Swone56

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Swone56
Swone56
2 days ago
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I don’t mind the fast pace. Most if not all fanfictions can’t seem to make the beginning to different from each other.The key is to set up a foundation in which your story will take a turn from the original later on.

Swone56
Swone56
2 days ago
Commented

What?

I'm thankful she was the first goddess and Familia I ran into. Others might have used me or tried to kill me since I wasn't a citizen of Orario yet. They could have easily taken me out without a trace. Would they have beaten me? Hard to say; it depends on who I would've fought!

In Danmachi with A Jujutsu Kaisen System

In Danmachi with A Jujutsu Kaisen System

Anime & Comics · Zekt

Swone56
Swone56
2 days ago
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That was an instinctive response; I don't even know who the hell said that. This white room, though, is pretty neat. I don't get how it can be so white and not bright. 'Maybe whoever just spoke can control the lighting? Cooooooool.'

In Danmachi with A Jujutsu Kaisen System

In Danmachi with A Jujutsu Kaisen System

Anime & Comics · Zekt

Swone56
Swone56
3 days ago
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Nasuhiko turned back and chuckled, "Heh, dirty fireworks."

Sealing Jutsu Sensei

Sealing Jutsu Sensei

Anime & Comics · ReidAstrea

Swone56
Swone56
3 days ago
Commented

Get rid of kabuto if possible

Ultimately, I can't change the canon much without taking significant risks. Sigh, I'll just go with the flow this time around.

Naruto : Shadow King

Naruto : Shadow King

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

Swone56
Swone56
4 days ago
Commented

Other than the fact that he didn’t yell Excalibur …..just perfect .

A/N: Does this feel rushed? I didn't want to drag it out too much and have it become boring, so I chose to quickly end it, but I fear it was taken quickly.

Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)

Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)

Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational

Swone56
Swone56
6 days ago
Commented

When you think about it. They only use the Sharingan for combat or intimidation .This means that because of their perfect ability to recall what they see that evrey battle is ingrained into them.It’s no wonder why they act like they do.

Mitsuki walked past Shitsuya and stopped before adding, "The Sharingan can only bloom and evolve under the pressure of real combat. Whether this will be an opportunity or a death sentence lies solely on your shoulders."

Naruto: Uninterested Uchiha

Naruto: Uninterested Uchiha

Anime & Comics · Hurt_Mee

Swone56
Swone56
9 days ago
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It has sensed the presence of humans. The giant bear moves slowly, heading towards the source of the scent, which is Summer and Ogerpon entering the forest.

Pokemon: The Chosen Ranger

Pokemon: The Chosen Ranger

Anime & Comics · RockyRoad891

Swone56
Swone56
12 days ago
Commented

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(Examples are: a Laser Beam - created from the Saint-rank fire spell Flashover. Or a waterjet Water Slice - a pressurized water blade with tiny grains of sand in it to create the sharpest blade that can cut through anything (google 'waterjet the sharpest blade'). These two have practical limitations, but are at least realistic and have good logic behind them. )

Reincarnated in Mushoku Tensei: Realistically Overpowered (rewrite)

Reincarnated in Mushoku Tensei: Realistically Overpowered (rewrite)

Anime & Comics · Jaed21

Swone56
Swone56
12 days ago
Commented

Do merchants just harassed random person people for having that skill?

Michael and the ladies can't just show Norm their Inventory; that skill is what most merchants wanted to acquire. They used a spacious magic bag to cover up their abilities; Norm also has one, by the way. 

Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven