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Mha: Sand Sand Fruit
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When I woke up, I traveled to the world of my hero. The system gave me the ability of the Sand Sand Fruit and Conqueror's Haki.
Sure enough, with these abilities, Kitagawa Akira thrived.
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The story is good and all but its plot driven which ruins the book for me
Free five star idk if the other uploaded Story is a bit stupid and inconsistent at times, but it's a good read and can be improved. ......
MHA Sand-Sand Fruit UPDATE: Originally gave 3 stars due to 1) Author not keeping track of their own previous statements. 2) Author taking the hardest possible route for MC to do anything 3) writing and grammar are surprisingly cohesive and legible. Nothing out of place. Very shocking considering the previous 2 points made me think it was a Chinese translation. Review is now updated to 1 star due to author not liking my previous review and deleting it. I will be re-posting the review every time he does this with amount of deletes and dates. 1st repost January 1, 2025
The entire fic is mediocre at best it fall under the same points of a author needlessly nerfing the protagonist for no reason which makes all the fights feel incredibly boring and frustrating and the grammer and writing quality is mediocre at best the author mixes up people in conversation quite a bit and all the dialouge feels robotic and one dimensional
It's just that the MC is a freaking too much idiot. He might be a kid, but he is a reincarnated person, so he should not be so naive. Just hayz
I can't stand reading all the time, I'm like, are you stupid? MC does things in the stupidest way possible, everything that is simple becomes difficult and I keep asking myself, why can someone reincarnated, who watches anime, who knows that the sand fruit exists, fight or do things this way? so ridiculous.
The writing quality of the story definitely reads like some lame chinese translation. With all the usual culprits, like certain wording, its especially noticeable in the hero exam chapters with the whole *imaginary robot* thing and the green skinned robots. Also All mights disciple? please, that's so dumb. Updates seem ok? but its early and I think there is a lot of suspicion of this being a stolen translated work. Story development is terrible if I am being honest, the MC seems to be trying to be that cringey "cool" guy in most chinese fics. Also the typical thug types with the extras? This goes hand in hand with the Character design, I personally feel the Main character gets his powers too soon, I feel we would have liked a more drawn out skill progression story where he explores his abilities instead of becoming impossibly strong from the very beginning. Obviously the world background here doesn't really matter with pre-established ground work laid out by the creators of MHA. Overall I think my review if fair for this work, the author, if this work truly isn't stolen or a translation work I would look into rewriting the story, it has a lot of potential with a unique powerset that I feel is honestly more well explored in line with the power progression of the story.
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a promissing story that was ruined by author's incompetence. shallow characters, no descriptions of their appearances at all. think of the dumbest reason something in the story is happening, and that's the motive
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The author is stupidly inconsistent with his statements in the fic, and even if the story is good, I just can't stand how idiotic MC can be, add up shallow dialogue and overall characters and it's borderline a torture to read.
Admito que a história me atraiu muito a atenção, principalmente porque sou muito fã de one piece, e principalmente do personagem crocodile. Porém o mc parece ter o cérebro do tamanho de uma ervilha, tomando apenas o caminho mais difícil e com decisões irracionais, se contradizendo sempre. E o poder é muito mal utilizado, uma verdadeira porcaria. Como um reencarnado, há tantos personagens a se inspirar para construir um poder de areia, que chega a ser irritante ele usando apenas como um poder impacto. Exemplos: Azir (LOL), Crocodile (One Piece), Gaara, 3° Kazekage e Rasa (Naruto), Dobradores de Areia (Avatar) e milhares de outros. Principal característica da areia e ser maleável é criativo, e o mc a usa com a inteligência de uma ervilha.
I think you have a good idea and the story progression is good but you might want to work on your power scaling and fleshing out of relationships The MC has a good amount of powers to learn and draw inspiration from with the sand fruit but you are limiting him quite frequently and it becomes frustrating watching the MC limit himself to one ability against weak antagonists. Additionally though his current weakness does make sense as he hasn't trained for very long, he still should be far more effective and creative with his powers taking down fodder ,like the gravity villain, nearly immediately. MHA can be irritating to power scale as most strong villains don't appear till later in the story but if the MC is in a fight with an original villain try give more credible reasons as to why he would struggle like he does instead of having the MC take frustratingly long to stop one group of cannon fodder. Making the MC too strong can be a credible fear for the story but it can be used to add some character growth as the MC could become arrogant fighting fodder for so long, only to be beaten by a cannon villain like Shigaraki when they fail to take his threat seriously and they (or someone else) gets hurt by the MC's arrogance. I also feel like your relationships between characters could do with some work. This is usually very difficult for a fast paced story like yours, so I would advise either remove some time skips and slow the pacing or thoroughly plan interactions between characters. I think it would also be more organic if the MC had more interactions between his parents or friends just as slice of life as it would give the MC more depth and avoid you as a author falling into the troupe of having a cool and strong MC with no depth or actual character to him. all in all I think your story has great potential and could be really good just work on the interactions and his use of Haki and it would be even better.
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