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As the Poison Tester, it is my duty to review Harry Potter fics, and this one cured my cancer. It's just excellent in every way. The premise is that Harry Potter from the end of book 7 transmigrates into a parallel dimension where his alternate self dies in a car crash. Everything added is perfectly compatible to the lore of the original books. There's one part where the author forgets about the Black family motto being French, but it's an extremely minor detail. Everything is perfect, so it's pretty impressive that the only thing I could nitpick at is that Harry is est more chatty than he is in the books, but that's completely fine. I recommend.

Alright, so here's my review, as the Poison Tester. English quality is great, only saw one typo so far. Updating stability, also great. Now here's where it gets a bit iffy: So our two MCs have attained godlike power. The female lead is the god of vampires, and the male lead has absorbed the souls of billions of mortals. They feel like they deserve to retire, so they go to Harry Potter's wizarding world. What I don't understand is why they do any of the things they do. If they wanted a leisurely retirement to get some alone time, they could have kept a low profile, but for some reason they want jobs. If they wanted to experience something new, they wouldn't have gone to a world they already know everything about. They have godlike power, so why play at being little wizards?