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Sycore_w
LV 1Writer of novels. My contact email is - sycore.w@gmail.com
2024-04-16 Joint UkraineBadges 3
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Guys, dunno if I'm going to make it, yesterday it was 5 hours with electricity, today is three hours total if not count night hours, I can't write consistently with such extreme odds, and it's also +37C hot and without an AC or fan as there is no electricity to power it. I hope the situation would improve soon, sorry for the recent delays with updates and thanks for the understanding!
ch 67 Tension Is Rising. Hikari Wants to Assassinate Danzo?
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
I see it can be interpreted that way, but when Koichi appeared and rescued them, there is stated that she was worried when in fact she should feel relief of being rescued instead, there is no mention that she was not happy with the situation of being rescued, but she was not happy that Yuta was observing her obviously abnormal reaction though. I can't say more on the matter now though, as the whole thing about Hikari is not there yet, so I can't spoiler things, but I can say that it is not long before the situation about Hikari would be revealed.
[AN: Thank goodness this mission is over, I'm quite exhausted writing those fights to be honest, and it took more chapters than I thought it would, but I hope you enjoyed it. I think it is time to speed up things a little and fast forward a year or two and finally deal with Danzo. Will Yuta be able to murder that bastard for good? Will see soon enough…
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
Other abilities will 'unlock' later on in the story. The whole story is not about the time-control powers I'm afraid, at least not on this early stage of the story.
Did she really come here to warn me about Danzo? Why would she do that? She wants me to be careful? Is that what it is? It's not like me being careful can save us, at least not in her opinion as she doesn't know my true capabilities of course. No, she is probably up to something, maybe she has a plan on how deal with Danzo? That is just a wishful thinking, besides she was correct, I can't really trust her, but with my time-travel cheat it not really matters, as the trust can be substituted with emergency time-travel anyway, right?'
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
He attempted to capture Sasuke and Itachi for only be defeated with genjutsu most of the times, in the end it was also through genjutsu that Sasuke subdued Orochimaru during the Orochimaru's attempt to seize Sasuke's body. You can think that it's just the Sharingan that is That strong, but other characters of the Orochimaru's level is usually have a good countermeasures against such genjutsus and didn't struggle against it so much. Even Deidara was able to prepare countermeasures against Itachi's genjutsu, but Orochimaru was unable to, hence his vulnerability to it caused by his flawed switching bodies jutsu, that as showed in the anime, caused all the souls of the shinobi whos bodies he ever possesses to drag along his own soul as a baggage.
About immortality, for example, that is Orochimaru's goal. And he spends like what, 3-4 decades of studying and research and the best thing he comes up with is the flawed jutsu of possessing other shinobi's bodies every few years and making himself vulnerable to genjutsu in the process.
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
The idea is interesting but I don't think that possible. It's specifically mentioned in the original story that balance between this three energies must be achieved for creating senjutsu chakra. I also believe that this is the entire reason Orochimaru was unable to obtain it, as when he started to switch bodies, his Yang/Physical energy becomes much weaker than Yin/Spiritual one and he was unable to establish said balance.
[AN: What Hikari is up to? Will Danzo really stop targeting the team-two? When Shisui will finally come to the picture? Could the Uchiha clan actually be saved? Is Hikari from the Root or is she also a reincarnator or something completely different? Will Yuta be able to learn Sage Mode with his disbalance of Physical and Spiritual energies? Will Yuta find a way to acquire bloodlines and finally gets the famous red eyes, or would it be white eyes, maybe both? Will Yuta be able to travel 1k years into the past and meet Hagoromo?
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
Well, I think it's because nothing like that ever mentioned in the original story hence sound foreign in the Naruto world background. I will just replace it by mentioning things like "That Jonin is strong..." or "...despite they have a Chunin level chakra, they are quite weak...". I think that would be more fitting in the Naruto fanfiction after all, I'm not removing the mentions of the power level, just changing it. I hope that make sense.
[AN: I previously used terms like low- mid- high-Chunin level and so on, but some people mentioned in comments that they didn't like that. I have an idea to just use the canon terms like Chunin/Jonin and just mention the strength differences between shinobi in the same rank instead, I will be keeping the low-mid-high stuff in my mind and in my power ranks calculations, but in the text, I will only mention the general rank, like Chunin, Jonin etc. from now on. I would like to hear more opinions on this matter.
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
Well, he isn't sure if he noticed it or not, that happens. If this thing used often in other stories then it only means that this is the commonly used tool for the authors to convey something to the reader without making the MC to look like a robot that is 100% sharp, smart and didn't make any mistakes ever.
Hikari noticed that Yuta was looking at her and she looked back, some dangerous glint flashed in her eyes, but the next moment she appeared as her usual self as if nothing happened and Yuta started to think if that was just his imagination or something.
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
Why do you think so? I'm not saying if it false or true, just asking...
[AN: Thank goodness this mission is over, I'm quite exhausted writing those fights to be honest, and it took more chapters than I thought it would, but I hope you enjoyed it. I think it is time to speed up things a little and fast forward a year or two and finally deal with Danzo. Will Yuta be able to murder that bastard for good? Will see soon enough…
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
Well, I don't think so, it's a good way to gain Itachi's trust and support from the Yuta's perspective, especially while he can cancel it if anything goes wrong, I don't get it why some people reacted so negative about the whole thing.
[AN: MC is about to start some risky business there, is he will be alright or is it going to backfire? Who knows...
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
And learning and mastering new jutsus is not an experience? I'd say this type of experience is on the second place right after the actual combat.
'A way to increase the spiritual energy is to practicing ninjutsu and getting experience, something like that should work if I remember things correctly. But that is for the future, I can't practice ninjutsu before the academy.'
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
He still cant, the new things will unlock later on, it's only time-travel back in time with a soul for the time being
But If you really upset that much by Yuta's insufficient power level and even calling him 'trash', then I only can recommend for you to read some other naruto fanfics where the tag 'weaktostrong' are replaced by 'wishfulfilment' or 'overpowered' or something like that, sorry that my fanfic are not to your taste. Thanks for reading this far though.
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
The Iwa dude using a some sort of stone-skin jutsu there
'Damned, what a freaking tank, is he still considered a shinobi at this point? All my tricks are meaningless in front of this amount of raw power and defense…' Yuta thought while taking a position beside the chakra suppression seal trap to be ready to activate it and reinforce it with his chakra, his last hidden shadow clone doing the same on the other side of the trap.
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
Things are more complicated that that, at least in my understanding of it. Root contains dozens if not hundred of shinobi who is mostly Chunin and Jonin with a lot of experience and some secret techniques, dealing with Root would require something more then just throwing a couple thousands explosive tags at the problem. As for traveling underground, he is just fresh Chunin that only recently start to learn elemental jutsus (at least in Koichi's POV) and first thing first - he should master at least his main affinity element and not throw himself at mastering the element he doesn't have any affinity with, that is just counterproductive.
ch 64 Under the Siege, part 4
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
He used thousands of explosive seals there though. And what is the fun in making it too OP and 'sure kill' thing? And didn't Konan used Mutually Multiplying Explosive Tags jutsu to attack Obito with explosive seals? Our MC is not having that yet. As for the argument that Yuta should not spend time on developing Fuinjutsu, if his Fuinjutsu are not able to deal with Jonins from the start - I don't even want to say anything about that, it just wrong.
ch 62 Under the Siege, part 2
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
It's not possible, the ability works in a way that it depletes all soul energy each time, so Yuta would have to wait 30 days after each time-travel to be able to use it again. If not for that restriction, every chapter would be a mess of dozens 'quick save/reload' moments and I'm definitely not having that.
ch 16 Fight With Itachi
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
Yea, I know, as I mentioned many times already, this is my first writing work and English is my second language, early chapters, like 20 or so is not that great, sorry about that, but I'm not re-writing them as it would take a lot of time and I already don't have much to post new chapters more regularly...
ch 0 2 Time travel ability?
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
Why not? Besides obvious moral reasons there is also a good opportunity to gain many jutsu through Itachi in the future
'But I can't just tell Itachi about the future events to convince him just like that, can I? Or maybe I can… Will Itachi believe me if I tell him about the future? If I tell him about something that only he can know then maybe he will…'
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
That girl is just underestimated the kid in front of her too much and didn't expect him to launch advanced genjutsu against her, that's all. Strength and experience ain't everything, as if it would be then shinobi wont be so obsessed with sneak attacks all the time, as even a genin can kill a jonin with a kunai if jonin is not on guard. As for Itachi, he is the god of genjutsu in the future, so it's seems reasonable that he starts mastering genjutsu from a young age. And for Yuta it's already good that he managed to keep up with Itachi with just some additional years of practicing in the time-loop, I'm more worried about Yuta's growth that might seem unrealistically fast if anything.
But If you really upset that much by Yuta's insufficient power level and even calling him 'trash', then I only can recommend for you to read some other naruto fanfics where the tag 'weaktostrong' are replaced by 'wishfulfilment' or 'overpowered' or something like that, sorry that my fanfic are not to your taste. Thanks for reading this far though.
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
Good point, but since when do people actually become logical? He want's to live as long as he wants, being not limited by lifespan or some hostile strong person that might kill him, at the same time he is not ready to part with his humanity. That overall thing might look not logical but what about it? It's not like logic can stop everyone from doing stuff
[AN: It's not that MC is too restricted by his morals, he is just afraid that he would lose his humanity and starts treating everyone else as NPC's. It's too easy for someone with that ability to slip and become evil, killing people left and right with excuse that he would time travel and make everything like it's never happened.
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
...With Lord Hokage, Master Jiraiya, Lady Tsunade and young master Fujin... Am I the only one who read it that way?
"That's right! With Lord Hokage, Master Jiraiya, Lady Tsunade and young Fujin, we can fight all four enemy Kage at the same time! And, don't forget that we still have the Copy Ninja Kakashi!"
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex