Dropped Story with no chapters.

LV 4

Rynin

Writing Style... Personally, I think the Author's writing is amazing. The way they write easily shows the Personality of our main character. Other characters aren't bland slates and actually act like their canon selves. The description of areas like the classroom is also very good. Story Development..... So far, so good. During the beginning chapters, the goal wasn't clear but it becomes more apparent later on. Though, I will warn you, it does seem like the Author will branch out to different worlds eventually. Character design... Not much to say in regards to that. I guess you could say the Mc doesn't really have much of a defined appearance. By that I mean it's not mentioned all that much. Updating stability..... I don't feel too worried about it. I assume we'll get a chapter at least every 5 days. Judging form past uploads. World Background...... I gave it 5 stars beacuse the story seems to be headed in the darker places of Hope's Peak. But it does branch out a little. When it comes to other worlds. So, there's not really any extra world Background other than what already exists. Overall..... It's really good. It has a clear direction, fun characters and a nice writing style. Ps: This is important. The Mc has a streamer group chat. As expected, it's people from other worlds. Like spiderman. And it's clear he'll add more people. Perhaps from his own world. Junko may or may not be the love interest. To wrap things up, all I wanna say is, I hope for more chapters. Wonder if the other games will happen.

LV 4

FandomExplorer_2nd

Apple 🍎 That's all I could say other than the author slow updates but I do think the author could just... How could I say this maybe 🤔 fix the viewer's comments?, Nah that sounds wrong maybe the right word is improve it cause it feels dry... Like the Sahara desert overall decent good grammar and the character act their personality good not like an ooc