ahmad_wahid

I give you 5 stars, although there is no special reason, but the world mc lives in is very extraordinary, the world that was previously semi-supernatural has completely changed to supernatural, increasing the danger level of the world.

good story and I enjoyed it, maybe the drawback is that it is too ua and too many oc characters so that the characters in the original work story don't really have a role, you can say that the original characters who can be said to be additional characters turn into low-level npc characters who don't need their presence, and this makes the characters who have an important role in the original story turn into supporting characters who pass by because they don't really affect the plat in general.

I don't know whether this is your work or not, and it seems like your mother tongue is not English, the English here is very messy, what is meant by elder or senior in Mandarin or Chinese culture has instead turned into an adult, but this story can still be read, even though the English writing is messed up