Arisawa23

Each chapter better than the last, Daphne makes her move and I've been waiting for this for a long time.

I had hopes for this story, I would really like to know what else happened but the author has not updated for 4 months now, what a good time I waited quite a bit, I was disappointed but I still have hope that the author will return, I'm still sorry.

The writing feels heavy because there are paragraphs that have lines of characters within them and it is not understood, when characters speak and have thoughts they cannot be distinguished in Spanish since the lines are together and there is no way to know how to differentiate. There are very formal words, I understand that it is something of respect but also a little informal tone would be good, when the house selection happens I would have liked to read how it was, and I also understand the "protagonist" is Tanya from Youjo Senki and I have the idea of her physique but I would like to know if it is also the same in this world since I would like to know if she is tall, short, thin or a little flatter since now she should eat better since she is not in the army or an orphanage. These data are very important.

Great chapter, I really liked it. It's understandable that you didn't like some parts and it's appreciated, but it took you 1 week to publish, but it's still a great chapter, and it's a lot to ask for, but 2 chapters per week would be appreciated.

Update every 2 days that sounds great I loved the story when I read chapter 1 but I was desperate when I saw that 20 days had already passed but thank you please continue Updates [img=Feeling it]