Mustard555

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1 months ago
Replied to Gonzalo_Pereira_6949

Oh, Slow burn is already mentioned by the author. So, I don't know why impatient people read what they don't like and complain endlessly.

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1 months ago
Replied to Gonzalo_Pereira_6949

So, you read without spending time? And I did mention character development, right? You should know that character development doesn't happen in a single chapter and so is the plot. If everything is wrapped up in 10 chs or so, what's the point of writing a book? You are reading Harry Potter Book-1 and asking how would Voldemort die.

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4 months ago
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Now, this is a great story that doesn't focus on Harry, but the world and war before his birth. Ruthless MC, but he is sane enough to plot his moves. And he isn't afraid to flex his power. OP MC. And harem, Lily Evans, hope you focus on her a bit. Then, Bellatrix's character is just great so far.

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