very nice! thanks for the chapter.
After a brief pause, the soldier who had warned Dean Bruce sighed and said, "Close the gates, it's time for us to rest. Let's hope tonight remains peaceful."
I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?
Fantasy · BWbear
Haha! I love how he is misinterpreted the whole time!😂😂
I have read to chapter 70, and feel that the time spent was worth it. The premise and plot is really intriguing. The writing quality is also good, with little mistakes. I mostly like the characters and the OP feeling of the MC because sometimes novels just have plot armour or unsatisfied badassary, while this achieves that badass feeling and buildup.
thank you
This seems incredibly dangerous. By all accounts, it would mean that she would be able to manipulate time itself to some degree. I am starting to suspect that she is the A.I. that the galaxy fought all those millenia ago, and that she probably fostered her own existence into humanity and by extension to Erich.
Meaning that when Erich went into the past with his physical form, there was a piece of Tia there with him, silently record, and analyzing everything Erich came into contact with. Once he returned to the future, this piece of Tia could reconnect with the rest of her consciousness, and thus, transmit all of the data she had received from that visit back in time.
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
Is 10 million not too much? A level 170 boss only gave 2 million. Does not make sense???
Experience: 0/10 million (Unallocated experience points: 4532167 points)
Ascension To Divine Throne
Fantasy · Lazy_Pen_Master
"Polite" yeah right😂👌 I hope like this development, she is best girl.
"I'll be leaving now." Lucielle reached out to Rey and planted a light kiss on his cheek.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
This is great. World development with the character development.👌
So, are you glad to finally see Rey get the recognition he deserves, or did you prefer it when he was still in the shadows?
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Bruh if you are going to write by using A.I. then make it less obvious. I am 43 chapters in, and it is painful how all the internal monologues are just repeated ideas in different wording. When other characters face off, like in chap 43, then it is obvious that an A.I. is narrating the emotions and dialogue. If you are not using A.I. then you are simply overdoing it - there are better ways to describe character emotions and development.
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer