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It can be a bit jumpy at times but it still is a very fun read. You get shoved into different worlds so easily. All in all A very fun and interesting read.
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Great book please continue don't drop it And Update it We need moarrrrrrrrrrrr chaps and moarrrrrrrrrrrr
Great book. Want moarrrrrrrrrrrr chaps 🤩 Moaèrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Soon more chaps and frequent updates please
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It's not bad but not good either, many grammatical eror, plot and character is to shallow. The story have potential but no build on plot an character, there only part where heroines meet with mc somehow get crush/love with MC for example a maid that barely interact with him within less than a day now fawning over MC. MC is not dead but transfer suddenly to other world without really of anything. It have potential and can be come interesting if it rewritten.
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Dont read this book if you dont wanna cry this book is absolutely SHIT and this author is the worst but it deserves 5 stars 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Yeah. Grammar readable but bad. Updates bad. BLALBALBALBABLALBALBLALBLALBLBLBLBLBALBALBLABLBALBABLABALBALABLABLABLABLABLABLBALBALABLBALLABLABLABLABLBALABLBLBALABL
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A good story. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .
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The legendary mechanic w w.H.H.H is that the God of evolution.The company said he was just about anything to make scratch and it will help the delivery to come in in oN the strongest summoning system that you will not quite right away the world and then they have no idea where to find it
Five stars for the wonderful synopsis. Reeeereeeeerereeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
One word : Crazy(In the way I like) Fuck rule, story are belong to the creator so mess things up as you like. Who need to know how the MC **** with the story line and do crazy things.
Good story so far especially when this harem story MC was not a dick brain type. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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it's just straight up good it's better than my explosion chants like I don't even know what to say. Except can the author please update regularly cuz it's like he dies but then comes back to life after like a month or so
Was going to read it but after learning the name of the MC "turtle" kinda lost interest in the story and why the FUCK &#^@* words in novel if it has a FUCKING harem tag If your not mature enough don't bother to write a fucking novel
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I really like this fanfic, it's very different from the others. but unfortunately it takes so long to update the chapter. more please.
Honestly this is extremely good but doooood continue the sao arc we need it now you are not updating anymorw arrgbhhm........... .... .....
This is pretty good for me. And the story is interesting unlike some others. The only negative issue about this is.... I WANT MORE CHAPTERRRRRR
Author if you read my comment, what world will go after finishing the one. ------------------------ I leave a page (https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/), of several anime, which of these will be a light novel. .................................................................................................................................. ................................................................ ................................................................................ .................................................................................. ..................................................................... .................................................. ...................................................................... ............................................................................ ...........................................................................
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This story uses a different style of system and self hates. Its very fun and interesting when it comes to the characters. Overall very good story.
It can be a bit jumpy at times but it still is a very fun read. You get shoved into different worlds so easily. All in all A very fun and interesting read.
spoiler ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... its good
Great book please continue don't drop it And Update it We need moarrrrrrrrrrrr chaps and moarrrrrrrrrrrr
Great book. Want moarrrrrrrrrrrr chaps 🤩 Moaèrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Soon more chaps and frequent updates please
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
It's not bad but not good either, many grammatical eror, plot and character is to shallow. The story have potential but no build on plot an character, there only part where heroines meet with mc somehow get crush/love with MC for example a maid that barely interact with him within less than a day now fawning over MC. MC is not dead but transfer suddenly to other world without really of anything. It have potential and can be come interesting if it rewritten.
Membuka SPOILER More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Dont read this book if you dont wanna cry this book is absolutely SHIT and this author is the worst but it deserves 5 stars 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Yeah. Grammar readable but bad. Updates bad. BLALBALBALBABLALBALBLALBLALBLBLBLBLBALBALBLABLBALBABLABALBALABLABLABLABLABLABLBALBALABLBALLABLABLABLABLBALABLBLBALABL
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
A good story. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .
Membuka SPOILER More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
The legendary mechanic w w.H.H.H is that the God of evolution.The company said he was just about anything to make scratch and it will help the delivery to come in in oN the strongest summoning system that you will not quite right away the world and then they have no idea where to find it
Five stars for the wonderful synopsis. Reeeereeeeerereeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
One word : Crazy(In the way I like) Fuck rule, story are belong to the creator so mess things up as you like. Who need to know how the MC **** with the story line and do crazy things.
Good story so far especially when this harem story MC was not a dick brain type. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic hectic
it's just straight up good it's better than my explosion chants like I don't even know what to say. Except can the author please update regularly cuz it's like he dies but then comes back to life after like a month or so
Was going to read it but after learning the name of the MC "turtle" kinda lost interest in the story and why the FUCK &#^@* words in novel if it has a FUCKING harem tag If your not mature enough don't bother to write a fucking novel
Super good plz continue Super good plz continue Super good plz continue Super good plz continue Super good plz continue Super good plz continue Super good plz continue
I really like this fanfic, it's very different from the others. but unfortunately it takes so long to update the chapter. more please.
Honestly this is extremely good but doooood continue the sao arc we need it now you are not updating anymorw arrgbhhm........... .... .....
This is pretty good for me. And the story is interesting unlike some others. The only negative issue about this is.... I WANT MORE CHAPTERRRRRR
Author if you read my comment, what world will go after finishing the one. ------------------------ I leave a page (https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/), of several anime, which of these will be a light novel. .................................................................................................................................. ................................................................ ................................................................................ .................................................................................. ..................................................................... .................................................. ...................................................................... ............................................................................ ...........................................................................
Xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
This story uses a different style of system and self hates. Its very fun and interesting when it comes to the characters. Overall very good story.