img = monedas]
a good read one of the rare few I bothered reading till the end (at the time of writing there are only 89 chapters) he starts off only slightly strong but ends up getting OP, unfortunately we dont really see him use his powers all that much except his sword skills.
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
mmmmmmmmmooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeee ccccccccccccccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaapppppppppppppppppppppp..............................
hey can anyone tell me does this has anything to do with the Vampire showing on the cover because I've read up to like around 40 chapters and so far it hasn't
Update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
did u drop it? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] please continue its almost one month still waiting for it
very good story, I really liked how it develops and it goes to other worlds ... I just think it started to take a long time to update, the last 20 chapters were posted over the course of 8 months ... anyway, I really liked the story and the changes in the original story line, I just hope that it is possible to have more chapters faster ...
GooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddGooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddGooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddGooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddGooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddGoooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddd
Dropped ? Update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update
ppppppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz uuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppdddddddddddddaaaaaaattttttttteeeeee mmmmmmmmmmoooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee ccccchhhhaaaapppttttteeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrsssssssss qqqqqqqqqqqquuuuuiiiiiiiccccccccckkkkkkkkkklllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy awesome story and plot-line so far
muy buena te apoyo todos los días pero. por favor no demores mucho en subir un cap.. ...............-------------------------------------------------------
Membuka SPOILER And very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍
bueno sigue asi ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Membuka SPOILER One of the most interesting book I read so far , it has very good character development and the story doesn't feel rushed . I definitely recommend people to read this book ...
the best bless continue the novel[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]