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We Die Young
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Synopsis
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-This is must be hell- was the one thought running through his head
Gyun coughed as he tossed the dead bodies off of him, he climbed to the top of the pile of dead bodies, sticking his sword into the abdomen of a man who was still wheezing with life. He leaned heavily on the hilt of his sword as he panted harshly, he used his sleeve to wipe the blood out of his eyes.
His clothes were shredded, and he was bleeding profusely from dozens of shallow cuts all over his body, his eyes were bloodshot from exertion.
With his other hand, he crouched down, reaching under a dead body he pulled something out of the abdomen of another dead man beneath him.
Holding it up to his face, it was a silver mask coated in blood with beautiful engravings decorated to look like a demon.
Pressing it to his face, he held it in place by circulating the qi at a certain frequency to keep the mask attached to his face. Looking across the battlefield, stood his last remaining enemies picking his sword up he took a step forward.
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All credit for the cover image goes to Redlady 04
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Author's note: I recommend skipping everything from chapter 2 all the way to chapter 22, to be honest, the in-between isn't that good and you aren't missing much. Its to set up the world and the characters. But the story kicks in starting around chapter 22 so that's a good starting point if you want to skip the fluff.
Tags: Action, some thriller, investigative, Anti-hero MC, Violent MC, political, overpowered, fast-paced, it’s not quite cyberpunk but the MC wakes up on September 26th of the year 2037 and technology has progressed but not significantly
Update Schedule will be fairly consistent until the end of summer and I have to go back to school. It will be every 2-3 days there will be an 1800-word chapter or longer. I will announce breaks in the latest chapters so you will know why I may go radio silent for a few weeks.
Thanks for reading
This novel will also be available on Royal Road, the novel there will be improved from this one. However, I still plan on updating and putting out chapters here. The one on Royal Road will be where I put most of my effort.
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Having trained in MMA and coached various combat sports, I can confidently say that this author truly knows their stuff. Right from the start, I found myself thoroughly enjoying the book. The fight scenes are incredibly well-written, leaving a strong impact. If you love combat that is detailed and accurate, look no further. While there are some minor structural issues that crop up, they become less important as the story progresses and writing improves. One example is the repetitive use of character names at the beginning of each paragraph. However, these issues quickly become less noticeable, making the story easier to follow. The main drawback is that the book introduces many characters/concepts early on, without giving enough context to develop a genuine connection to the world. Don't get it twisted, this book is still amazing and I'm definitely going to be a weekly reader.
Fire action That’s really all to be said, amazing action scenes and a banger of a chapter to start off the novel.
I loved this book. Double to triple chances and then make your life better in every step by adding actions and battles, who does want this book? The plot is very interesting and the world-building is great as it takes out on a great adventure where you can learn and enjoy what you did not seek before. The writing style is quite simple as it takes you smoothly with the story. Great book author will catch time to read on
The action/fighting scene is a masterpiece!🤸Although I sometimes have trouble understanding it, I still enjoy it. The way your story flows is well-written! Keep up the good work, author-san!✨
absolutely 11/10 for the fights in the story, really really love the action. Sometimes I do get lost in the chaos though, but I think it's just a problem of the medium. I believe your fights will greatly benefit from decluttering the info and dialogue, but still it's overall amazing
The scenery is Impressive, the synopsis I loved it what more could I ask.[img=update][img=update][img=update]Your goooood 10/10
The action scene in the novel is fantastic and it really make the whole fighting interesting. I always enjoys Murim theme, and the whole writing is enjoyable. However, it might be a little difficult for people not used to action or Murim genre. Still, this is a pretty good story!
I actually aimed for 1 chapter only but stopped at 2 which means if it can make me stay for this long. The Story has a lot of potential. Of course the writing style seems to be perfect. Also the description is awesome of all the scenes.....Best Wishes!
Only read the first chapter so I can have a taste of the story and it is awesome I will go and read more later
the action genre is probably one of my favorite genre to read so this was always gonna be a 10 out of 10 novel for me. its fast paced that is good for action novels like this. [img=recommend]
I absolutely love the action scenes, I was completely enthralled by Chapter One. The only reason I didn't give 5 stars for every category is because of grammar and punctuation issues here and there. The story is still easy to understand, and the author has so much potential with this plot and their martial arts/descriptive writing talent. You can tell the author is passionate about MMA and how much went into this piece. As the story progresses the writing only gets better. I also like that Gyun has an actual personality, he's not just some 2D OP MC. I think with some tweaks to the synopsis and chapter edits, this novel could rank high in WN. I hope the author will consider stockpiling chapters so we can all continue to enjoy this work even when school starts back!
The action scenes are great! being an action lover myself, this is cool. The writing, is very good, The plot? Good enough again. All the best Author!
So I must say out of the chapters I've read (27) it's pretty fast paced but super interesting as the story is constantly moving forward. The main character is cold but also human at the same time, you can tell from just the writing that the author is conscious of the grammar and word choice and avoids repeating the same word keeping the writing refreshed. The action is definetly the best par of the novel so if you like action this is definitely up your alley
The writing quality is good, word choices are easier to understand and the author explains any references or ideas that the readers has no knowledge of. It's descriptive, enough to give proper visualization. The plot is interesting, and the way the author narrates is engaging. Keep up the good work, dear author!👏👏
The story is quite good and I liked the way how the conversations are added of the characters. For other readers, they should give it a try and at least continue to read so they can understand it better. For Author -----> This is in my opinion, the paras you have written are a little too big so it actually makes the one who reads them skip some details and there are some grammatical mistakes here and there which you improve also from what I remember in i guess it was Ch8 there you had provided a quest type of thing like Kill some and rewards thing, if possible to make it more eye-catching to the readers you can make use of these brackets '[]' or something else you feel good, as when I was reading it blended with the other parts you had written and I didn't remember it much. This much for now, still you have done good work.
the book is excellent I love the Murim theme in and martial art expect astoshining keep up the good work
The book is a little confusing for me , but for someone who enjoys this genre I think they will like the book .Why ? Because it has nice grammar , is well written and the plot is keeping you interested to know more. The author knows his stuff ! It is worth reading it ! Give the author more love ! //Actually the novel it would have been perfect with a love interest , by the way .//
A very gripping hook. From the first chapter, better said from the first couple of paragraphs I was hooked on the story, and not to mention the action. I don't know your background sir, but that's some very detailed and knowledgable information about combat, I'm very impressed. The story starts of very dark and throws you into this harsh unforgiving world, setting up what you can expect coming. From what I read up until now, this is a story you can't accuse of moving too fast or too slow, it's very nicely paced and well constructed. A lot of thought and energy went into it and I love seeing that.Can't wait to read the rest of it because sir, you have yourself a new fan.
One of best action bangers!! What truly hooked my interest was the action in the very first chapter and I can say it was worth reading!Good Novel Author.
Ok author here Now if your an action fan you will like my novel, if not well there's still a chance, but not nearly as high. Their will be romance and a Female Lead introduced in the later chapters (currently at 27) if your a romance fan, but as of now there is none. I try to include other elements to keep the story fresh and interesting but to be honest action is my bread and butter. I've been an MMA and Kickboxing fan for a long time and have done wrestling and plan on doing Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu, though don't expect much wrestling to be in the story because it's to hard to describe for readers who may not have any experience to understand. Regardless that's not very important, I have plans for quite a few chapters so I hope you guys stick around. Side Note- Chapter Updates will be every 1 or 2 days up until August because I have to go back to school. Then after that there will be at least 2 chapters every week. And if there are any mistakes in the grammar or spelling please tell me so I can fix it.