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Brothers with systems in the DC universe
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Synopsis
Three Brothers while drunk returning from a party get hit by a car and find themselves in a strange place with a set of odd machines.
After being transported to the DC universe with a set of systems, they try to come up with a plan of action.They decide to use their newfound powers to try to deal with the challenges that come with living in such a dangerous reality and make a new home for themselves.
Read on, as they use their newfound powers to survive, make a name for themselves, find new family and leave behind their own legacies.
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Please feel free to comment on how terrible my writing skills are.
Arnold gets a jjk system.
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As it's author's first time writing- the quality is quite lacking, hence 3 stars.On the other hand, story development, character design and others are 4stars.I will only suggest on writing because the story and idea is yours and you would know better than anyone else.Now; Writing- if possible please give first few chapters light edit, for eg, spaces b/w "" and next word or outright press enter key for every dialogue between brothers and/or other characters. Otherwise it gets too confusing to understand who is talking to whom, etc.Keep up the good work, Author-san😁👍🏽
Its a great fanfiction with even more potential so I hope the author adds many more chapters before it’s completed
Worth the read, I've been checking out a lot of the Marvel/DC fanfics lately. MC is getting stronger and stronger, or at least I think he's the MC, there are other brothers.
great start!! love the bromance I'm this.here's to hoping you get more exposure!
it is good ................................................................................................................................................
While the characters seem to be a bit lacking sometimes, and some of the dialogue feels a bit forced, overall the story is entertaining, the chapters are a good length, and it is an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
Bro, honestly this is a good story. But I was dissatisfied with the lack of development and prominence of the other brothers because so far the story has only highlighted one of the three brothers.