Gu_Tsukasa

Cool chapter it was great I hope goten can meet Note from super dragon ball heroes. Overall great keep up the good work.

Great chapter, the writing is very nice, But can you let goten fight against black. I mean it would be pretty cool seeing both of them having super Saiyan rose And can you please make Goku more mature

Great chapter keep up the good work. In the next episode let gotan fighter against black

This is a fantastic FanFiction keep up the good work, But can you extend the chapter it has become a little to short. Overall great

You definitely need to update this FanFiction it's fantastic

Seriously Napa is not even a threat now

This is one of the few dragon Ball fanfictions, I think is great you are writing is awesome, keep up the good work. But can you give me some hints how will the MC meet Note

Awesome chapter keep of the good work. I really enjoyed it if fantastic novel you are writing. But again I will say need more romance. Overall great novel

Why is there no update???

Nice updates speed I like it. This chapter was amazing. Keep up the good work. I will say this again needs more romance.