Naruto : Shadow King

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Meteormancy

PLEASE! Please change the main character's name while the story has just started. If you look on the Narutopedia Wiki it shows that there are other members of the Nara clan that don't have Shika in their name. Only the main family's leader and heir have Shika in their name. Please change it while the story is still new. Choose something nice and simple like Kyoya, Koji, or Akira or something. Kyoya is a common cool guy name in Japanese culture and many different anime. Koji is the name of the Japanese god of fire, kitchen, and hearth. Akira means wisdom in Japanese. PLEASE! For the love of god choose a better name for the main character!

LV 14

zeypher

The plot is followed by a over generous dose of stupidity and plot induced idiocy. The chapters feel more like 1/4 a chapter with abyssal word count. The other doesn't seem to have learnt anything from his previous attempts.

LV 3

Little_El

Good start, the first 15 chapters are good but you can see that the quality declines slightly as the chapters go on , it's a real struggle to read these interactions with Tenten, these uncomfortable, like those old people from the village who complimented you when I was little , he's an adult in a child's body, he shouldn't have noticed Tenten's beauty like that , see him flirting with her, God, just ewww. I hope the author fixes this , it's really important , the fact that the only description when he notices someone female is that she's pretty is pretty weird , the last chapter is discouraging, the fact that he took a mission without the consent of the Village pourrait consister à une trahison, c'est strict military government, il n'est que de la chair à canon , he is quite idiotic and thoughtless . I'm afraid that this story will end up becoming like the other story with Shikamaru SI, I have not been able to read more than 5 chapters of each other, please author don't spoil this story. If the interactions with Tenten or more precisely the main characters improve, I will return with 5 stars

LV 3

malhiharjot

In the starting story was good but it start getting worse after 25.. how to make good story bad you read it here . Story development is bad ,

LV 4

DaoistDxMgPm

this book is on its way to become a banger. another kamidemond W

LV 4

SuryaputraKarna

Author has a habit to repeat the same thing again and again to the point it is irritating. He extends the story for no reason, after saying this fight is going to end he goes on to write 13 more chapters. And it had the overused sharingan plot

LV 4

RroY

The dialogues are cringe. The author lacks info amd creativity. The only thing keeping up the hyoe of the fic is the og Jjk and Naruto fans wanting to read more in hopes of betterment.

LV 4

Mister_Robot

The story has too many grammatical errors. Using the 10 Shadows curse technique in Narutoverse is quite interesting. My rating would be higher if there was no unnecessary forced early romance with Tenten and also like any other fanfic transmigrator, he starts advising her and yapping. The same shit can be found in many Harry Potter, Naruto, Black Clover fanfics. Maybe if the author made the story darker than canon, with tension always hanging in the air, this would be one of the best fanfics.

LV 4

demigod0414

Slow pace. Nerfed MC. Hiding true technique without reason. Ooh, forcing romance with fmc. Actually how your old stories.

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histidine

too bad , this had potential but his first c rank mission is pure forced plot , idiotic decision making and honestly pure bullshit conclusion as the author completely distorted reality to make it end that way.

LV 4

Rayan_Alzahrani_4430

Amazing story I didn’t know there was a rewrite until recently and I’m glad because i got to read a lot of chapters back to back although i really hope the author would post more pictures in the comments like the main character appearance or some of the shinigami that only showed up in the manga

LV 12

ilove_3260

I like it but why does it have such bad ratings?

I'm still relatively new to web novel but I'm glad I found this story. It's an entertaining read that I binged in 2 days. I appreciate the author going back to fix grammatical errors as well as putting in the time to reliably update on top of that. Keep up the hard work. I hope to see this story through to the end.

LV 13

Mstrvin

Entertaining read, you should try reading this naruto ff and stop reading comments/reviews. Trust me [img=Feeling it]

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Alex_Hunt

Actually if you were to give him the ten shadow technique, you could have modified them more to suit the Naruto world, full application & potential of this technique has not been revealed in JJK, so you could have created your own version. For eg - Ten Shadows Technique: Using shadows as an intermediary, this technique allows the user to summon ten different shikigami. One can store things or people in shadows, use shadows to manipulate others, can bind other's soul with shadows to create shikigami. Use shadows to exchange places or injuries. One fuse with shadows to gain their strength and abilities. One can also fuse multiple shadows together to create a chimera beast. One can also seal others in shadow & absorb their energies via shadows. 1. Twin Dogs : Wind - Can ride winds & create storms. 2. Snake : Earth - Can Phase through anything, petrify others and control gravity. 3. Toad : Poison - Their tongues can stretch to a very long distances very fast (eg- divine spear from bleach), they can secrete many types of poisons, and jump at long distances. 4. Deer : Heal - Deer can heal any injury, trauma or purify any negative effect. It can also boost others powers. 5. Rabbit : Fire - It can create copies of itself, the copies can expode and generate huge heat, the rabbits can move very fast & size of explosion depends on the amount of energy given to the copy. huge energy, huge rabbit, huge explosion. 6. Elephant : Water - can control water and shoot fast streams of water which can cut diamonds, it is very heavy, and can absorb attacks & shocks via water. 7. Bull : Physical - Has huge strength, can crush anything, can create shockwaves, and It can only move in a straight line, but the longer its charge, the more powerful it is. 8. Tiger : Spiritual - Can create illusions & nightmares. Can attack mind and soul. Can read someones mind & thoughts. 9. Nue : Thunder - Can take others to fly, create and unleash lightning attacks, launch feathers as knives, can use wings as a shield & has powerful eyesight. 10. Mahoraga : Evolution - It is the most powerful shikigami available to be summoned. It is armed with the Sword of Extermination (can purify others), as well as the ability to adapt to any and all phenomena. MC can acquire the ability of his summons - • Dogs - Sensitive nose, Sharp claws & fangs • Snake - Flexible Body, heat sense & petrification gaze • Toad - frog tongue, enhanced jumps & poison • Deer - healing, boosting & purification abilities • Rabbit - enhanced speed, clones & explosion • Elephant - water control • Bull - brute force • Tiger - mental attacks • Nue - lightning control, can shoot hair like needles • Mahoraga - can adapt & evolve continuously Powerbof jiraya, tsunade, orochimaru, kiba & itachi, with Mahoraga being his ticket to six paths, imagine him evolving to six paths while fighting six paths madara.

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v00lum

my review for 69(hehehe) chap the only thing i want to say nah i'd win mc gone crazy vs sasuke i like crazy mc when fighting ngl bro was cool indeed

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Dragrite

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