Alright. Understood. Good luck!
I kinda understand what you're doing with this story. The only noticeable problem that springs out to me immediately is the fact that since the Mc is so far back from cannon and considering the cursed technique. I fear that the Mc will become overpowered then the cursed technique becomes useless. Undoubtedly, Kenjaku was strong, but he wasn't all mighty. That's what made the culling games work, Gojo vs Sukuna. It all came from Kenjaku's planning. His past and his intelligence/cursed technique is what made him so interesting. If the Mc is going to be overpowered, what's the point of making him like Kenjaku? You also said he will be going through many different clans then make his own. Which gives him access to literally every single Dojutsu (if he's born in Kaguya's time). Anyway please don't drop. (If you do drop this. I beg of you to return to your Toji fic) Good luck!
Yes.
I'm thinking of putting this story under 'fanfictions', what do y'all think?
In the Academy as Sukuna (Updating in fanfics)
Fantasy · ImaMelonFarm
Writing Style... Personally, I think the Author's writing is amazing. The way they write easily shows the Personality of our main character. Other characters aren't bland slates and actually act like their canon selves. The description of areas like the classroom is also very good. Story Development..... So far, so good. During the beginning chapters, the goal wasn't clear but it becomes more apparent later on. Though, I will warn you, it does seem like the Author will branch out to different worlds eventually. Character design... Not much to say in regards to that. I guess you could say the Mc doesn't really have much of a defined appearance. By that I mean it's not mentioned all that much. Updating stability..... I don't feel too worried about it. I assume we'll get a chapter at least every 5 days. Judging form past uploads. World Background...... I gave it 5 stars beacuse the story seems to be headed in the darker places of Hope's Peak. But it does branch out a little. When it comes to other worlds. So, there's not really any extra world Background other than what already exists. Overall..... It's really good. It has a clear direction, fun characters and a nice writing style. Ps: This is important. The Mc has a streamer group chat. As expected, it's people from other worlds. Like spiderman. And it's clear he'll add more people. Perhaps from his own world. Junko may or may not be the love interest. To wrap things up, all I wanna say is, I hope for more chapters. Wonder if the other games will happen.
Oh thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it.
I've think I've done a pretty good job of this.
Jujutsu Kaisen: Restricted Psychic
Anime & Comics · Rynin
You know you can take a break off this fic. Or just start a new one. Don't burn yourself out.
Just noticed your comment. And I guess I'm gonna follow cannon and make it Sasuke. The reason is, I've had some thoughts about doing a Boruto fix which will continue from this. What do you think? PS: I may or may not add a few 'moments' between Sakura and Ino. But nothing too much. Here's a cool image
What do you mean by that?
Hey Author. I think it'll be better for your story if you change it from novel to fanfic. More people will see it that way.
After saying that, Sukuna was awkwardly standing in his room with his hands in front of his chest.
In the Academy as Sukuna (Updating in fanfics)
Fantasy · ImaMelonFarm
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original Jujutsu Kaisen: Restricted Psychic
An anomaly. A mistake within a mistake. Sachi Zenin was a irregularity of mind and body. The unknown power she wields is enough to contend with the self proclaimed 'Strongest' His birth was prophesied throughout the heavens. People cheered at his cradle. Her birth was unhonoured and only surrounded by death. One is confined within a cursed system. The world's blessed child. The other is unrestrained by the cursed laws. The world's mistake. Undoubtedly, their births shifted the balance of the world. One that was blessed by birth. One that was liberated by birth. A new chapter every 2 days! This will also be a slow paced story. This is my first book!62 Chs 1k Collections
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Naruto: Limitless Sakura
The shinobi world is unforgiving. The strong can rule the weak without any problems. And that strength is precisely what Sakura wants to obtain. Born into the prosperous Haruno clan, Sakura was born with something only others could dream of having. She was born..... Limitless All will know her strength one day. --------------------------------------------------------- ------------- Authore Here! This fic was made to develop Sakura better than on cannon. You don't need to worry about the Kekkei Genkai. It'll be important way later on the story. I want to say that this book will borrow some JJK elements Nothing more than that though! This will also be a slow-paced yet fast story. Also Sakura won't be OP quickly. She'll be Equals with Naruto and Sasuke later in the story. Leave a review! Bye!23 Chs 294 Collections
I liked this chapter a lot. It was really funny.
Yu-Gi-Oh! Gojoing GX
Anime & Comics · AnHa8