Ching Cheng Hanji

LV 5

Obligation

First chapter looks interesting it is quite well written but there is some paragraphs that could be better. Also, please write a synopsis .

LV 4

VermountVenom

Seems to be written by Ai. The story is repetitive to read and the MC is just plain boring alongside being kinda dumb. Ask an Ai to write a story about radditz and they will more or less have the same Sentence structure and choice of words. It's simply too poetic and the repetition of the same stuff just a few paragrapsh confirms that for me.

LV 1

XploOiD

meh

LV 2

alexisconde

Esta Bueno espero que continues la historia. [img=recomendar] Vamos con fe....................................................................................................................................................................

LV 12

LandUpGaming

Tried to get into this, and the story seems okay as of chapter 6, but I just couldn’t get past the weird formatting. The chapters are broken up every 2 or so paragraph with dashes ——— like that, along with a “title” each time it’s broke up. The transition is jarring, and every time it happens it completely takes you out of the immersion. The story repeats itself a lot too, often saying something at the end of one section, only to repeat it for the start of the next one. Feels like useless fluff and just drags the chapters out. If that was fixed I’d definitely be interested in giving it another shot, but as it is now, I definitely don’t plan to.