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The supreme sovereign system

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Penulis: phamtonbullet

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Alfonso was a historian of earth who suddenly appear in the body of Alfonso Lockheart, a fallen prince that is the Lord of a formal city known as the wasteland valley, with infertile land and losing the protection of their god, the wasteland valley is land that is destined to be destroyer by the extreme weather and the attacks of beast.

Alfonso was in a despair situation; however, he wasn’t destined to fall in this land, that is because....

[The supreme sovereign system welcomes its new host, with the help of the Greek gods as your allies, you will become the new sovereign of this land!]

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phamtonbullet

Hello, everyone, I am the author of The supreme sovereign system, phamtonbullet, I just wanted to say a few things , believe me I am doing this just to express my opinion and not to shamelessly add reviews to the novel :v , so here we go: 1) I know that my nick name is writing wrong, it should be phantombullet but It was already taken, uwu. 2) I always read your comments my beloved readers, every time that you post a commend in any chapter, I read it. I know a few of you who always thanks me for the chapter, I really, really appreciate it. 3) As you may already notice, I have problems with the grammar , I am really sorry about that, I always feel bad about this, I am planning to take a few days to edit all my past chapters (1-25). I am using a few grammars correctos, and I am trying to find someone to be my proofreader(this was a suggestion from you) , in conclusion , I will do my best to give all of you a writing quality that you deserved. 3) As I was saying, I always read your commends, I know a lot of people have been complaining about the fact that I called Artemis, Artemisa. Well, the thing is this, I have ALWAYS called her by that name xD . I planned to leave it that way, however, to give you a better time in reading the novel, I changed to Artemis in chapter 30 and it will stay that way from now on. 4) This novel will be a long one, The adventures of Alfonso are just beginning, some of you have asked if Alfonso will get superpower and fight by himself, well, I won't spoil you, so I won't answer, I will only say that Alfonso would have to use his head more than his muscles...(he is crippled anyway, :v) 5) I will now(02/07/2018) put a bonus chapter system, however , to have them, I will have to shamelessly ask for your votes(spirit stones) , this bonus chapters will be given depending on what position we ended on the week: - Ranked between 90-80 : 1 bonus chapter - Ranked between 70-60 : 2 bonus chapters - Ranked between 50-40 : 3 bonus chapters I will stop there, lets be honest, we have a long way to get to further positions, when this novel consolidates itself better , I will do another system of bonus chapters. 6) I usually post 1 chapter per day. 7) Finally, I want to thank you all of you who follow the adventures of Alfonso, please keep looking forward for it! And for the ones who are just reading reviews, what are you waiting for? Alfonso Lockheart command you! Read it!

6yr
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Habibies

bro, you have a good story. its nice to see a new novelist rise up to shine, i will try to support you by reading and appreciate your works the grammar was horrible at early but its getting better and better later on, it's show how hard you work. we are really thankful for that. but you see, the problem is every new reader always start from beginning, and it will really help yourself if you revise you early work. I'm sure it will encourage many new reader. i thank you for your time and effort, i wish you goodluck

6yr
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Daoist_Angel_Blue

I want to like the story, but the grammar is just hard to stomach after 10 or 15 chapters... please find a beta or proofreader... This story has so much potential, but the bad English is ruining the enjoyment of the story.

6yr
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Dis77
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For those looking for a good historical fiction which a modern man tries to use his wits to gain an advantage in a fantasy scenario, this isn't it This novel is disappointing because they give the MC the perfect weapon to tackle the next mission (so if there was a fire demon they would give him a water mage just to be able to counter it perfectly) The MC's knowledge is barely relevant as the system gives him textbooks on what to do (agriculture etc) Lazy writing and poor plot

5yr
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Prideful_Lion

The MC is the slave of the system and the gods. Why would anyone help someone else to become strong to rule them. That's just plain stupid. Why would anyone want to live like that. He just should had killed himself at least should've free from this bull****.

5yr
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zerochan

The story is interesting but I agree with the others. The grammar is half-bad although I can understand what you are trying to convey it is tiring to always guess the right words and reconstructing the sentences. You need to look for an editor. Once you release many chapters not all people has the patience to play "guess". Dont take this comment too hard. You have potential its just the grammar that's holding you back.

6yr
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blancheart

I just read about 5 of your chapters and I have to say it's the most horribly cringe worthy work ever. Be it the MC or the ground work of your story or the content delivery which is like drivel of mistakes written by a 6 year old.......... Please improve.

5yr
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CocoaButter

It had such a good storyline but the author's English level is not very high. There is so many grammar and spelling mistakes it ruins the story. Also the plot is not consistent and the author forgot to search about greek gods. It's a mess. I don't recommend this to anyone. I got headache correcting all the mistakes mentally while reading.

5yr
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Herien
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The writing is lower on the spectrum but I won't say trash to others novel I read. However, from the comment I read so far it seem that it really bad before he got an editor. There might be fews errors stil in need of tweak. What kill me is the characters and the setting;to be specefic it would be system. The system is absurd as it can summon gods yet it can't fucking heal the main protagonist. Then the wolf ****en neuter that leg. I couldve deal with a weak character but strong in other areas but when the MC solve the problem through plot Amor by allying with the wolf that made him pratically dead as a character and more of a puppet. The otherhand, the puppeter isnt well thought out or I'm expecting too much from a system novel. It doesnt give ant expantion of the system and why it all Earth(Greek) Gods. For example. Were the Greek God s ever worshipped in the the new the planet or is the system just generating/ acquiring Souls with potential of being gods with the geberated menories basebon the epics og hero and gods from Earth. Also, it seem that that MC could be more than a mortal or a mere God base on the system method of empowering him through collecing ,training, and battling wild goddesses. Also, i wouldnt have mind if he sacrifice a leg for godly speed or something but no he had to plotamored into allying with a wolf that would eventually be enemies. I say that because the wolf or Lyon; whaterver the greek word for wolf will be enemoes base on his backstory and MC identity of work traveler from a modern Democrat developed country which destroy the envirement and treat animal as pet as well. So it pointless and meanless other waste of time . ******Note I haven't got passchapter 50

5yr
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Thiodexal

This is the third or forth time I've tried to get into this story, but again the bad grammar and characters etc. have kept me from getting past the first few chapters. This is a shame because there seem to be some interesting ideas that I'd love to read about. 9 months ago as of writing this review the Author said that they were going to proofread/edit the start of the novel. Either this hasnt happened or they havent quite done a good enough job. Overall, a story with interesting ideas, but poor execution lets it down especially when compared to a few of the other system novels.

5yr
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wallshades

Way too many grammatical errors and awkward sentence structure. This novel needs a lot of editing. Character-wise, it is kinda cliche but something that can be easily pardoned. The only redeeming feature of the story is the plot. It is kinda interesting to see a system that revolves around Greek mythology.

5yr
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NineCloud

The concept is good and the story looks nice; however, it's filled with run-on sentences, grammar problems, and has a few rare spelling errors. The writing quality is what's holding back your work.

6yr
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Wolf_God

At the beginning the grammar is pretty bad but the author get an editor and it gets a bit better some of the mythology is not entirely correct but it's also a fiction story so who gives a f*** all in all though I really like it; I started 3 days ago with there being 251 chapters and finish waiting for more.🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤

5yr
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ATCkit

not worth the read. The grammar and spelling is horrible and, shows no sign of changing or editing. It is this low level of quality that makes me avoid most new works that look great in the narrative but is destroyed by unprofessionalism. The background was not bad but is very hard to comprehend some times. it might get better, but it simply couldn't overcome the lack of care exhibited in the writing. Hopefully, this story will be revised in the future.

5yr
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Lucipher

Really wish webnovel wouldn't lock the chapters that you have read..... XO well I was really liking this webnovel now to put it back on the backburner...... I wouldn't mind paying for the chapters but if I have to unlock the ones back from chp 100 to 190 I'll just wait. It was a great novel while it lasted

5yr
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ReaderofGoods

The writing at the start was, if I can be frank, horrible. I almost dropped it after seeing the numerous misspellings and grammatical issues, however. The author has improved over time and has painted a really interesting world with colorful characters. If you have the patience, you will love the story development. Tryyyyy it!!!!!

6yr
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Ney
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The story is about a historian whi tranmigrated to another world (similar to ancient era earth) as a loser lord of a ****ty town. His perks are having a system which summons greek gods and various mythical equipment. This story has a decent plot so far. The world was made uniquely and has the great potential. Characters are well thought of. E.g. tsundere artemis godess. The only down side are there are too many typos to the point that it gets onto your nerves. I highly suggest that the author switch off his auto complete function when typing. Or better yet have a proofreader or editor. Especially correct the first few chapters. Well get past the typos and you'd get a really great story. So far at least...

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freakmedic

My first impression about this is release that witch I say author you just add a system removes the witches add tadahhh new novel 😂😂😂 why all author concepts is always the same nothing new 😫😫😫😫

6yr
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Jalil_Abdellah

excellent work mate i really love the story the characters Everything is exciting . I have read the episode of the funereal many times and it still makes me laugh That fella chrono is awesome it just like he figured everything about the world he really gets it keep posting man I really get an addiction . keep up the good work don't take your sweet time

4yr
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Oppo_Red

Hey author,i like you work but at the beginning you have typo and grammar errors.since im idle i edited it for you for free,if you want it,ill send it via email.its only chapter 1 today coz its already 2 am here,maybe i do some more later

4yr
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Chapter 431: Announcement! 1 years ago

Jilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. Time for editing 6 years ago

Jilid 3 : Hephaestus

  1. 87
    Prologue(part one) 6 years ago
  2. 88
    Prologue(part two) 6 years ago
  3. 89
    Cursed 6 years ago
  4. 90
    Prologue(part 3) 6 years ago
  5. 91
    Artemis wakes up 6 years ago
  6. 92
    A pair of brother and sister(part one) 6 years ago
  7. 93
    A pair of brother and sister(part two) 6 years ago
  8. 94
    The old man's name 6 years ago
  9. 95
    Good piece of news from afar 6 years ago
  10. 96
    Emperor 6 years ago
  11. 97
    Legacy of Time 6 years ago
  12. 98
    blank 6 years ago
  13. 99
    Alfonso's analysis 6 years ago
  14. 100
    Drakini 6 years ago
  15. 101
    [HIDDEN TITLE] 6 years ago
  16. 102
    [Hidden Title] 6 years ago
  17. 103
    New function 6 years ago
  18. 104
    I will tell you a secret 6 years ago
  19. 105
    Alfonso's answer 6 years ago
  20. 106
    The letter 6 years ago
  21. 107
    The Paradise Council 6 years ago
  22. 108
    Negotiation 6 years ago
  23. 109
    Zookeeper 6 years ago
  24. 110
    What really matters 6 years ago
  25. 111
    Meeting between lords(part one) 6 years ago
  26. 112
    Meeting between lords(part two) 6 years ago
  27. 113
    Confrontation 6 years ago
  28. 114
    Values 6 years ago
  29. 115
    [Hidden Title] 6 years ago
  30. 116
    Good job, Your highness 6 years ago
  31. 117
    The amazons! 6 years ago
  32. 118
    Little Pit's progress 6 years ago
  33. 119
    Alfonso's orders 6 years ago
  34. 120
    A new unit 6 years ago
  35. 121
    Visiting Hygiea 6 years ago
  36. 122
    Halloween- part one 6 years ago
  37. 123
    Halloween- part two 6 years ago
  38. 124
    blank 6 years ago
  39. 125
    Is all your fault 6 years ago
  40. 126
    The weight of a leader 6 years ago
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    Dad 6 years ago
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    [Hidden Title] 6 years ago
  43. 129
    Does it work? 6 years ago
  44. 130
    Meeting the leader 6 years ago
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    Drako 6 years ago
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    As dense as a black hole 6 years ago
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    blank 6 years ago
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    Two options 6 years ago
  49. 135
    Origin 6 years ago
  50. 136
    Encounter 6 years ago
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    blank 6 years ago
  52. 138
    [Hidden Title] 6 years ago
  53. 139
    [Hidden Title] 6 years ago
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    blank 6 years ago
  55. 141
    Battle against the death generals! (part one) 6 years ago
  56. 142
    Battle against the death generals! (part two) 6 years ago
  57. 143
    Battle against the death generals! (part three) 6 years ago
  58. 144
    [Hidden Title] 6 years ago
  59. 145
    Battle against the death generals(part four) 6 years ago
  60. 146
    The path of the hunter! 6 years ago
  61. 147
    Battle against the death generals! (part five) 6 years ago
  62. 148
    Battle agains the death generals!(part six) 6 years ago
  63. 149
    [Hidden Title] 6 years ago
  64. 150
    Desesperate situation! 6 years ago
  65. 151
    Hero Bagde- Version 2.0 6 years ago
  66. 152
    The might of a Hero! 6 years ago
  67. 153
    Blank 6 years ago
  68. 154
    Impossible task 6 years ago
  69. 155
    News from far away 6 years ago
  70. 156
    Trash 6 years ago
  71. 157
    My name is... 6 years ago
  72. 158
    Reflexions 6 years ago
  73. 159
    Big Reconstruccion Project! (Part one) 6 years ago
  74. 160
    Big construction project!(part two) 6 years ago
  75. 161
    More than a puppet 6 years ago
  76. 162
    First task 6 years ago
  77. 163
    All efforsts have its rewards 6 years ago
  78. 164
    A position of trust 6 years ago
  79. 165
    Do you like music? 6 years ago
  80. 166
    blank 5 years ago
  81. 167
    Arrival-part one 5 years ago
  82. 168
    Arrival-part two 5 years ago
  83. 169
    Arrival-part three 5 years ago
  84. 170
    Welcome to Wasteland Valley- part one 5 years ago
  85. 171
    Welcome to Wasteland Valley(part two) 5 years ago
  86. 172
    Duel of brilliant minds! Alfonso vs Socrates! part one 5 years ago
  87. 173
    Duel of brilliant Minds! Alfonso vs Socrates! (Part two) 5 years ago
  88. 174
    Blank 5 years ago
  89. 175
    The calm before the storm 5 years ago

Jilid 4 : Dionisius

  1. 176
    The next step 5 years ago
  2. 177
    The troublemaker has come! Part one 5 years ago
  3. 178
    The Troublemaker has come!(part two) 5 years ago
  4. 179
    Get out 5 years ago
  5. 180
    A shocking discovery! 5 years ago
  6. 181
    Alfonso's promise 5 years ago
  7. 182
    Blank 5 years ago
  8. 183
    The worries of a mother 5 years ago
  9. 184
    A certain... 5 years ago
  10. 185
    Fifth person 5 years ago
  11. 186
    Weird Tendecies 5 years ago
  12. 187
    A shadow in the dark 5 years ago
  13. 188
    Anastasia and Alfonso vs Bernio! (part one) 5 years ago
  14. 189
    Alfonso and Anastasia vs Bernio! (part two) 5 years ago
  15. 190
    It will be fun 5 years ago
  16. 191
    BLANK 5 years ago
  17. 192
    Protest- part one 5 years ago
  18. 193
    Protest- part two 5 years ago
  19. 194
    The guess are coming! 5 years ago
  20. 195
    The Lockheart family 5 years ago
  21. 196
    blank 5 years ago
  22. 197
    The funeral(part one) 5 years ago
  23. 198
    The funeral(part two) 5 years ago
  24. 199
    The funeral(part three) 5 years ago
  25. 200
    What did you just call me? 5 years ago
  26. 201
    In your own mind 5 years ago
  27. 202
    Fury 5 years ago
  28. 203
    ESCAPE! 5 years ago
  29. 204
    Two people 5 years ago
  30. 205
    The identity of the two troublemakers 5 years ago
  31. 206
    Weird gods 5 years ago
  32. 207
    Development 5 years ago
  33. 208
    Mirror 5 years ago
  34. 209
    The man in the dark 5 years ago
  35. 210
    The next Legacy 5 years ago
  36. 211
    You dont know 5 years ago
  37. 212
    Problems, one after the other(part one) 5 years ago
  38. 213
    Resolve 5 years ago
  39. 214
    Conference- part one 5 years ago
  40. 215
    conference part two 5 years ago
  41. 216
    Fear 5 years ago
  42. 217
    Offer 5 years ago
  43. 218
    Embarrassment 5 years ago
  44. 219
    Peaceful days gone- part one 5 years ago
  45. 220
    Pacefull days gone(part two) 5 years ago
  46. 221
    Maria 5 years ago
  47. 222
    blank 5 years ago
  48. 223
    Two sides 5 years ago
  49. 224
    Peringrer Town- part one 5 years ago
  50. 225
    Peringrer Town- part two- 5 years ago
  51. 226
    Rumors of the crippled madman 5 years ago
  52. 227
    Love in the air 5 years ago
  53. 228
    Blank 5 years ago
  54. 229
    Tyrant- part one- 5 years ago
  55. 230
    Tyrant-part two- 5 years ago
  56. 231
    Transactions with Oliver 5 years ago
  57. 232
    Dimitri's decision-part one- 5 years ago
  58. 233
    Dimitri's decision-part two- 5 years ago
  59. 234
    Love is selfish 5 years ago
  60. 235
    A risky way to get money 5 years ago
  61. 236
    Wanted man 5 years ago
  62. 237
    A deathly gift 5 years ago
  63. 238
    Rules 5 years ago
  64. 239
    Each one with their own thoughs 5 years ago
  65. 240
    The empty throne 5 years ago
  66. 241
    The past of Chrono 5 years ago
  67. 242
    Starry sky 5 years ago
  68. 243
    A perfect job for the idiotic trio 5 years ago
  69. 244
    Io's adventures 5 years ago
  70. 245
    The thief 5 years ago
  71. 246
    Madam Vivian 5 years ago
  72. 247
    The memories of yesterday, the sorrows of today 5 years ago
  73. 248
    Aphrodite and Vitri 5 years ago
  74. 249
    Choise 5 years ago
  75. 250
    Punishment 5 years ago
  76. 251
    A shadow that envelops Leitol 5 years ago
  77. 252
    Ripped off by the sytem 5 years ago
  78. 253
    Alister 5 years ago
  79. 254
    Duel 5 years ago
  80. 255
    Punch 5 years ago
  81. 256
    Shy 5 years ago
  82. 257
    A naive scheme 5 years ago
  83. 258
    Vitality Pearl 5 years ago
  84. 259
    Little blue is back! 5 years ago
  85. 260
    Sebastian's worries 5 years ago
  86. 261
    Alfonso arrives to Arcadia 5 years ago
  87. 262
    Three kids 5 years ago
  88. 263
    Incoming danger 5 years ago
  89. 264
    The party-part one- 5 years ago
  90. 265
    The party-part two- 5 years ago
  91. 266
    The party-part three- 5 years ago
  92. 267
    The party-part four- 5 years ago
  93. 268
    Just take my hand 5 years ago
  94. 269
    A good father 5 years ago
  95. 270
    Pierrot 5 years ago
  96. 271
    Suicide attemp 5 years ago
  97. 272
    Inferno City 5 years ago
  98. 273
    Dionisius's decision-part one- 5 years ago
  99. 274
    Dionisius's decision-part two- 5 years ago
  100. 275
    America 5 years ago
  101. 276
    Anastasia's heart-part one- 5 years ago
  102. 277
    Anastasia's heart-part two- 5 years ago
  103. 278
    Anastasia's heart-part three- 5 years ago
  104. 279
    Anastasia's heart-part four- 5 years ago
  105. 280
    Anastasia's heart-final- 5 years ago
  106. 281
    Deathmatch 5 years ago
  107. 282
    Responsability 5 years ago
  108. 283
    Beat down 5 years ago
  109. 284
    Mindbreak-part one- 5 years ago
  110. 285
    Mindbreak-part two- 5 years ago
  111. 286
    [Hidden Title] 5 years ago
  112. 287
    [Hidden title] 5 years ago
  113. 288
    Conversation 5 years ago
  114. 289
    Fascinating 5 years ago
  115. 290
    The fury of the queen 5 years ago
  116. 291
    Queen and King 5 years ago
  117. 292
    [Hidden Title] 5 years ago
  118. 293
    The mighty power of destiny 5 years ago
  119. 294
    A change of heart? 5 years ago
  120. 295
    Fight in Hell's Asylum! -part one- 5 years ago
  121. 296
    Fight in Hell's Asylum! -part two- 5 years ago
  122. 297
    Fight in Hell's Asylum -part three- 5 years ago
  123. 298
    Fight in Hell's Asylum! -part four- 5 years ago
  124. 299
    Fight at Hell's Asylum -part five- 5 years ago
  125. 300
    Fight at Hell's Asylum -part six- 5 years ago
  126. 301
    Fight in Hell's Asylum -part seven- 5 years ago
  127. 302
    Selene 5 years ago
  128. 303
    Blindess 5 years ago
  129. 304
    Timeless Family 5 years ago
  130. 305
    Blood Transformation 4 years ago
  131. 306
    The recoil of Destiny 4 years ago
  132. 307
    Choice 4 years ago
  133. 308
    [Hidden Title] 4 years ago
  134. 309
    Heretics 4 years ago
  135. 310
    Opposite forces 4 years ago
  136. 311
    Autumn 4 years ago
  137. 312
    Demeter vs Dionisius 4 years ago
  138. 313
    Alfonso's will power awakens! 4 years ago
  139. 314
    Nostradamus's Record! 4 years ago
  140. 315
    The winds of war(2 in 1) 4 years ago

Jilid 5 : Hecate

  1. 316
    The Terkin family 4 years ago
  2. 317
    Condition 4 years ago
  3. 318
    Who is the player? 4 years ago
  4. 319
    [Hidden Title] 4 years ago
  5. 320
    Hekate 4 years ago
  6. 321
    Overlap Justice 4 years ago
  7. 322
    The meeting 4 years ago
  8. 323
    Election 4 years ago
  9. 324
    Choosen 4 years ago
  10. 325
    Profecy 4 years ago
  11. 326
    History always repeat itself 4 years ago
  12. 327
    Sky City 4 years ago
  13. 328
    Alfonso's sin 4 years ago
  14. 329
    Scar 4 years ago
  15. 330
    Killing with three words 4 years ago
  16. 331
    The child 4 years ago
  17. 332
    [Hidden Title] 4 years ago
  18. 333
    Oracles-part two- 4 years ago
  19. 334
    Short-minded person 4 years ago
  20. 335
    Little blue's evolution 4 years ago
  21. 336
    A hidden enemy 4 years ago
  22. 337
    Pushy woman 4 years ago
  23. 338
    The conference begins! - part one - 4 years ago
  24. 339
    The conference begins! -part two- 4 years ago
  25. 340
    The conference begins!-part three- 4 years ago
  26. 341
    The secret behind the fire sword-part one- 4 years ago
  27. 342
    The secret behind the fire sword-part two- 4 years ago
  28. 343
    The soverign's pet 4 years ago
  29. 344
    Edo makes a move 4 years ago
  30. 345
    I agree with you, Edo 4 years ago
  31. 346
    Husband and wife 4 years ago
  32. 347
    Zero zone 4 years ago
  33. 348
    Ant 4 years ago
  34. 349
    Let me help you 4 years ago
  35. 350
    Your father loves you 4 years ago
  36. 351
    Welcome Back 4 years ago
  37. 352
    A new mission 4 years ago
  38. 353
    War at Wasteland Valley-part one- 4 years ago
  39. 354
    War at Wasteland Valley-part two- 4 years ago
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    War at Wasteland Valley!-part three- 4 years ago
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    A way out of the first circle-part two- 4 years ago
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    The auction starts! 4 years ago
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    A surprise in the auction 4 years ago
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    Hunting game 4 years ago
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    The Hunting game begins! 4 years ago
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    fifty-one hunters 4 years ago
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    Let me reintroduce myself 3 years ago
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    New friend 3 years ago
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    A new journey 3 years ago
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