DaoistuSIumD

22 hours ago

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Thanks

ch 64 Author note

Brothers with systems in the DC universe

Anime & Comics · Sloth_Incarnate_BW

DaoistuSIumD

9 days ago

Replied to Zozolek0730

Yin, on the other hand.. Where Ghislaine fights like a skilled master, the way she fights is so strange to see. Apart from the gun she used earlier, I mean. She started using her bare hands. It's not the lack of vambraces or hand-to-hand weapons on her fists. But the way she goes about pummeling the Grimm. Her punches and kicks are refined, practiced to an almost machine-like degree. I don't know why, but when I watch her, it feels like.. a beast in chains?

RWBY: Dragon's Heart

Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi

DaoistuSIumD

13 days ago

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Yes

Also, is it okay if I just give the names of the characters? And for the new sources of energy, or something of note, will be added on by Gwen through dialogue? Because honestly, writing an entire description for these characters, is getting seriously old.

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_

DaoistuSIumD

28 days ago

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ch 37 Chapter 37

Martial World Teyvat

Video Games · Azazyel

DaoistuSIumD

1 months ago

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It is good

Hello guys, author here! I've been meaning to ask you guys about your opinion on this story. For me personally, I lack the burning passion to write it like I would write some other stories/novels but still I want this story to have a proper pacing without rushing and a good world building. So tell me if you find this story boring and point out the wrongs, perhaps I could try to fix them.