ForerunnerOfSky

ForerunnerOfSky

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Writing and reading for fun whenever I can MMA fan, Action fan and martial artist Current ongoing works: We Die Young Discord: Nomad

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ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
7 months ago
Replied to The_Drunkencrater

I will take this as a compliment

ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
7 months ago
Commented

interesting development, with the zombies

ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
7 months ago
Commented

is this a thought of the main character? isn't everything a thought of his? why highlight this?

ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
7 months ago
Commented

i notice that there is not much dialogue

ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
7 months ago
Commented

I still can't get used to the first person perspective, but its fine, is up to each author their style

How many days have I been trapped in this tiny, windowless room? At first, I tried scratching tally marks into the wall to count the passing days, but my weak bony fingers belonging to a child could barely leave a mark on the hard stone. So instead I've been tracking time by the regular meals pushed under my door. 

Isekai: I, a powerlifter, awakened in a world of titans

Isekai: I, a powerlifter, awakened in a world of titans

Fantasy · Sir_WendoS

ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
7 months ago
Replied to Sir_WendoS

OHHHHHH YEAHH BABY! GAINZ ARE BEAUTIFUL!!

ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
7 months ago
Commented

This is what I'm talking about, create an emotion in a scene, very nice

As Marshal soared through the urban expanse, his red eyes gleaming against the backdrop of the city lights, he marveled at the vastness of human civilization. The distant hum of activity, the twinkling lights of skyscrapers, and the intricate patterns of roads below painted a mesmerizing picture.

MARSHAL ON THE LOOSE

MARSHAL ON THE LOOSE

Action · B_l_a_n_k_2167

ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
7 months ago
Commented

overall not bad I understand everything thats being happened, its well conveyed but I think some more effort could go towards creating an atmosphere to really bring in the reader

ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
7 months ago
Commented

i like this but maybe you could add some more description to what they're wearing and what they feel as they get closer

The security team, clad in advanced tactical gear, nodded in acknowledgment. They had been trained rigorously for this duty, but the mystique surrounding Marshal added an extra layer of tension to their routine checks.

MARSHAL ON THE LOOSE

MARSHAL ON THE LOOSE

Action · B_l_a_n_k_2167

ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSky
10 months ago
Replied to Tifala

Thank you very much I hope to continue improving

  • We Die Young original

    We Die Young

    Action ACTION R18 OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION ANTIHERO KILLER FASTPACED URBAN NO-HAREM BLOODPUMPING

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    ------------ -This is must be hell-  was the one thought running through his head Gyun coughed as he tossed the dead bodies off of him, he climbed to the top of the pile of dead bodies, sticking his sword into the abdomen of a man who was still wheezing with life. He leaned heavily on the hilt of his sword as he panted harshly, he used his sleeve to wipe the blood out of his eyes. His clothes were shredded, and he was bleeding profusely from dozens of shallow cuts all over his body, his eyes were bloodshot from exertion. With his other hand, he crouched down, reaching under a dead body he pulled something out of the abdomen of another dead man beneath him. Holding it up to his face, it was a silver mask coated in blood with beautiful engravings decorated to look like a demon. Pressing it to his face, he held it in place by circulating the qi at a certain frequency to keep the mask attached to his face. Looking across the battlefield, stood his last remaining enemies picking his sword up he took a step forward. --------------------------------------------------------- All credit for the cover image goes to Redlady 04 --------------------------------------------------------- Author's note: I recommend skipping everything from chapter 2 all the way to chapter 22, to be honest, the in-between isn't that good and you aren't missing much. Its to set up the world and the characters. But the story kicks in starting around chapter 22 so that's a good starting point if you want to skip the fluff. Tags: Action, some thriller, investigative, Anti-hero MC, Violent MC, political, overpowered, fast-paced, it’s not quite cyberpunk but the MC wakes up on September 26th of the year 2037 and technology has progressed but not significantly Update Schedule will be fairly consistent until the end of summer and I have to go back to school. It will be every 2-3 days there will be an 1800-word chapter or longer. I will announce breaks in the latest chapters so you will know why I may go radio silent for a few weeks. Thanks for reading This novel will also be available on Royal Road, the novel there will be improved from this one. However, I still plan on updating and putting out chapters here. The one on Royal Road will be where I put most of my effort.

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  • Discontinued Novel: Fighting In A New Age original

    Discontinued Novel: Fighting In A New Age

    Realistic ACTION OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION CAMPUS KINGDOMBUILDING CONQUER HIGHIQ FASTPACED URBAN INVINCIBLE

    "I've killed to many people in pursuit of power and success in the other world to return to my own a failure" Gyun Sung who was the greatest Kendo prodigy of all time, won the world championship at just 17. Transmigrated to Murim where he spent 7 years of his life fighting and building his own power. He reached the culmination of martial arts the Martial God stage, underwent body modification perfecting his body for martial arts, and established the most ruthless and strongest mercenary corp in all of murim the Raven Black mercenary corp. He returned to his world after dying against the combined efforts of the three murim faction leaders who destroyed everything, his reputation, his friends using money and killed him after weakening him by paying of a trusted advisor to poison him. Gyun returns to his world, his qi is gone but his experiences and martial arts. He swears to himself that money will never be a problem, he will use the only things left over from his life in Murim his perfected body that has superhuman strength and speed, his techniques and the will and determination of someone who’s lived a decade fighting a hairsbreadth from death. Authors note : I will aim for one chapter a day , sometimes maybe I will write 2 or 3 depending upon how much time I have. There may be mistakes since most chapters are written in an hour based off an idea I thought of while at school. During weekends there will definitely be 2 chapters a week, and I will make sure that every chapter has at minimum 1,000 words to a maximum of 2,000. Please tell me in comments if there are any mistakes. Also if you recommend any story ideas I might implement them. Either way thanks for reading!

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  • Warrior of the Moon and Tempest original

    Warrior of the Moon and Tempest

    Action ACTION MAGIC GENIUS ANTIHERO CONQUER ACADEMY HIGHIQ ABANDONED FASTPACED BLOODPUMPING

    Abandoned at birth, Lucien lived his life on the streets stealing and pickpocketing. He united all the orphans and homeless kids in his city into a alley gang, 'The Backstreet' . One day during a gang war against an adult gang ,the city guard interfere. To prevent the whole of 'The Backstreet' from getting arrested, Lucien attacks the city guard . He tries to escape but is cornered by the City guard commander, after a brief fight. The commander opts to send Lucien on recommendation to the Knight academy in the capital. Perhaps he can succeed using the gifts that he'd had from birth, and achieve greatness wealth and join the exploration of the recently discovered eastern continent.

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  • Falling Sun original

    Falling Sun

    Fantasy OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION KINGDOMBUILDING

    Gyun Sung world's youngest Kendo and Fencing champion transmigrated to this land called Murim 11 years ago when he was just 16. The only thing given to him was a cultivation technique and a sword. He enjoyed life adventuring across Murim for 7 years. After contracting a disease he went into isolated training for 4 years he achieved the legendary age regression stage breaking into the "Divine" stage. He exits his cave to take Murim by storm, but much has changed since his seclusion. Whether he can adapt or not is up to him. Authors note : Leave a review on things that are bad so I can change it, thank you Also here are the power rankings Divine rank - Only one person at this level (main character) Transcendent rank (only 4 of the 10 warlords are at this level currently - Rank 0 mercenary Demi god rank (where 6 of the 10 warlords are currently at) - Rank 1 mercenary Zenith rank (Big group leaders typical level)- Rank 2 mercenary Grandmaster (Most sect leaders/family patriarchs) - Rank 3 mercenary Master (big sects/family's elders)- Rank 4 mercenary Peak (elite disciples/troops) - Rank 5 mercenary 1st rate - Rank 6 mercenary 2nd rate- Rank 7 mercenary 3rd rate - Rank 8 mercenary Special ranks - Starlight mercenary (exception to the rank because their cultivation level does not reflect their true skills, meaning they can fight and win against those at a higher level then them) usually at least master rank. A very rare achievement and only awarded to a few mercenaries a decade. non-martial

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  • In The Night We Come Alive original

    In The Night We Come Alive

    Urban ACTION R18 MYSTERY DARK OVERPOWERED ANTIHERO URBAN NO-HAREM BLOODPUMPING

    -This is a.....fucking hellhole-  was the one thought running through his head Gyun coughed as he tossed the dead bodies off of him, he climbed to the top of the pile of dead bodies, sticking his sword into the abdomen of a man who was still wheezing with life. He leaned heavily on the hilt of his sword as he panted harshly, he used his sleeve to wipe the blood out of his eyes. His clothes were shredded, and he was bleeding profusely from dozens of shallow cuts all over his body, his eyes were bloodshot from exertion. With his other hand, he crouched down, reaching under a dead body he pulled something out of the abdomen of another dead man beneath him. Holding it up to his face, it was a silver mask coated in blood with beautiful engravings decorated to look like a demon. Pressing it to his face, he held it in place by circulating the qi at a certain frequency to keep the mask attached to his face. Looking across the battlefield, stood his last remaining enemies picking his sword up he took a step forward. ------- ------- Author's Note, This will essentially be the same novel as We Die Young, but since I missed the submission date for the Webnovel 2023 Spirity awards by less than 2 weeks earlier, I will put this novel, which is the same as the other. Some minor details will be different. Wish me luck boys, (And girls, and everyone else) ;)

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